Ok, so I've finally downloaded and started playing the game (I just finished chapter 2).
The start of chapter 2 made me sad and angry. I don't really like that kind of thing.
So far in the dialogues I've noticed a few cases of incorrect word usage and misplaced commas, but that's really something I expect will be dealt with in the polishing stage towards the end of development (and being my first play through I didn't really want to stop and note down each instance).
So far there's been good and bad (mainly from a personal preference stand-point).
The coin toss of what direction to go in, in chapter 1 was a bit frustrating (or would have been without rollback).
The story so far is good (I like a good story in these games, especially when it's supposed to be a VN), apart from that part in chapter 1 that I dislike, which is a personal preference thing
Time to continue.