Hello Everyone
After playing this story for several times, there are many issues need to addressed.
1. Arrangement.(Character Introduction)
2. Very less freefom (Make Choices)
3. Lack of options to overrule decisions (overrule Decisions taken)
4. Too much self respect playing role here and rush. (Too much honesty and promises at first place)
Sorry for writing story.
(i).Arrangement Problem: Lets talk about arrangement, line up is good, but character represenation lacks opportunity, i mean each characters should be given fair chance to explain their story.
Lets start with the Strip Fun on Jenny's house, i though it just fun, it has no connection to the story, i can choose anyone i want, but wrong, it has connection specially with jenny, if you don't ask jenny to strip, it's impossible to gather enough points to know jennys story.
If you reject valeries Gym offer then no valery story in the ending.
Now lets go to Swimming Pool senario, if you manage gather more rebbeca points, Jade will not share her story and offer.
Now if you accept to spent time with Ashley then there is no chance to get Jennys date.
At last after shopping route thing comes to place, I mean why, I know it's chapter 2, but in game time it's just 3 days, route thing is too early that need to be reconsidered.
Arrangement Fix : As i told the characters should be given fair chance to explain their story, that can fixed very eazy.
First devs need to add more scope to earn jenny points on deans office including first day and second day metting, if we don't ask jenny to strip at first place, It can be done easy each point for following lines (a)I am glad to see you again, (b) Flirt_ Soft arm and (c)I would love to see yours(Swim Suit).
Now the swimming pool senario: If you reject rebbeca's offer to learn swimming with her, then (Bug right there) Jade should offer you time with her and tell her story or another way while practicing swimming with rebbeca, rebbeca share her story and while MC ask for rest jade will give you chance and share her story once that finish, then there should be options for Jade scene or More time with rebbeca, i thinks that makes fair introduction for both of them.
Now coming to the end of Chp 2 after shoping, route thing comes again, which is unfair again, Jenny and Valery must get equal chance to share their story, it can done both ways before or after meeting jenny, i think route thing over there is unfair, unknowingly how the senerio continues on Chp 3.
(ii) Now if DEV's dont want to make any changes on the arrangement, then DEVS should give us more freefom to overrule decisions, its so annoying and dissapointing to play and skip the story again and again adding several saves to build up relations to make best out of it, again ruins the fun.
We can fix this by adding more options and overrule our own decisions on the story, like for example,
(a) if I promise to "spend evening with ashley" and suddenly "Jenny ask for date", then there should be an option either "Spend time with Ashley or Accept Jenny's offer.
(b) If I promise to "spend time with Valery on GYM" and suddenly "Jenny ask me to join others on pool" then there should be an option either "Spend time with Valery or " Go with Jenny".
As i already told too much Self respect, honesty and Promise thing going on inside the story, which totally ruins the fun.
