So I binged all chapters in a couple of days. I initially wanted to go with Ashley, but Jenny was just too much. I'm also enjoying the somewhat stricter pathing, as in I can actually stay loyal to one girl, even though the "harem" tag isn't appropriate at this point imo (I'll probably do other saves with the other girls once chapter 6 releases, it seems to be the end of this storyline).
I have to say I love the characters. Jenny in particular (duh) but I feel all the girls are realistic. I also enjoy the story, it's gripping and dramatic enough without devolving into melodrama, but yeah I agree with the previous posters that the pace is off and some storybeats are weird. Simply slowing the plot, letting it unravel over weeks instead of days and putting some relationship progression in between would help make the story feel more natural.
I'm already predicting a couple endings for it and I hope my worst scenarios don't happen. That said I fucking hate Adam. I've met likeminded people IRL. I don't even want him dead, I just wanna see him suffer