A screenwriter... heh... so, you take someone else's writing and convert it into a television/movie draft... so kind of like an 'inker' in the comic book industry... which means we'd call you a "tracer".
While I am certainly not perfect in my prose and my storytelling and may not ring your bell, it doesn't mean that I am not a writer... or lack talent. I have many writing accolades under my belt in both the comic book industry and through the sale of my novels... basically, you just don't like my style or storytelling, doesn't mean I need to change my writing or prose... just means that you don't like it.
Fair enough... but there is a BIG difference from being a world builder and storyteller than being a screenwriter (whose job is to boil shit down to its lowest denominator to save screen time)... ah... but, hey, it's all good, like you I have tenure too (28 years of it).
Again, it is a difference in prose and likely tenure (mine in the comic industry which is all exclamation and over-the-top situations) and despite your opinion, I think I'll do okay... I make money, pay my bills with my writing jobs; both with my game work and my other writing jobs.
It just isn't your thing or style... it's all good.
No harm, no foul...
But your 'constructive criticism' could use some 'work' if you feel the need to try and belittle a person in your first comment here... well, in my opinion, it tells me you are just a pompous, overstuffed, asshole who feels that they need to put other's abilities down so that you can feel important and beat your chest and ego...
So, thank you for your opinion... now go and play with yourself, because with the kind of criticism you offer, that is about all you'll ever be able to do... play with yourself.
Bye, Bye!!!! Thanks for playing!!