trax29

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The girls look really hot and sexy while also looking like normal people. Thats what I really like here, no unrealistic monster-breasts, just good looking girls. The story seems interesting, but its only the start. Now you have the option to make a sexy and interesting game out of it and it looks like this is the direction. I`m hoping for more.
 
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trax29

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Oh, I had only the 2 kisses with the sister... so lesbian only and I had the option to do it or to do it not.
 

bamachine

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Another suggestion, besides getting a proofreader, add save naming to the game. It will help in choosing branched paths easily. For example., I made two final saves, one with the dudes at the bar, one without them.
 
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dbstarring

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Hi guys, just added a link to my . I'm reluctant to create something with monthly fees because I don't want to feel guilty or pressured to release new content, since developing this game is not my main focus.

But since you have the option for tips on ko-fi, I feel like it's a good way to go. If you like what you've played and are willing to donate, you have the option to do that now. You won't get anything extra by doing it, so only donate if you want to help a fellow developer ;)

Thank you for the suggestion RPDL!
 

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A Detective's Way [Ch.1 Full] Unofficial Android Port

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My Android Ports have a 2nd Persistent save location. So, even if you uninstall the game, the saves will remain Intact.

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Walter Victor

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That line of dialogue should read "After searching for awhile, she was able to spot a stunning blonde, wearing a fancy red dress, leaning on the railing of one of the balconies."
Your solution still leaves ambiguity as to who was wearing the red dress and leaning on the balcony. One possible solution might be, "After searching for awhile, she was able to spot a stunning blonde who was wearing a fancy red dress and leaning on the railing of one of the balconies." That pretty much removes all ambiguity as to who wears the dress in our game.

Of course, we do have the visual to aid our understanding of your solution. I'm just being pedantic (anal) here. ;)
 
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mastayuzen

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Man I'm so disappointed Alexa doesn't have a brother or dad as a LI because the story is actually great but I can't do same sex incest as the core plot so I'm out. Still I'll recommend this to lesbian lovers.
 
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NakedSingularity

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Damn, incest but female protag and seems you can't even make her fuck her bro, dad, uncle, and cousins. Better luck next time I guess.
I love female protagonist games. But I also hate how in so many of them they are just weak-willed pushovers who let disgusting dudes grope them like they are deer caught in the headlights.

This woman is supposed to be a PI. Why can't she tell an asshole off? Women don't turn into sex-crazed maniacs upon being slightly touched. I wish that anime trope would die in a gutter like it deserves.
/shrug. It's another sex-centered AVN like most here and isn't meant to be realisitic. For that you have to go play real life (no back button or do-overs and can't read everyone else's thoughts either, sadly). You might as well expect a porn movie to also double as a fact-based documentary or a biography based on a true story (precious few of those and too much artistic license when it does get done).
 
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H1M

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GD left me blue.. hope to god there is a scene soon with those two and that it did not stop in the damn taxi!!
 

BlandChili

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Eh, I mean it was alright. Translation could use some work, but it's understandable at least, so not bad there. Major thing that bothered me though, is you can't avoid anything. Stuff is forced. Forced to kiss a guy in a bar and let him in your pants and start rubbing you (and talk about how much you like him afterwards), forced to kiss a guy in the club as well, forced to kiss your sister, it's all forced. You get no choices in that matter.
Well, that closes this game off for me, thanks for the heads up :D

Wish the "kinetic novel" tag was applied more widely, I exclude it in my searches for a reason. Are there no choices in the game at all?
 

Kazanovaromeo

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Jun 28, 2022
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Very promising game to be a Great game , keep continuing good work with optional actions without FORCING Please , Best wishes and good luck and thank you very much dbstarring.
 

battali0n

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I was really interested in this until I read the tags and the forums. I am pleased that you fixed it so that the characters can choose the sexual interaction but the fact that I want to play them as strictly lesbian and you are having them have thoughts about men makes it a nonstarter for me. The multiple protagonist thing also is a problem for me as it ruins immersion into the game. I understand it's your first project and I wish you the best but as it currently stands I am not going to follow it.
 
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