VN Ren'Py Completed Alexandra [v1.0] [PTOLEMY]

[Hadley]

I kinda hoped for a more dramatic ending where the PC was killed/took all the blame and Alex took over all angry and pissed.

I feel like lots of Devs who work on a Game for that long just get tired of it and want to finish it off to be done with it.

 

[EJW]

I have a problem. I never told Alexandra to take the plan b pill and at the end she is not pregnant. Also, some renders pop up that she is then next scene she is not. Is there a fix that I don't know. If somebody brought this up already and it was answered I could not find it. Sorry.

 

[LWtbo]

I have a problem. I never told Alexandra to take the plan b pill and at the end she is not pregnant. Also, some renders pop up that she is then next scene she is not. Is there a fix that I don't know. If somebody brought this up already and it was answered I could not find it. Sorry.

Yup think your game may have messed up somewhere because on my play through Alex is pregnant.
Not only that but so is Isabella

I haven't had the render issue you mention'd .
Of course they could be just pillow's stuffed up their top's but I suspect it's more of a bun in the oven

 

[Miguelonio]

it is missing the kinetic novel tag

 

[cxx]

Of course they could be just pillow's stuffed up their top's but I suspect it's more of a bun in the oven

well mc never gave izzy a morning after pill after their "date" in her special place nor later, for alex it was optional once and 2nd time it was forgotten due what was happening and not even mentioned later.

 

[Irgendwie Irgendwo]

I guess Izzy's pregnancy is not avoidable, while Alex can be prevented with the pill. At least that's how it worked out for me.

 

[cxx]

I guess Izzy's pregnancy is not avoidable, while Alex can be prevented with the pill. At least that's how it worked out for me.

i'd say not avoidable.

 

[magus448]

So was Izzy and Alex sisters? Was MC their brother? Otherwise, why is there an incest tag?
...............
Cheers, mate.

Izzy's mom was Boris side girl who hated and was jealous of Alex's mom.

 

[Bev_]

... he loses interest half way through... Then add in mediocre shit endings...
But, somewhere about half way, he always loses focus and this is what happens.

Unfortunately that's pretty common.
I'm probably in the minority, but I prefer stories with no ending over the those with really bad ones
(I'm not sayin this one should've been abandoned, that's my overall opinion ).

 

[elle21]

Im in disapoint in 2 things 1 mc didnt fuck narisa and the girl cop once and 2 we didnt see the 3 kids of mc... but overall it was nice story

 

[Nateberuks]

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[betatesterFP]

My main regret, no feminine cop path (even if you killed her stalker companion)
Even if you submit to the Thing, Isabella Dream double will save you.
I'm not knowledgeable enough in WH40K, but Cherubael is a demon linked to an inquisitor, Slanesh was named, daughter of Malice was also used. Does the occult part makes more sense to somebody?
PS:thanks for the end anyway, any end is better than no end at all.

 

[ghosthog]

Was the ending great, idk i'd go that far. But it was good. The conflict was resolved. The MC has the two main girls and will be the new head of family. We don't need the author to tell us Alex and Izzy

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. . . he's given us enough clues to know that they are.
The only iffy thing was the whole Thing backplot (guessing just a nod to Warhammer to help explain his rage but who knows). And we can imagine what we want with the side girls cuz that's just what they are side girls, but we've got a sense that Alex will allow it. Too many people want to be spoonfed imo.

edit: And just a side note. Endings are the hardest part for me at least to write. Life doesn't wrap things up in a nice bow and ending in stories that try that seem too contrived imo.

 

[Vitklim]

Very rushed and unsatisfying ending. A ton of loose ends left open, very few scenes for most side girls, it honestly feels like there should have been another arc before the time skip to settle everything.

 

[TheCrimsonRevenger]

I believe you're thinking of Alice? The short blonde who told the MC "Gently" when they had their tryst.

Unless you choose early in the game to rob the poker game rather than use Alex's family jewelry, you see very little of Jamie, but she's the older car mechanic in the chop shop, you (I think) first meet her there?

Ooooh my mistake.

Though I think you still get scenes with the car mechanic girl even without the jewels.

Back when I thought the choices actually mattered(lol) I was maintaining two saves. Once where I robbed the pker game and one where I used the jewels. Every update i'd play one normal and one fast forwarded an never noticed a difference in terms of sex scene content. At least none I actually remember.

 

[TheCrimsonRevenger]

Was the ending great, idk i'd go that far. But it was good. The conflict was resolved. The MC has the two main girls and will be the new head of family. We don't need the author to tell us Alex and Izzy

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. . . he's given us enough clues to know that they are.
The only iffy thing was the whole Thing backplot (guessing just a nod to Warhammer to help explain his rage but who knows). And we can imagine what we want with the side girls cuz that's just what they are side girls, but we've got a sense that Alex will allow it. Too many people want to be spoonfed imo.

edit: And just a side note. Endings are the hardest part for me at least to write. Life doesn't wrap things up in a nice bow and ending in stories that try that seem too contrived imo.

I appreciate endings are tough and a rarely fully satisfying. And you'll never tie up every plot thread. But this left soooooooo many threads untied I HAVE to believe he is planning a sequel.

To not address the occult elements at all is just....wow. Why is Izzy like MC? Why can Alex calm them both? What's the loopy girl's connection?

Was it ever confirmed who targeted Izzy and why?

We never recover Alex's jewels/deal with the politician's dead son(depending on your path).

No H Scene with the cop lady even though you get a kiss teasing the possibility.

I could keep going if I did not need to go to bed for work. Suffice to say ALOT has been left on the table here. Like...alot-alot.

Only because soooooo much has been left unaddressed do I keep some optimism that all that is intended for the (theoretic)sequel.

 

[Eradawn]

The Game is decent a solid 3 of 5 Stars!

The Reasons for this are like any other said. The Scenes of Some side Girls werent completly Finished. They are only teased alot.

Narysa was teased, Emma too. Some Sidekicks have only One Scene. Its okay but one more Scene for every Sidekick would expanded their Story a bit more. When you start something at least try to end it a bit better next time. It isnt that bad , the Characters were nicely written. But you know if you give us something with a voltage, then we lose our patience and think at the end. Why isnt there a End with some of the Sidekicks.

I guess Alexandra and Izzy got enought content overall. I guess a bit more Izzy Backstory would be better. But this is only a small Critique Point.

Story was a solid Mafia Story. It wasnt bad at all. It was quite good. I dont compare it to other Mafia VN Romance Stuff because every game feels alot different as the other.

But Overall it was good. And decent. Writing was good too.
Please make a Sequel, I can only say you know your basic Points that are not so good. So you can now Improve from this Points we are all talking about and this will help you alot.
Like my Old man Used to say, Make Mistakes first to Improve alot from it!


So good Luck if you plan a Sequel
And Thanks for making this Game.

 

[RedWyne007]

Does the ending have pregnant sex scenes? And why is the android crashes when i try to name the mc?

 

[cxx]

Does the ending have pregnant sex scenes? And why is the android crashes when i try to name the mc?

there is with izzy but dunno about alex since can't get it and won't restart from scratch.

 

[Moterbr]

In my Opinion the ending was bad because you couldn't get two of the side girls wich was acceptable but why even make it seem like you could, like most choices in this game they were irrelevant and everyone talks about the loose ties that are left behind and i could not agree more in my opinion its sad that a game that was so long in development as this ended this way.
Disappointing I hope the creator makes a second part or re-writes it .