RPGM Angelica Origins [v0.6.2] [Kelo Games]

[User_32285]

I'm intrigued to see how far red haired "demoness" will be able to go before Rita or somebody else discovers.

I have a feeling maybe Rita allready knows or atleast suspects and knows a lot more about MC's circumstances (The new teacher also knows more about Angelica than he should)

 

[c4cuckold]

Did you play the full quality game or the crunched version by

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? In my game there are almost 550 images and 8 animations in 2 days of game.

Sorry, but I really don't understand...

Yeah I played the original version.

The scenes and overall presentation of day 1 was fabulous. But on day 2, which came in this recent update, it was way under my expectation. But I'm hoping it will be back to the usual standard in the next update

 

[Dilettante]

I have a feeling maybe Rita allready knows or atleast suspects and knows a lot more about MC's circumstances (The new teacher also knows more about Angelica than he should)

Yeah, they definitely know (both in some sort of society? or they just know each other and somebody close to either of them experienced similar things?). Maybe even all of what's happening, except they didn't expect her to be so quick i guess. Demoness will still continue to play "hide and seek". And who knows how are they gonna stop her. She's kinda killed the doctor in the original after all.

 

[User_32285]

She's kinda killed the doctor in the original after all.

But what a great way to go :evilsmile:

 

[Dilettante]

The only thing I want to know - not for this update, but for the game in general - is if there will be sex scenes between Angelica and her mom, Rita.

I completely agree with your points and i'm very curious for this particular path of the game too. Lesbian incest is indeed extremely rare. Certainly a big potential here.

 

[Kelo Games]

I believe that with the help of my supporters we can create a great game together. Your ideas, suggestions and constructive criticisms can helping me.

All the other things don't helping me to be happy about my hard work. Sometimes it's so hard to read insults without reason. I understand that some people don't care about the person is working behind a game, they want only their porn game easy, fast and full of their preferite porn fatishes.

But ok, the show must go on (oh, Mr.Freddy...):
So let's come back to work. I want to ask your opinion about the "wet skin effect" of Rita in the last scene of day 2 (version 0.2.1 in this moment)

The first image is as you can see Rita in version 0.2.1 ("Original version").

The second one is the other "new" option. ("Alternative version"). I reduced the hair volume too.

This poll is for patrons and their decision is more important than a public one. But I want to give this comunity the possibility to help me in a active way. And you can join me as a patrons to make your opinion more important. I need help from people who really love Angelica's world. Thanks.

So, let me know what do you think. Do I have to change the last scene? Which image do you prefear, the original or the alternative version?

 

[Ignazzio]

To be fair I find the second one superior. Skin looks better and hair reduction added a lot. But it's not like the first one is bad in any way.

 

[Dilettante]

So, let me know what do you think. Do I have to change the last scene? Which image do you prefear, the original or the alternative version?

I think i like the original more. Though they're both look good. Also alternative version of wet skin is used in many games, but i don't think i have ever seen the effect from original being used. As for the hair, i really don't mind it being long with more volume on Rita. I think it adds to her beauty.

 

[Mark the Saint]

Hi Kelo,

first of all congratulation for your game, i like it a lot. One question (if you can answer me): which character, hair and dresses you used to create Angelica?

Thanks in advice and keep the good work

 

[Kelo Games]

I think i like the original more. Though they're both look good. Also alternative version of wet skin is used in many games, but i don't think i have ever seen the effect from original being used. As for the hair, i really don't mind it being long with more volume on Rita. I think it adds to her beauty.

The first one is made by me, trying effects with Daz Studio. The second one is a purchasable file. Maybe for this reason you saw it in other games. But... my patrons seems to like the second more in this moment (94%). I was thinking to use the first effect for an oil massage scene... lol

Hi Kelo,

first of all congratulation for your game, i like it a lot. One question (if you can answer me): which character, hair and dresses you used to create Angelica?

Thanks in advice and keep the good work

She's Rita, Angelica's mother. Angelica is a mix of different models (2 for face and 2 for body) and face and body is totally customized by me, to make her unique.

 

[Dilettante]

The first one is made by me, trying effects with Daz Studio. The second one is a purchasable file. Maybe for this reason you saw it in other games. But... my patrons seems to like the second more in this moment (94%). I was thinking to use the first effect for an oil massage scene... lol

Yeah, that explains it. Maybe they think second one is more "realistic"... i honestly not sure which one is totally realistic. I'm more inclined towards first though. But i guess it will work perfectly for the oil massage too.

 

[Kelo Games]

I sincerely hope you didn't take my comment as an attack or an insult, Kelo.
My entire point was that if you wanted to get more financial support for your game, it would be helpful to provide people here (non-Patreons on this forum) with a clearer sense of where the story is going, and how far the relationships will go with each character already introduced. And I do strongly believe that if romancing Rita is a possibility, then a lot of people will take notice of your game, and perhaps even be willing to pledge. So, all you need to say is "No, Angelica will not fuck her mom", or "Yes, they will have sex with each other". Keeping it ambiguous is not helpful.
Your game is definitely heading in the right direction, but it still suffers from an issue that plagues the majority of games out here: keeping people in the dark for the sake of being mysterious or thinking that ambiguity will make people interested. It won't. There are hundreds of games on this site, all catering to different fetishes and audiences. How will yours stand out? It's not enough to love your protagonist, and just think that character development will carry you to success. As I said before, you want people to be emotionally invested, not just casually playing to rub one out.
So, how do you do that? You give people a reason to care about what happens. Since none of us know where the story is going, or what you have planned, it's hard for people to care about the story itself. What most people see is "young girl has a sexual awakening that's tied to a mysterious supernatural force". Here the supernatural force is simply an excuse to see her getting into sexual situations, and slowly losing her inhibitions. If, however, you said "thanks to a supernatural force, an inexperienced young girl ends up fucking everyone in town (including her mom)", then that would stand out.
As I mentioned before, if people are not emotionally engaged with your game, they won't be emotionally engaged with you. I know you don't like to be compared to other developers, but people like Lust&Passion, ICSTOR, and LewdLab have built a sizeable following that's willing to defend them whenever there are delays or issues - and who spend hours writing and interacting with each other on the game thread. This thread has 7 pages of comments, while your old one had only had 19. Don't rely on the echo chamber of your Patreons - good criticism can be found anywhere.
Regarding the renders you posted, the first image would definitely work for an oil massage scene, while the second one works better for the bath. Since I'm not a Patreon, you'll probably discount and disregard my comments (and I quote "And you can join me as a patrons to make your opinion more important"), but I think that would be a mistake. It's not enough to have supporters - from a business perspective you should always be looking for ways to reach new potential customers, and constantly grow your brand. That's Capitalism 101, the law of supply and demand.
Anyways, those are my two cents. I really hope you find success, Kelo.

Rita is already kissing Angelica and... look the start of day 2. So what do you think about the future? And Rita is not the only "family" she has... ehm.. ehm... shhh:biggrin:

About the story: It's day 2, red hair girl is becoming more powerful... it's too early to reveal all informations now... but.... Rita called Nicola to help her introducing Angelica to the truth. In day 3 (ver 0.3) the truth will start to be unfolded step by step. If you like my game and story you have to wait all updates, don't you think? It's like a telefilm... can you understand how everything will go in the first episode? Your opinions are interesting too, but my patrons that are helping me more than with words (Sorry, but I have to buy things to create this game, I'm not rich in life, I have a work and I have a family too ...so, I have to buy "wet skin effect" for example... ...), it's obvious that their opinion is more important. :coldsweat:

For the other things... do you want to became my personal assistant? Really, thanks for your help. I'm just a normal guy. I'm still learning how to create this game, pc world is not my first place and I'm not good in advertising or other things... if you want to support me, the truth is... you are supporting a common guy with the dreams to create a good game with the help of my supporters (Angelica Origins), with a dreams girl (Angelica) and with his (and yours) dreams and fantasies inside. :heartcoveredeyes: If you want to help me you can join my discord chat to share your ideas and suggestions, as you can see I'm not the creator who stay in silent ignoring people.

Now it's better if I focus on my work. 0.3 is my next step. :relievedface:

Peace. Mike.

PS: second image is winning so... let's change this.

 

[the66]

not per request but to give @Kelo Games some deserved support, here is my unofficial android port of Angelica Origins v0.2.1

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you have to grant the app the permission to access external storage or save/load won't work
the <esc> key and therefore opening the game menu is emulated with tapping with 2 fingers on the screen

have fun and please report problems (you can reach me

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)

 

[Kelo Games]

not per request but to give @Kelo Games some deserved support, here is my unofficial android port of Angelica Origins v0.2.1

• You must be registered to see the links

you have to grant the app the permission to access external storage or save/load won't work
the <esc> key and therefore opening the game menu is emulated with tapping with 2 fingers on the screen

have fun and please report problems (you can reach me

You must be registered to see the links

)

Thank you so much! :heartcoveredeyes: Can I share it with my patrons? Can you teach me how to do it?

 

[Dilettante]

Rita is already kissing Angelica and... look the start of day 2. So what do you think about the future? And Rita is not the only "family" she has... ehm.. ehm... shhh:biggrin:

Well, Rita's certainly been very naughty but even that was not a guarantee that this route will continue further. So it's cool that you confirmed it. I'm wondering who is that "family" now.
And i do agree with you that the story is more interesting and exciting when you uncover knowing only the basics of content that will be shown. Like, the most important ones. But it's kinda different when we talking about characters. Like, there is always the main ones you can romance\do stuff with, and others that "just here". So knowing who will be sexable and who is not is kinda useful.

 

[the66]

Thank you so much! :heartcoveredeyes: Can I share it with my patrons? Can you teach me how to do it?

you're welcome and of course you can share it with your patrons, little pirate

 

[delray]

Here:

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Who say that ren'py is the improvement of rpg maker? They are two different game engine. This is not a visual novel and if this game will become a visual novel, it will be mine and patrons decision.

I'm just a non rich amateur and self-learning creator and this game is here thank to people are supporting me.

The thing is, RPGM is a non-starter for me. I was a Patron of yours in the beginning on the original, but I cannot efficiently play RPGM games, and the time for setup, navigation, etc. is outside of my parameters. Your artwork is fantastic, and the game is generally designed smartly, but the platform is absolutely excruciating.

 

[Kelo Games]

Well, Rita's certainly been very naughty but even that was not a guarantee that this route will continue further. So it's cool that you confirmed it. I'm wondering who is that "family" now.
And i do agree with you that the story is more interesting and exciting when you uncover knowing only the basics of content that will be shown. Like, the most important ones. But it's kinda different when we talking about characters. Like, there is always the main ones you can romance\do stuff with, and others that "just here". So knowing who will be sexable and who is not is kinda useful.

SPOILER WARNING:
---------FROM HERE
[Angelica is bisexual. She will have more options with almost all characters in the game, including female partners and other woman in future (and Rita yes). But please, now be patient and wait for the story to go on. Don't ask me story spoiler please...]
---------TO HERE

The thing is, RPGM is a non-starter for me. I was a Patron of yours in the beginning on the original, but I cannot efficiently play RPGM games, and the time for setup, navigation, etc. is outside of my parameters. Your artwork is fantastic, and the game is generally designed smartly, but the platform is absolutely excruciating.

I know, a lot of people are telling me how much they hate RPGM... but hey, the maps are very small and it's not so difficult to go from a place to another. So, if you have some seconds of patient, try my game and you'll understand that there's no difficult at all to play it. You don't have to install nothing, just launch the "exe" inside the folder, very easy.

Working in rpgm make my work more huge and slow. Ren'py and similiar visual novel engine are very fast and easy for creators and more appreciated from almost all players. This is a very good reason to make me think that episode 2 could be done in visual novel, but... please, for now, let me finish episode 1, then I will take this decison with the suggestion of my patrons.

 

[balvenie1401]

SPOILER WARNING:
---------FROM HERE
[Angelica is bisexual. She will have more options with almost all characters in the game, including female partners and other woman in future (and Rita yes). But please, now be patient and wait for the story to go on. Don't ask me story spoiler please...]
---------TO HERE



I know, a lot of people are telling me how much they hate RPGM... but hey, the maps are very small and it's not so difficult to go from a place to another. So, if you have some seconds of patient, try my game and you'll understand that there's no difficult at all to play it. You don't have to install nothing, just launch the "exe" inside the folder, very easy.

Working in rpgm make my work more huge and slow. Ren'py and similiar visual novel engine are very fast and easy for creators and more appreciated from almost all players. This is a very good reason to make me think that episode 2 could be done in visual novel, but... please, for now, let me finish episode 1, then I will take this decison with the suggestion of my patrons.

I want to chime in since I'm usually opposed to rpgm as manu others, I do have to say that your game is really easy to navigate and the engine doesn't feel as much as a hinder as it usually does.

I'm not really sure what the engine brings to this project, but that might show further down the line..? The point for now is that it's NOT a walking sim and it doesn't hinder the playthrough.
Cheets

 

[SumiA]

Where can i find Simone, during the break in day 2