Unity A Long Journey [v0.8.1] [Marvellous Lunatic]

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Ozygator

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Just finished the game and it's pretty good. It's frustrating to see that Selene actually is just using the MC for her own ends. She really doesn't trust him, and he made a fatal mistake when her betrayal was first revealed. Instead of 'asking' her to not involve his family he should have clearly told her, and meant it, that if she involved his family he would stop trying to protect hjer or her sister, and they then become enemies that need to be 'taken care of' to ensure no one ever threatened them again.

During the gym scene, MC should have looked her straight in the eyes and said "you involve my family I will end you, period" so she understood. As it is, he seems like a weak target and basically everyone is taking advantage of him. I do hope the MC grows a pair of balls in later versions so it's clearly understood not to fuck with him, and you do so at your own peril. Like Pinky and the Brain, I hope they meet a 'nice' end, along with Selene since she's already proven she's on no one's side but her own. You make a mitake that's understandable, you deliberately betray trust twice? You're a lost cause at that point and shouldn't get any future chances to betray trust again. Once is a possible justificatioon, twice is a character pattern.
 
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Ozygator said:
Just finished the game and it's pretty good. It's frustrating to see that Selene actually is just using the MC for her own ends. She really doesn't trust him, and he made a fatal mistake when her betrayal was first revealed. Instead of 'asking' her to not involve his family he should have clearly told her, and meant it, that if she involved his family he would stop trying to protect hjer or her sister, and they then become enemies that need to be 'taken care of' to ensure no one ever threatened them again.

During the gym scene, MC should have looked her straight in the eyes and said "you involve my family I will end you, period" so she understood. As it is, he seems like a weak target and basically everyone is taking advantage of him. I do hope the MC grows a pair of balls in later versions so it's clearly understood not to fuck with him, and you do so at your own peril. Like Pinky and the Brain, I hope they meet a 'nice' end, along with Selene since she's already proven she's on no one's side but her own. You make a mitake that's understandable, you deliberately betray trust twice? You're a lost cause at that point and shouldn't get any future chances to betray trust again. Once is a possible justificatioon, twice is a character pattern.
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Yeah the MC is too soft and forgiving. I really hope we get the choice to get rid of Selene, being forced to be with her (as LI) is even more frustrating.
 
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Interesting that the story says a beautiful redhead, Selene is far from beautiful - and the skin textures really poor, if someone I knew had a skin like that I would send them to a doctor
I also agree that the MC could have easily stopped the bald creeps from trying to use his family by telling Selene to not mention them or else
 
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BGRW2020 said:
Interesting that the story says a beautiful redhead, Selene is far from beautiful - and the skin textures really poor, if someone I knew had a skin like that I would send them to a doctor
I also agree that the MC could have easily stopped the bald creeps from trying to use his family by telling Selene to not mention them or else
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Les goûts et les couleurs ne se discutent pas.
= You can't argue with taste.

The bald creeps new that his family is onboard from the get go, they don't need Selene to know that.
You argument is not sound I'm afraid.
 
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Ozygator said:
Just finished the game and it's pretty good. It's frustrating to see that Selene actually is just using the MC for her own ends. She really doesn't trust him, and he made a fatal mistake when her betrayal was first revealed. Instead of 'asking' her to not involve his family he should have clearly told her, and meant it, that if she involved his family he would stop trying to protect hjer or her sister, and they then become enemies that need to be 'taken care of' to ensure no one ever threatened them again.

During the gym scene, MC should have looked her straight in the eyes and said "you involve my family I will end you, period" so she understood. As it is, he seems like a weak target and basically everyone is taking advantage of him. I do hope the MC grows a pair of balls in later versions so it's clearly understood not to fuck with him, and you do so at your own peril. Like Pinky and the Brain, I hope they meet a 'nice' end, along with Selene since she's already proven she's on no one's side but her own. You make a mitake that's understandable, you deliberately betray trust twice? You're a lost cause at that point and shouldn't get any future chances to betray trust again. Once is a possible justificatioon, twice is a character pattern.
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Raziel_8 said:
Yeah the MC is too soft and forgiving. I really hope we get the choice to get rid of Selene, being forced to be with her (as LI) is even more frustrating.
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The other characters must be woken up, don't you think?
 
Raziel_8

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Ottoeight said:
:rolleyes::rolleyes:

So, you finally have a story instead of the same old MC-has-a-golden-dick-and-every-chick-worship-him and you don't like it?!?

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No i like the story, and neither do i have a problem that the MC doesn't have a magical dick.
I just don't like Selene as a LI.
 
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Aristos

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Tulrek said:
Les goûts et les couleurs ne se discutent pas.
= You can't argue with taste. There's no accounting for taste / Different strokes for different folks.
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In Spain we say: Para gustos, los colores (we mention the colours, just like in French)

That being said, even though everyone is entitled to say that Selene is ugly (I think they should get their eyes checked, but that's just my taste), what sounds really stupid is saying it looks like she has a skin disease. She does not, in any way or form, look like that.
 
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Ozygator said:
Just finished the game and it's pretty good. It's frustrating to see that Selene actually is just using the MC for her own ends. She really doesn't trust him, and he made a fatal mistake when her betrayal was first revealed. Instead of 'asking' her to not involve his family he should have clearly told her, and meant it, that if she involved his family he would stop trying to protect hjer or her sister, and they then become enemies that need to be 'taken care of' to ensure no one ever threatened them again.

During the gym scene, MC should have looked her straight in the eyes and said "you involve my family I will end you, period" so she understood. As it is, he seems like a weak target and basically everyone is taking advantage of him. I do hope the MC grows a pair of balls in later versions so it's clearly understood not to fuck with him, and you do so at your own peril. Like Pinky and the Brain, I hope they meet a 'nice' end, along with Selene since she's already proven she's on no one's side but her own. You make a mitake that's understandable, you deliberately betray trust twice? You're a lost cause at that point and shouldn't get any future chances to betray trust again. Once is a possible justificatioon, twice is a character pattern.
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This always happens in most porn avn, MCs just put up with whatever bs the girls do just because ... I don't know, boobs?
I doubt we will be seeing Selene facing any consequences or MC puting his foot down once and for all, its just not the way it usually goes but if it does happen I would be pleasantly surprised.
 
Tulrek

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holaje12 said:
This always happens in most porn avn, MCs just put up with whatever bs the girls do just because ... I don't know, boobs?
I doubt we will be seeing Selene facing any consequences or MC puting his foot down once and for all, its just not the way it usually goes but if it does happen I would be pleasantly surprised.
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I get what you are all saying...
But if the MC was an alpha male it would not have been targeted by these guys.
They need a nice and "weak" minded person to go alone their schemes.
A guy that will bend to their will: A regular good guy.
He doesn't put up with everything she does, he confronts her in the gym at lenght about what she did.
He cannot go farther because, if he doesn't keep her with him, he will be alone against these guys and he need all the help he can to save his friends/familly.
He believe that she will be toss out and he is not a murderer (regular guy with empathy).


So yeah I get that we all want to play a guy bigger than ourself (no pun intended or maybe yes).

It is a space opera story where we (I) tend to stress the story to find loopholes and inconsistencies.
"What would I have done ?"

But hey, it's like a book, you go with whatever the writer wrote. :)

On another topic, I get the reference of the slap in the face right at the first encounter ("I dare you to say what again.").

dare-i-dare-you.gif

Did you ?
 
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