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Ho da fuck do i view .RW images? I can't find program that works, i just want to see renders for now.
- Oct 26, 2017
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I had to rename them in jpg so i could view them and there were at least 250+ images in total. Anyway, big hassle for nothing, since most of them are character's facial reactions.
- Nov 25, 2018
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Is this game lustful and proud, or gluttonous and wrothful?
Asking for a slothful friend.
Asking for a slothful friend.
- Aug 28, 2019
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I don't think the writing is as bad as you claim but it could be improved in some areas.
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With that being said I am still looking forward to the next episode. Keep at it RedWhite
- Oct 23, 2016
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Seriously don't get some of the ultra-positive reviews and posts here.
This game looks good, but that's about all and it's worth nothing compared to the obvious problems.
And a big fuck you to this bullshit about this being the devs first try and going easy on him.
Does it help him if we lie and tell him everything is great? Will he get better if we as the players don't tell him what is wrong or where the problems are? Like hell it will and like hell he will.
The best way to help a fledgling dev is to be honest and try to give constructive criticism.
In this vein, do what I mentioned in my review. Get an editor, a better translator, perhaps even someone to write your story for you.
Allow skipping of unseen text, even if it's just to make replaying it less of a chore and make the intro skippable, same as in-game videos. I'm sure you had your reasons for doing them and they don't look bad , but that doesn't mean people should be forced to watch them each time they open the game.
This game looks good, but that's about all and it's worth nothing compared to the obvious problems.
And a big fuck you to this bullshit about this being the devs first try and going easy on him.
Does it help him if we lie and tell him everything is great? Will he get better if we as the players don't tell him what is wrong or where the problems are? Like hell it will and like hell he will.
The best way to help a fledgling dev is to be honest and try to give constructive criticism.
In this vein, do what I mentioned in my review. Get an editor, a better translator, perhaps even someone to write your story for you.
Allow skipping of unseen text, even if it's just to make replaying it less of a chore and make the intro skippable, same as in-game videos. I'm sure you had your reasons for doing them and they don't look bad , but that doesn't mean people should be forced to watch them each time they open the game.
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And for fuck's sake people, don't give games five stars based on how much you like the dev or what you hope they will be one day. You can always go and change a review if the game gets better, but giving five stars for a game with flaws as severe as this one takes the whole review system ad absurdum.
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This shit is BOOOOOOOORING!!!! Cute girls are nice and all, but long drawn out dialogue that goes nowhere is so lame ... Delete!
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I try to keep a positive outlook on things but with some constructive criticism. You did make a good suggestion with the skip button and unseen text. But I've never said anything about lying to the dev about issues and I also didn't say everything about the game was great. I guess some people (you included) expect a new developer to be near perfect his first try and I don't. I'm sticking by what I said and I expect you will do the same.
But if you truly want the developer to get an editor, translator, and story writer maybe you can come up with the cash to do so. A good writing staff doesn't just grow on trees because somebody has to pay for them. Lastly, let's try to stay civilized and keep the FUs down to a minimum and here I thought that's what PMs are for
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I don't think he was talking about you though. Very early on I already had a feeling with this thread would raise some red flags. Maybe it's just cheerleaders flying over from some other place, but the sudden influx of barely active users that suddenly flood the reviews with overly positive reviews was a bit weird to see. Especially for a first release of a new dev.I try to keep a positive outlook on things but with some constructive criticism. You did make a good suggestion with the skip button and unseen text. But I've never said anything about lying to the dev about issues and I also didn't say everything about the game was great. I guess some people (you included) expect a new developer to be near perfect his first try and I don't. I'm sticking by what I said and I expect you will do the same.
But if you truly want the developer to get an editor, translator, and story writer maybe you can come up with the cash to do so. A good writing staff doesn't just grow on trees because somebody has to pay for them. Lastly, let's try to stay civilized and keep the FUs down to a minimum and here I thought that's what PMs are for
In the end it kinda does the opposite of helping in more ways then one.
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Yes, moonwalker review is 5 stars, and when you read it, there is so many things he didn't like. "Problem", "cringy", "should be fixed", "amature style"... how can this be a 5 stars ?
- Mar 10, 2019
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If you dont get the reviews better double check the users who made them...
and what they wrote in there... it looks like the same story that happened with another game... Room for rent i think it was called (maybe i'm mistaken)
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TBH, I think what we see here is a manipulation based on nationality. If you look at the overly positive reviews (several of which have already been removed) and reactions in the thread here, it becomes quite clear that most of them were made by Turkish nationals, which coincidentally is the nationality of the dev.
Turks for the most are very patriotic and proud, so that is what I see as the reason for so many unqualified positive reactions made by people who haven't posted before or very rarely posted before, weird as it sounds.
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I try to keep a positive outlook on things but with some constructive criticism. You did make a good suggestion with the skip button and unseen text. But I've never said anything about lying to the dev about issues and I also didn't say everything about the game was great. I guess some people (you included) expect a new developer to be near perfect his first try and I don't. I'm sticking by what I said and I expect you will do the same.
But if you truly want the developer to get an editor, translator, and story writer maybe you can come up with the cash to do so. A good writing staff doesn't just grow on trees because somebody has to pay for them. Lastly, let's try to stay civilized and keep the FUs down to a minimum and here I thought that's what PMs are for
This is an adult forum, I'll write fuck as often as I want to.
My post wasn't directed at any single person, if it was, just like with this one, I would have quoted a specific post I was reacting to.
No, it was a reaction to the posts in the whole thread which were a) praising too much, without any logic or substance behind it and b) which were way too forgiving of the game's faults.
I don't expect a new dev to be perfect, but releasing a game in this state? It might be better not to do that, until you fix stuff like the translation.
By your logic does that mean new games have to be badly written, because the dev can't hire staff or that I should give a dev I don't know money for a game that I think is bad?
What about the many, many devs who manage to do better with their first try? Doesn't it make sense to judge a game based on what creators like Philly, Pinkcakes, Cheekygimp, Perverteer and so many others managed with their first attempt, instead of judging it by the standard "it's a new dev, so no matter how bad it is, don't write anything negative?"
The problem with the approach to cut a dev some slack is that it solves nothing. Yes, he or she might not get an emotional boo-boo, but the game stays as bad as it is, the dev will get no support and the game will probably never be finished.
Nowadays we take too much care not to hurt someone's feelings, but sometimes feelings HAVE to be hurt, so that someone can grow beyond his current level.
Mind you, I don't set out to hurt anyone's feelings, but I will write what I think needs to be written and given that this is the creative baby of the dev, of course most will be hurt in some sense, the wise ones will see beyond that hurt and look at the criticism to find where they can and should improve.
End of rant. *drops mike
- May 29, 2018
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You had me until you dropped Mike. Violence is never the answer lol