I tried this game when it first came out...it was a complete dialogue clone of MNF at that time and the dialogue was clunky and didn't fit the story at all
Tried it again after first update...very little changed.
Gave some time for a few updates and just tried again.
The dialogue isn't all just copied from MNF anymore...and that's a good thing. But the flow of the story is still very much a clone of MNF. Also the dialogue is improved, but still has confusing and ill-fitting moments. There are also a few inconsistencies and gaps in the story that make it hard to follow. Example: it says he met the girls when they were a certain age (this is without the incest patch and the oldest was 9) and "now" they are 16 years older...but he was married to their mother and was with them for 2 years after she died...the math doesn't fit. Either dump the step-family stuff all together and make him their birth dad or put the time and effort into the game so its not so confusing. There are several other points lile this that throw off the story or confuse a character's development.
I want to be clear: basic spelling and grammar aren't my issues. The dev has said that English is not their native language and I think we all expect a few "typos" because of that. My issues are with the huge and glaring plot fails and unoriginal dialogue that could be corrected by trying to make an original story instead of just a MNF remake.
I may check back after a few updates.
Tried it again after first update...very little changed.
Gave some time for a few updates and just tried again.
The dialogue isn't all just copied from MNF anymore...and that's a good thing. But the flow of the story is still very much a clone of MNF. Also the dialogue is improved, but still has confusing and ill-fitting moments. There are also a few inconsistencies and gaps in the story that make it hard to follow. Example: it says he met the girls when they were a certain age (this is without the incest patch and the oldest was 9) and "now" they are 16 years older...but he was married to their mother and was with them for 2 years after she died...the math doesn't fit. Either dump the step-family stuff all together and make him their birth dad or put the time and effort into the game so its not so confusing. There are several other points lile this that throw off the story or confuse a character's development.
I want to be clear: basic spelling and grammar aren't my issues. The dev has said that English is not their native language and I think we all expect a few "typos" because of that. My issues are with the huge and glaring plot fails and unoriginal dialogue that could be corrected by trying to make an original story instead of just a MNF remake.
I may check back after a few updates.