VN Ren'Py Completed Wicked Choices: Book One [Remastered v1.0.1] [ASLPro3D]

[RogueFOXHOUND]

seriously, to any1 who hasn't tried it, DON"T. this game is BAD. it pushes its theme is CHOICE but you choose NOTHING. things are forced and set in stone no matter what. breakdown: TOO MUCH GAY CONTENT, 2 protags, 1 is already in love and gay. story is mostly about her. male mc, forced to abstain from sex to avoid being evil=no sex, male mc has worst future scenarios, wife works late (cheating), non-sexual/humilition blackmail, (sis-in-law) NTR, (neice) = worthless non existant choices = player has no fun, others do, he just watches, most predictable and poplular option lynara x antichrist happy end romance not possible = garbage. sorry, just being honest. 3rd chapter in and i have lost any interest. even if dev had plans to hook up the protags later it's stupid to ram so much lez love down our throats and think players still be in the mindset for this later. i now HATE lynara's character. on a side note just because i felt someone needed to say it for a long time: is it just me or is almost all patreon games who advertise good clean but dirty fun erotic games just charge people for donations pretending it's a sex game and throw thousands of bj's and handjobs in instead to shut people up with the false promise of real/better scenes in the future with more donations? the dictionary seems to agree with me at least that it's not sex unless the penis ENTERS the vagina. it's also great how they block out all but patrons who want to post an idea or critique to produce a better game so they filter out anything but sycophantic praises.

 

[Palanto]

seriously, to any1 who hasn't tried it, DON"T. this game is BAD. it pushes its theme is CHOICE but you choose NOTHING. things are forced and set in stone no matter what. breakdown: TOO MUCH GAY CONTENT, 2 protags, 1 is already in love and gay. story is mostly about her. male mc, forced to abstain from sex to avoid being evil=no sex, male mc has worst future scenarios, wife works late (cheating), non-sexual/humilition blackmail, (sis-in-law) NTR, (neice) = worthless non existant choices = player has no fun, others do, he just watches, most predictable and poplular option lynara x antichrist happy end romance not possible = garbage. sorry, just being honest. 3rd chapter in and i have lost any interest. even if dev had plans to hook up the protags later it's stupid to ram so much lez love down our throats and think players still be in the mindset for this later. i now HATE lynara's character. on a side note just because i felt someone needed to say it for a long time: is it just me or is almost all patreon games who advertise good clean but dirty fun erotic games just charge people for donations pretending it's a sex game and throw thousands of bj's and handjobs in instead to shut people up with the false promise of real/better scenes in the future with more donations? the dictionary seems to agree with me at least that it's not sex unless the penis ENTERS the vagina. it's also great how they block out all but patrons who want to post an idea or critique to produce a better game so they filter out anything but sycophantic praises.

We block all but patrons? X_x Huh? I'm not a patron of @ASLPro3D and I post something on the patreon page almost every day.... X_x I don't know where you get your ideas from.... And no there is no "Developer Team Mode" on patreon, I can't see the 1$, 5$, 10$, 20$ and 30$ patron posts either... but that doesn't mean you can't comment the openly available postings like the Character sheets and so on....
Or do you perhaps mean the "Community" part? That's something entirely different and not all of the patreon page...

Alright I get it, you don't like gay people, that's alright so our game is definitely not for you! And about your "end game predictions" well you're wrong in almost every case, but hey, you tried.
And if you would have informed yourself before posting that comment you'd know that I joined @ASLPro3D just with chapter 3. So yeah, the changes didn't have much influence before because of limited programming knowledge and most of it is still an introduction to the real game that's going to come in due time.
The game is not "mostly" about Lynara, it is mostly about the male mc. It's just that Lynara had more playtime for now because of story development reasons.
Btw. if you can't read, then it's not our problem, since the lesbian tag is pretty much visible up there on top of this thread and in the "genre" spoiler....
But thanks for your "constructive criticism" at least now I know if I ever want to make a game for you I'll just add a penis to a vagina then you're happy :kissingheart:

tldr: Thanks for your constructive criticism, if we ever get bored we'll create a penis that enters a vagina just for you :kissingheart:

 

[constantine]

"the dictionary seems to agree with me at least that it's not sex unless the penis ENTERS the vagina" Oh boy. So anal sex isn't really sex? @

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doesn't seem to know that different kinds of sex exist, not just vaginal sex, which is how the dictionary usually defines sex as. Anal sex and oral sex are defined separately, but that doesn't mean they aren't also sex. I mean, it's called anal sex for crying out loud!

 

[ASLPro3D]

seriously, to any1 who hasn't tried it, DON"T. this game is BAD. it pushes its theme is CHOICE but you choose NOTHING. things are forced and set in stone no matter what. breakdown: TOO MUCH GAY CONTENT, 2 protags, 1 is already in love and gay. story is mostly about her. male mc, forced to abstain from sex to avoid being evil=no sex, male mc has worst future scenarios, wife works late (cheating), non-sexual/humilition blackmail, (sis-in-law) NTR, (neice) = worthless non existant choices = player has no fun, others do, he just watches, most predictable and poplular option lynara x antichrist happy end romance not possible = garbage. sorry, just being honest. 3rd chapter in and i have lost any interest. even if dev had plans to hook up the protags later it's stupid to ram so much lez love down our throats and think players still be in the mindset for this later. i now HATE lynara's character. on a side note just because i felt someone needed to say it for a long time: is it just me or is almost all patreon games who advertise good clean but dirty fun erotic games just charge people for donations pretending it's a sex game and throw thousands of bj's and handjobs in instead to shut people up with the false promise of real/better scenes in the future with more donations? the dictionary seems to agree with me at least that it's not sex unless the penis ENTERS the vagina. it's also great how they block out all but patrons who want to post an idea or critique to produce a better game so they filter out anything but sycophantic praises.

First of all, there are choices... just because they are choices that you don't like, doesn't mean that there aren't choices.
Next, your use of the term "gay" is offensive and the male MC has never demonstrated "homosexual" tendencies once... yes, there has been "Lesbian" scenes and quite a bit of it... but boo hoo for you, last I checked men happen to enjoy watching two women going at it with each other... and hell, my story, my rules...

Last I checked, I've never seen you submit anything... in fact, come to think of it, you've never commented on anything till this very moment... you've never contributed ANYTHING in this community till this very moment, which has me believing that you are using a cloned account you created for the purpose of trolling this game... which is flattering!!

You don't like the game, but let me be perfectly clear about something Mr. Troll, there is ONLY been one person that has ever been blocked from our Patreon page by myself and that is from an individual who pledged, took the product and asked for a refund...

Also, I have NEVER EVER blocked out patrons who want to post ideas or critiqued our work... but hey, you've turned your complaint about my game into a crusade against Patreon... which I think is kind if funny, considering that you've never contributed ANYTHING here on a free site, except for petty bitching and whining, Mr. Troll... kind of really makes you look... well... petty and your opinion somewhat insignificant in the scheme of things.

As for your dictionary description... no where in the dictionary does it state that it needs to SHOW the penis in the vagina. The fact that it doesn't show that it is, doesn't negate the act of it being sex... moron. But for the sake of clarification, I don't need to do "IN YOUR FACE" pussy and dick shots... there's plenty of that out here if that helps your little pee-pee explode in pleasure if you want it.

I know my artistic limitations, I know the limitations of the genital props that I use in Poser and, as such, I choose to avoid putting myself in a situation of embarrassing mesh breaks, hours of failed post worked twat shots and decided to let my, much better skilled writing ability, cover up for my failings... rather than produce a near exploding, mesh broken pussy prop that is done horrendously poor just for the sake of a person who lacks imagination to FAP off too.

So you don't like my game... boo hoo... didn't see it cost you anything. Didn't see you step up or donate.... not even a valid suggestion or anything... you pissed and moaned like a spoiled child pointing at issues that you, alone, have trouble with without providing any useful ideas or anything... your first and only post on this website was to rant, bitch, moan and complain...

...so tell me... what makes you think I care about what you have to say?

Oh... that's right.

I don't.

Go play somewhere else... you got your rant in. Now scoot... have fun... wish you the best.

Don't let the door hit you in the ass!

Bye-bye now!

 

[X_Alascato]

First of all, there are choices... just because they are choices that you don't like, doesn't mean that there aren't choices.
Next, your use of the term "gay" is offensive and the male MC has never demonstrated "homosexual" tendencies once... yes, there has been "Lesbian" scenes and quite a bit of it... but boo hoo for you, last I checked men happen to enjoy watching two women going at it with each other... and hell, my story, my rules...

Last I checked, I've never seen you submit anything... in fact, come to think of it, you've never commented on anything till this very moment... you've never contributed ANYTHING in this community till this very moment, which has me believing that you are using a cloned account you created for the purpose of trolling this game... which is flattering!!

You don't like the game, but let me be perfectly clear about something Mr. Troll, there is ONLY been one person that has ever been blocked from our Patreon page by myself and that is from an individual who pledged, took the product and asked for a refund...

Also, I have NEVER EVER blocked out patrons who want to post ideas or critiqued our work... but hey, you've turned your complaint about my game into a crusade against Patreon... which I think is kind if funny, considering that you've never contributed ANYTHING here on a free site, except for petty bitching and whining, Mr. Troll... kind of really makes you look... well... petty and your opinion somewhat insignificant in the scheme of things.

As for your dictionary description... no where in the dictionary does it state that it needs to SHOW the penis in the vagina. The fact that it doesn't show that it is, doesn't negate the act of it being sex... moron. But for the sake of clarification, I don't need to do "IN YOUR FACE" pussy and dick shots... there's plenty of that out here if that helps your little pee-pee explode in pleasure if you want it.

I know my artistic limitations, I know the limitations of the genital props that I use in Poser and, as such, I choose to avoid putting myself in a situation of embarrassing mesh breaks, hours of failed post worked twat shots and decided to let my, much better skilled writing ability, cover up for my failings... rather than produce a near exploding, mesh broken pussy prop that is done horrendously poor just for the sake of a person who lacks imagination to FAP off too.

So you don't like my game... boo hoo... didn't see it cost you anything. Didn't see you step up or donate.... not even a valid suggestion or anything... you pissed and moaned like a spoiled child pointing at issues that you, alone, have trouble with without providing any useful ideas or anything... your first and only post on this website was to rant, bitch, moan and complain...

...so tell me... what makes you think I care about what you have to say?

Oh... that's right.

I don't.

Go play somewhere else... you got your rant in. Now scoot... have fun... wish you the best.

Don't let the door hit you in the ass!

Bye-bye now!

DAMN!!!!! love u.
played the game yesterday and loved the sex scene with the niece gonna continue in the fantasy world.
See ya

 

[ASLPro3D]

DAMN!!!!! love u.
played the game yesterday and loved the sex scene with the niece gonna continue in the fantasy world.
See ya

Love ya too @Alascato and glad to hear that you are enjoying the game!! Have fun in the fantasy world!!

 

[ASLPro3D]

HEY!
Mr. Troll​

PPPPBBBBBTTTTTT!!!
~Love Syrina​

 

[Nasi Bungkus]

You're welcome, but will be honest, if not for @Palanto Games figuring out how to do it, it might not have been possible! So, he gets all of the credit (and blame)!

please any walkthrough, sir

 

[UncleVT]

please any walkthrough, sir

Well, I wanted to say you wouldn't really "NEED" a walkthrough but just as I was writing that I thought of the different outcomes you can get/create in each chapter and redid this post.....

There is a walkthrough, but it's not available here on f95zone....

So all I can really say, until ASLPro3D decides if he wants to share it here, is that you probably best save at the beginning of each chapter and that you try to find the differences inside the chapters...

For now it is "still" possible to get every outcome in every chapter whatever you chose in the previous ones... this is going to change slowly and there are "some" slight differences already in chapter 4 depending on something you did in chapter 1 So yeah... it starts to get complicated lol

 

[RogueFOXHOUND]

firstly, probably a waste of time replying since you and your friends closely connected to your project will jump on my back, but i dont like being attacked when i was only giving the opinion i have a right to. to the first who responded, and pecked at my points provided no real retort to"put me in my place" other than i was "wrong". and putting words in my mouth like the "dev" about hating gay people is unappreciated. i'm not an idiot who splits hairs about using a term like "gay" to describe when no insult is followed. nor i mentioned and hatred for those that are. which are just as abundant if not more who are straight. the game does tag other fetishes but it DOES pander to lesbian players not to all like what is apparently in other tags. and to force others with no way to skip parts which are offensive to those who are not "gay" is the point i was making. and to say there is too much and other tags seemed to be included a lot less in emphasis, would NOT be my poor observation. again to first replyer, you act with such anger like i insulted your mother or something. was such hostillity justfied by you? it seems more personal than you disagreeing with anothers opinion/observation. as for "dev", unfortunately, there is no way to leave any helpful critiqes on your patreon page and if there were, i now see how it would have gone regardless of how i said it. after all, as you said, you don't give a shit what anyone thinks. to not indulge too much what hostilliy has already returned, and as i'm not really interested in any viscious back and forth with you or your friends.


i do apologize for my crude description though. i was a bit heated and not mindful of it. i too like a good story with erotic type games. and the intimacy formed between characters. but when you are pitching an erotic game, especially to straight male players, it is not 'hot' to see mostly male parts in bj's or the like and such interaction is usually the opposite of intimate, quick dirty and cheap, while lacking a 'hot' factor, for male and female players alike. but this is generalized obervation and was stated. not meant as a slam to the developer. but like the rest of my observations i will not apologize for, because aside from personal tastes which ARE different, there does seem to be an overuse of lesbian content unavoidable, does not allow for the character to choose her own way cutting mich off and too much attention paid to her in particular.

perhaps it could have been worded in a more..kinder way, that too i should appologize for but given the response, i am reluctant especially the dev, i believe you called me 'immature'? reevaluating it, do you feel your response was at all better? and i do not believe i said that the male mc was involved in any such homosexual scene. i believe i said the other protag lynara was. and the excuses from first poster, "story development reasons" seem weak at best to something i pointed out with validity. she does seem to get more time in scenes than the male. true it's early still in development, but folks who play will think this based on what the have seen already, right? it would be nice to think that a players character might get more face time, or that if straight players grew an attachment to lynara's character, to have an open possibility for a nice romance non corrupt ending for their character, yes? but even with the game unfinished, the seems no way that will happen given that she is not straight no matter what. some might feel it a flaw given how much attention is paid to her in the story to have that be iron clad. most would would predict 2 important main characters would get together, no? though i think anything i say friendly or no is waste as i will will be assaulted no matter how friendly a critique. so i only wanted to reply in my own defense. take it as a differing opinion and move on.

 

[ASLPro3D]

Do you not see the duplicity in your comments, @RogueFOXHOUND ... I mean, seriously.

Out of your previous post, at what point did you feel that you were providing "helpful critiqes" as you put it?

You didn't... you provided an opinion and a rant, nothing more... and, seriously, you happen to be in a minority to your way of thinking... which you are free to post your opinion all you want, just like people are free to return with an opinion of their own, which we surely have.

Now, for your "you are pitching an erotic game" exactly, damn straight I've been... perhaps you better go and look at the definition of what "erotic" means and compare it to the word "porn" as anyone who ever stayed up late at night to secretly watch skinEmax (Cinemax) while their parents were asleep in bed can tell you the difference between an "erotic" movie from a "porn" movie... so you basically just nullified your previous bitch on your own, with no help from me.

Nice job!

I don't need an apology from you, you said what you came to say and said it... just don't expect one from me, as I replied with the way I felt, plain and simple, I am not going to blow sunshine and rainbows and paint a smile on my face... I answered in the manner I was spoken to, just as I am doing now.

Nor do I have to make a game that you enjoy. You don't support me. You haven't given anything to me but an opinion. You don't like the game, don't support it... it's as easy as that. I don't exist for you to create a game that you can jerk your pud off to... I owe you nothing.

I am doing what I enjoy doing, creating a story and game that I WANT TO MAKE and if people enjoy it, GREAT, if they choose to sponsor it and me, GREAT... if they don't that is fine too... I am not doing what I am doing to make anyone but MYSELF happy... not to get a pat on my back or get my dick virtually sucked.

You aren't a customer... it would be one thing if you were, but you aren't.... and even then, I've made NO PROMISE to anyone other than I would stick to my guns and produce the story as it was designed and that I wouldn't violate that dedication by allowing 3rd Party individuals to distract me away from that promise and turn my game into something that it was never meant to be... read my past posts, it states this plainly.

I will take suggestions, I will weigh those suggestions against my plans and if they can be managed, they will be instituted... but I sure aren't going to take a suggestion that is lobed at me like a fragmentation grenade and sit with a smile on my face while you peddle your crap.

Grow up and know your place!

For here... in this thread... you have none.

Now, if you'll excuse me... I actually have work to do and customers to attend to... I trust you can see yourself out.

 

[ASLPro3D]

please any walkthrough, sir

I am sorry @Jancoki, currently the only walkthrough that we have available to the game is for our paying patrons... if someone in the community here would like to create and share one, that is great and we have no problem with it... but we won't be offering ours for free right now.

Hope you can understand.

 

[Nasi Bungkus]

I am sorry @Jancoki, currently the only walkthrough that we have available to the game is for our paying patrons... if someone in the community here would like to create and share one, that is great and we have no problem with it... but we won't be offering ours for free right now.

Hope you can understand.

ok thank you, forgive me for having asked for more

 

[ASLPro3D]

ok thank you, forgive me for having asked for more

It's no problem, @Jancoki, there's no harm in asking.

 

[kxjoh32]

OK,
I had some time to read/play through a few of the chapters and i have to tell you that it is Soooo nice being able to read someones writing without having to go back and forth trying to figure out what they tried to say due to the broken language/google translator.
The drawings are phenomenal. The story line is superb. I couldn't stop reading lol. Had to see what happens next. Oh and i am so glad it has a lot of save space so i can go back and try a different route and see where it lands me. Good,bad and the ugly/evil.
I really liked the way the story line is written kinda reminds me of the Highlander on how it would bounce to a different time line. But the bouncing in this story happens after an event which makes it so much easier to follow. Highlander would some times "just sometimes. Not always" confuse the hell out of me especially after a lil 4:20 smokey smokey time *college days* ;p
When i decided to give this a try i was somewhat concerned with this saying, the Antichrist. But the way it was explained in the story was perfect. I almost hear in the back ground, according to ancient astronaut theorists. But that can open up a whole can of worms with some people so i shall not go there
In my opinion this game is very original and i hope to see more like it.

 

[ASLPro3D]

OK,
I had some time to read/play through a few of the chapters and i have to tell you that it is Soooo nice being able to read someones writing without having to go back and forth trying to figure out what they tried to say due to the broken language/google translator.
The drawings are phenomenal. The story line is superb. I couldn't stop reading lol. Had to see what happens next. Oh and i am so glad it has a lot of save space so i can go back and try a different route and see where it lands me. Good,bad and the ugly/evil.
I really liked the way the story line is written kinda reminds me of the Highlander on how it would bounce to a different time line. But the bouncing in this story happens after an event which makes it so much easier to follow. Highlander would some times "just sometimes. Not always" confuse the hell out of me especially after a lil 4:20 smokey smokey time *college days* :heartcoveredeyes:
When i decided to give this a try i was somewhat concerned with this saying, the Antichrist. But the way it was explained in the story was perfect. I almost hear in the back ground, according to ancient astronaut theorists. But that can open up a whole can of worms with some people so i shall not go there
In my opinion this game is very original and i hope to see more like it.

Thank you so much @kxjoh32 we are glad to hear that you decided to give it a shot and are enjoying it! I was a big fan of the Highlander series as well... but yes, they could get a bit confusing at times and at times be pretty jarring in their shifting to different time periods.

It was important to us, to create a unique story that challenged people's perceptions of an "antichrist" and allowed the players to determine what kind of one they want to be... and do so while being interesting, unique and epic.

Honestly, this isn't even one of my best stories, I just used one to see if there was a value to trying to do a game or not... thankfully, there seems to be and there is still lots more to be revealed as the game progresses story wise that I think people will enjoy and be absorbed in.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts and your interest!!

 

[dav121]

seriously, to any1 who hasn't tried it, DON"T. this game is BAD. it pushes its theme is CHOICE but you choose NOTHING. things are forced and set in stone no matter what. breakdown: TOO MUCH GAY CONTENT, 2 protags, 1 is already in love and gay. story is mostly about her. male mc, forced to abstain from sex to avoid being evil=no sex, male mc has worst future scenarios, wife works late (cheating), non-sexual/humilition blackmail, (sis-in-law) NTR, (neice) = worthless non existant choices = player has no fun, others do, he just watches, most predictable and poplular option lynara x antichrist happy end romance not possible = garbage. sorry, just being honest. 3rd chapter in and i have lost any interest. even if dev had plans to hook up the protags later it's stupid to ram so much lez love down our throats and think players still be in the mindset for this later. i now HATE lynara's character. on a side note just because i felt someone needed to say it for a long time: is it just me or is almost all patreon games who advertise good clean but dirty fun erotic games just charge people for donations pretending it's a sex game and throw thousands of bj's and handjobs in instead to shut people up with the false promise of real/better scenes in the future with more donations? the dictionary seems to agree with me at least that it's not sex unless the penis ENTERS the vagina. it's also great how they block out all but patrons who want to post an idea or critique to produce a better game so they filter out anything but sycophantic praises.

Dude, you haven't been on this site long, so I got to warn you that that gay stuff you hate and apparently fear, is a lot more prevalent than apparently you can handle.
So you might be better visiting the Westboro Baptist chuch site, they might be more accommodating towards your needs.

 

[Darth Sidious]

That tiny succubus is just the cutest thing :')

PS: Did Dev just enable Auto-Forward function here or was it always there?

 

[Darth Sidious]

seriously, to any1 who hasn't tried it, DON"T. this game is BAD. it pushes its theme is CHOICE but you choose NOTHING. things are forced and set in stone no matter what. breakdown: TOO MUCH GAY CONTENT, 2 protags, 1 is already in love and gay. story is mostly about her. male mc, forced to abstain from sex to avoid being evil=no sex, male mc has worst future scenarios, wife works late (cheating), non-sexual/humilition blackmail, (sis-in-law) NTR, (neice) = worthless non existant choices = player has no fun, others do, he just watches, most predictable and poplular option lynara x antichrist happy end romance not possible = garbage. sorry, just being honest. 3rd chapter in and i have lost any interest. even if dev had plans to hook up the protags later it's stupid to ram so much lez love down our throats and think players still be in the mindset for this later. i now HATE lynara's character. on a side note just because i felt someone needed to say it for a long time: is it just me or is almost all patreon games who advertise good clean but dirty fun erotic games just charge people for donations pretending it's a sex game and throw thousands of bj's and handjobs in instead to shut people up with the false promise of real/better scenes in the future with more donations? the dictionary seems to agree with me at least that it's not sex unless the penis ENTERS the vagina. it's also great how they block out all but patrons who want to post an idea or critique to produce a better game so they filter out anything but sycophantic praises.

I can sympathize, personally I do not enjoy gay stuff neither and there is this mass fascination with the anus that we just cannot understand. I usually just skip through anal and male-to-male gay scenes and head to the scenes that I do want to watch. You're right, it's not a proper sex if the penis doesn't enter the vagina. But I also think you're missing the point here, this game is about corruption and cheating so try not to be the only angel in hell, instead go on corrupted routes, you'll find more satisfaction there. I personally have played erotica a whole lot worse than this, trust me when I say this is one of the better games. Perhaps not that much choice oriented, but at least a story.

Dude, you haven't been on this site long, so I got to warn you that that gay stuff you hate and apparently fear, is a lot more prevalent than apparently you can handle.
So you might be better visiting the Westboro Baptist chuch site, they might be more accommodating towards your needs.

One can be an erogamer and hate gay content, I don't see the contradiction. No need to go to 'Westboro Baptist church' site and become a nun, just find games that suit your fantasy better, no?

 

[dav121]

.........One can be an erogamer and hate gay content, I don't see the contradiction. No need to go to 'Westboro Baptist church' site and become a nun, just find games that suit your fantasy better, no?

Perhaps, but his attack seemed a bit "full on" don't ya think?