VN Ren'Py Where Love Leads Us [Ch.7] [JJsworld]

[SeveredRealms]

I was not sent here by the dev. I came here on my own. I am not affiliated with him or a supporter of his. I just don't jump to conclusion and flip out like most people on this forum. I do however write my own stories and also work with a few other devs on their stories proof reading or advising. I have also advised JJ on this scene. I agree with much of what you are all saying but I can also see the scene leading into a confrontation. Should she did what she was doing. No she should not have and that does put her in a questionable light and he has been advised of that and that the scene should be reworked. With that said I'm out of the conversation and let you all freak out and squabble back and forth of whats right or wrong. Give the dev a chance and maybe he will correct it or maybe due to you all carrying on he will say the hell with it like other devs and walk away. Which do you prefer a fixed story or driving the dev off?

 

[El Tanque]

I was not sent here by the dev. I came here on my own. I am not affiliated with him or a supporter of his. I just don't jump to conclusion and flip out like most people on this forum. I do however write my own stories and also work with a few other devs on their stories proof reading or advising. I have also advised JJ on this scene. I agree with much of what you are all saying but I can also see the scene leading into a confrontation. Should she did what she was doing. No she should not have and that does put her in a questionable light and he has been advised of that and that the scene should be reworked. With that said I'm out of the conversation and let you all freak out and squabble back and forth of whats right or wrong. Give the dev a chance and maybe he will correct it or maybe due to you all carrying on he will say the hell with it like other devs and walk away. Which do you prefer a fixed story or driving the dev off?

I can respect that, your position is quite noble. In my comment I advised to delete and not just change that scene, but that will depend entirely on the dev.
I do recognize that there are many extremist people here.

 

[JJsworld]

The reason the Dev hasn't responded is NOT because he is scared to face anyone. The Dev works a full time job and does this as a hobby. I did that scene as a build up to the Climax in the first part. The resolution to the situation that is caused by the situation was set up to be the introduction of another favorable chacter to be introduced in a chapter a few from where it is. For anyone who thinks this is a NTR story they are wrong. Way wrong. This scene is a bit extreme but as I said. It is a build up to the resolution to be introduced in or around chapter 4 or 5.

I have took it into consideration and will rework and phase out the 2 pics. I do not like people who try to put a tag on my stuff and ask them to STOP.

 

[JJsworld]

Did the change as I said.
Waiting on the Mods to finalize it. There was a few script changes.

Redownload or not up to you, the readers.

 

[preskerd]

Btw this is original scene's screenshot if anybody wonders what we talk about. And yes it's this bad. The girl who publicly mastubates that bbc guy and fantasize about him while bbc guy was watching her fingering her naked pussy is mc's gf and future wife. And developer still didn't make any explanation about the reason for this scene and his build up and how he planned to redeem the gf after what she did despite he deleted the masturbation.There should be nothing prevent him explaining this scene since he already deleted it. Not a single explanation what so ever about his 'muh this is not ntr! this is a build up!'

 

[bruce555]

Did the change as I said.
Waiting on the Mods to finalize it. There was a few script changes.

Redownload or not up to you, the readers.

While you're at it, remove the professor and replace it with a hot ebony milf, lol it works !

 

[Riggnarock]

Well i personaly hope that the v1.1 update will remove the fingering scene and instaid her taking a picture of him with a student instaid, to be used for her soon to be hubby's (or not) lawyer career.
even if its for the sake of her showing she's interested in watching others (hubby with another girl) this is not da way to do it, for example she can show interest in that when we meet our twin brother.
now she has no ace to use against that douche now and it will no doubt make our lawyer carreer none existant seeing the teacher no doubt will use the fact that she fingered herself against her by telling us, or blackmail her with it

aside from that i do enjoy that the main protanogist of the previous game and this one will meet up. with all the anime related names in these two stories, maybe this will end with a Double Dragon Ending.

 

[VeniXYZ]

This is what some scenes make me think what the dev want as a result :

MC: Baby when i was away with your sister i fuck my manager secretary.
GF: You did what...Ohhh well no problem my love because the other day at the park i lust for my professor dick
us he fuck his student hard, so you can say that we are even hihi.
GF: And by the way i don't have a problem to see you fuck other girl's and maybe i will be a part too.
MC: Oh baby i love you so much.
GF: I love you too honey..
And they lived well and happily as they fuck everyone in there way... lol the END..

 

[JJsworld]

Look Some of you think You know where the scene came from and speculate. Yes the scene was suggested by another reader via email. Severed actually got an advance copy to the story as he is in the discord so . I have a few in there that I run ideas by from time to time. Though there are a few who still live in thier mom's basement So yeah he and a few others talked about it a day or so before it was posted here .Some of you should know what your talking about before you talk about it. If you want to follow the story That is fine, and if you Don't that is fine also, but you need to let it go. This is not a NTR like a few of you repeatidly say it is. If that is your opinion so be it. Quit saying it in the thread.

 

[VeniXYZ]

Come on guys, let's let it go, we can't change the past anyway.

I too will want some explanation to understand better his thinking as to why he put that scene and make THE main girl LOOK like a thirsty dick slut (that for that moment forget that she is in love with the MC) and just get naked and start to masturbating to the professor as he fucking his student.
Yes the bad part was that she get naked at a public place and start to masturbating (as she was home and watch some porn at the TV) but the worse part was that she imaginary cheer for him to fuck that student slut harder.
And that they saw her and plot to how he will get her.

But if the dev don't want to say what was the reason that make him to create that scene and what it would aim for the future and what would be the outcome of that we can't do anything about it.
He could easily say something like :
After all that and when the MC learns what happen he will collect evidence and have his first big job as lawyer and put him to jail (and maybe Brooke will be more open to share MC with other girls because she realized that she like to watch).
Or the MC brother will get a job from Mr.Lee to take out of the way the professor that he uses his position and blackmail girls for sex at the university that he (Mr.Lee) is financing. for example..

But anyway, the scene has now changed and the only thing we can do is to
1) We keep playing and trust the Dev (hoping for the best to not see a repetition like that in the future).
2) Leave it and find another game.

No need to make any more fuss about it.

 

[SeveredRealms]

And it still does. The dev made a mistake and released it like this then saw the results when he came home from work. He didn't ignore anyone he was at his day job. He spent half the night fixing it and re-releasing it yet some people on this forum are utter man childs and would rather bury someone for a mistake that's been corrected then let it go.

Man this game had potential Sad to see it destroyed by Ntr Good luck

 

[bruce555]

MC gets BBC in harem game doesn't seem like a mistake...seems done on purpose IMO.

 

[Sngo]

And it still does. The dev made a mistake and released it like this then saw the results when he came home from work. He didn't ignore anyone he was at his day job. He spent half the night fixing it and re-releasing it yet some people on this forum are utter man childs and would rather bury someone for a mistake that's been corrected then let it go.

Sorry man but there are mistakes and mistakes. Specialy how people tacle the mistakes made and JJ misses every One of it by far.
The scene is only half fixed, the lack of good reasoning for that cuck scene was non existant, you still have the BBC "lover" as your wife and yeah that is not wife material .
And for him it was just a bit Extreme, having MC wife creaming for the BBC fucking the other even chearing on. Next time what will people get as only a bit "Extreme" the wife dreaming the BBC fucking her?

For me its done and buried, cant ever trust him to stay away from that fetishes now.

Anything more about this If you want we can talk about it trough pm, the posts here Will just keep being deleted to make people go blind Into the game and be surprise with the opposite of what were expecting.

 

[FatGiant]

If anyone wants the Original Chapter 2, with the scene, hit me up on the PM's.

Peace

 

[SeveredRealms]

Why would anyone want the original? All I see right now is a bunch of social media bully's that can't let something go till they run it into the ground. Come on kids schools out time to go home and stop picking on someone's mistakes. heaven forbid they pick on yours.

 

[bruce555]

Why would anyone want the original? All I see right now is a bunch of social media bully's that can't let something go till they run it into the ground. Come on kids schools out time to go home and stop picking on someone's mistakes. heaven forbid they pick on yours.

I have the most respect for you and you know it! But in a harem game inserting a unavoidable BBC scene seems wrong to me...harem means only one dick (MC) Sorry...I thought you were a different person...anyway good life!

 

[the66]

here is my unofficial android port of Where Love Leads Us 2 v2.0.

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[FatGiant]

Why would anyone want the original? All I see right now is a bunch of social media bully's that can't let something go till they run it into the ground. Come on kids schools out time to go home and stop picking on someone's mistakes. heaven forbid they pick on yours.

For comparison. To understand what was whitewashed here.

That's all.

Peace

 

[Mommysbuttslut]

I have the most respect for you and you know it! But in a harem game inserting a unavoidable BBC scene seems wrong to me...harem means only one dick (MC) Sorry...I thought you were a different person...anyway good life!

And now that you've gotten your way don't you think it's time to drop it? This thread has long since passed the point of constructive criticism on this point, and has even been purged already for that reason. Let it go, either wait until chapter 3 and we can see if maybe there's some narrative or build up that explains what the dev was planning, or just drop the game altogether. Continuing to kick this can down the road isn't gonna help any of us or the dev.

 

[deimos25]

I'm not trying to dev bash and I know a lot of people want the end scene topic to be dropped, but I also agree with a lot of people that the dev should be a bit more transparent regarding the scene, as it was in extreme bad taste tbh(if they want to keep a large portion of the player base, but maybe they just don't care...idk). I don't think what has been said is a very good explanation, and to end the chapter on that kind of note, was just bad.

Other than that I have another complaint about a scene that I haven't seen mentioned. While its probably minor, the scene with Mr. Lee and the office meeting, he gets a front row seat to see underneath both girls skirts.... yeah ok...except both are going commando. Don't know if it was just to be fanservice-y- for the reader and you could maybe make the argument that Brianna isn't a LI...but Rebekah is... I'd rather just not have scenes like this...so that's 2 strikes for me...I'll still try the next update, hope the dev maybe thinks twice, and decides not to do so, before inserting scenes like this going forward.


(I just played both parts but from the 1st chapter there was also the see-thru bikini Rebekah wore at the school pool with the douche rich daddy's boy still around. It's more minor of an issue than the other scene as it never shows that he has line of sight, so I just let it slide ...but come on. )