I really liked it so far. I look forward to future updates. I did notice some spelling/grammar typos and messaged them to you.
If you actually fix them for v 0.2 this makes you automatically better than other devs who never go back and fix their text mistakes. IMO better to fix them asap because as more updates are released the amount of time needed to fix them increases (assuming future updates have new some mistakes too) until maybe it becomes too much you'd rather just ignore that pile of work...
Also pretty awful that some writers are hired by the dev and nobody proofreads anything (no second opinion). Doesn't seem like $ well spent. And certain games will go months without updates and the writer will sit on their ass doing nothing when they could be productive and at least fix all past text errors (that they themselves wrote)
Some devs will claim they'll go back and fix everything before the final update of their game but I doubt it. Once the final update is released less fans will want to redownload the entire game again e.g. v 1.1 unless there's some quick patch or something
Ok rant over. Back on topic.
I really like Zoey's appearance and NTR doesn't bother me if you use type A, B or C or all of them.
I know it's early but as you develop the game and choices have an impact on unique scenes depending on the naughty or pure routes you plan to create; might be a good idea to create a walkthrough guide (inevitable that some fans will ask for one as the game grows larger)
If you actually fix them for v 0.2 this makes you automatically better than other devs who never go back and fix their text mistakes. IMO better to fix them asap because as more updates are released the amount of time needed to fix them increases (assuming future updates have new some mistakes too) until maybe it becomes too much you'd rather just ignore that pile of work...
Also pretty awful that some writers are hired by the dev and nobody proofreads anything (no second opinion). Doesn't seem like $ well spent. And certain games will go months without updates and the writer will sit on their ass doing nothing when they could be productive and at least fix all past text errors (that they themselves wrote)
Some devs will claim they'll go back and fix everything before the final update of their game but I doubt it. Once the final update is released less fans will want to redownload the entire game again e.g. v 1.1 unless there's some quick patch or something
Ok rant over. Back on topic.
I really like Zoey's appearance and NTR doesn't bother me if you use type A, B or C or all of them.
I know it's early but as you develop the game and choices have an impact on unique scenes depending on the naughty or pure routes you plan to create; might be a good idea to create a walkthrough guide (inevitable that some fans will ask for one as the game grows larger)