MangoMeta

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so damaged goods is the writers fav game, while this one is the renderers? Why is it then that the renderer let the writer basically turn this game into a advertisement for the other? "yeah mate i'll help you make the game you want as well, but its nothing but a ad for my game roflmao"
 
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m4pII

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I'm certainly not against Easter eggs and advertising in the game.
But the protagonist's room looks creepy as fuck.

He's not 15 years old, is he?
 

HansDampf788

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That being said the more vague feedback is the less helpful it is.
I thought about listing what I specifically don't like about your game but then I thought why when there is no chance that my feedback can help you because as I said I don't like anything about this game besides the renders but ok you want details I give you details.

- the setup with the MC being the Dev of your other game is cringy and the dialog seems like it's only there so you can complain about your low number of patreons.
- didn't like the dream with the girls from your other game because I didn't play it and I'm not interested in playing it.
- the MC comes across like he never talked to a woman before I don't like these types of MCs.
- Kinsey already seems like a golddigger if you go the Burger route without knowing anything else about her.
- besides some flags set by decisions you have two stats being tracked (kind and perv) with kind clearly being the stat for Mia and perv being for Rachel and it seems that the player will already be pushed in a route with one of them depending on the choices in the first release.
- as a last but for me most important point the game is missing all the tags I normally look for.
 

yihman1

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I thought about listing what I specifically don't like about your game but then I thought why when there is no chance that my feedback can help you because as I said I don't like anything about this game besides the renders but ok you want details I give you details.

1- the setup with the MC being the Dev of your other game is cringy and the dialog seems like it's only there so you can complain about your low number of patreons.
2- didn't like the dream with the girls from your other game because I didn't play it and I'm not interested in playing it.
3- the MC comes across like he never talked to a woman before I don't like these types of MCs.
4- Kinsey already seems like a golddigger if you go the Burger route without knowing anything else about her.
5- besides some flags set by decisions you have two stats being tracked (kind and perv) with kind clearly being the stat for Mia and perv being for Rachel and it seems that the player will already be pushed in a route with one of them depending on the choices in the first release.
6- as a last but for me most important point the game is missing all the tags I normally look for.
That is much better feedback than you gave previously. It's concise and to the point. Good job. I'll hit what I can on it, I numerated your points.

1) In part it is meant to show that developers put a lot of heart into their games, and to show some of the sacrifices we make. There will always be some struggles along the way. It's like this with a lot of things, and not just game development. Pretty much almost everything people are passionate about. For every popular band out there that you know there are thousands of kids out there jamming in the garage in the middle of suburbia trying to make a good band. For every NBA star there is a thousand others out there shooting hoops in the ghetto. If you think someone being passionate about their dreams before they make it big is cringe... Well, that's a you problem not their problem and maybe you should think about that.

2) Okay, not everything is for everyone. Fair enough.

3) Many protagonists start off a bit shy, and nervous at first to show character growth over time, and to be more relatable to a lot of players. Believe it or not the vast majority of players of adult games are not out there smashing pussy like a rock star. Starting a little shy, and building up some confidence over time is a good character arc. It's like that for a reason.

4) You meant to tell me that there is gold diggers out there!? There are lots of women out there where money is important to them. They range from "Sugar Baby" to "Single Mother" to "Hoe". There is all kinds of women out there that money is important to. At least on some base level. The absolute quickest way to dry up some pussy is to be cheap and that's a fact.

5) There are points, and variables being tracked and decisions make differences yes.

6) It's still very early. Anal doesn't really come on the first date. More tags will be added later.
 

thehxr

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Okay, I was too excited to relive MSN but while playing WOS i kinda forgot that game! It's completely different plot but on same storypad which after playing the game reminded me "Oh! that's base story of MSN". being a game dev itself is a unique and risky idea and that too waking up on an update release day is heart throbbing. I didn't missed the dream sequence and being a player I could relate somehow of dreaming of game characters to real life. Renders fits perfect and are noice. also I laughed my breath-out on "MY AUNT IS YOUR NEIGHBOR. SHE'S ALSO MY AUNT":WaitWhat: and some other typos still as this is the start that does'nt matter much [you would definately correct those in next update so no need bragging] and thanks for the huge keyboard MC's hand looks like a dwarf there. I would really appreciate if we get option for renaming Mia and Aunt. overall character design is good.
looking forward for future updates.
 

thehxr

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We appreciate all sorts of feedback, and understand not every game is for every person.

That being said the more vague feedback is the less helpful it is. Feedback like this is the equivilent of going into a doctors office, and telling the doctor: "You know you are a great doctor, and I love the pictures on the wall... Things is though it hurts..." Doctor is like "Oh? What hurts?" Then you just walk out the door, and the doctor just stands there with a "WTF?" face.
Syk
 

Synnerai

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As I was reading the intro to the VN, the MC lamenting about low patrons and stuff... I guess the market is kinda oversaturated by now and if you don't put out something with breathtaking presentation, well, you get drowned in the ocean of mediocrity. Or you would need to have some previous projects that were popular back when there weren't so many new 0.1 versions of porn VNs popping up every other day. Wait, that sounded like I thought the game is "meh". No, it is good, actually. I don't know if I like the aunt's model, because she looks kinda... well, like she had plastic surgery done to her face and it looks somewhat trashy to me. I was expecting the milf be naturaly beautiful, graceful, and more dignified looking (like in MSN)...I really like milfs, but this one looks more like an aging bimbo that has done a lot of plastic surgery (you know, those old women who try to look younger, so they stretch the skin on their face and they look weird with constantly squinted eyes, giant cheekbones and botox lips) ...but ok, I wanted to focus on the niece anyway. I'm really glad you're working on something that's similar to MSN, so I can't complain. Btw, I actually named the mom in MSN Rachel, so it's a funny coincidence. Daugther was Ashley.

And about not being at the top? Well, the top earning devs on Patreon are milking it for all it's worth, delaying updates and not meeting the giant expectations that the backers and other fans put on them, and have a lot of toxicity around them anyway.

Edit: even though I gave her a custom name, she's still called "Mia" in the game. She's more cute, than I've initially thought, btw.
 
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SinAppeal

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I added a second poll for silver+ tiers on patreon.

This time you can vote for Kinsey's outfit.

Check it out :cool:

:love:
 
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