VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.10.1] [Dr PinkCake]

[felicemastronzo]

Only issue there is that we "The Players" know she will never end up there, so there is no real tension.
Sure, from the game's narrative point of view you are 100% right, I agree with you.
But, for Maya to return to being more likable to a large sum of players(and not only on F95), she has to be unburdened a bit by the game's narrative. But as is, like I said many times, MC is the vessel for the story, in truth, Maya is the main character at this point. And as such, her story will last from start to finish. But in a way, I think DPC is working towards a magical resolution for everything. Taking down Burke will:
-Free Quinn maybe
-Bring Maya forward as the girl that put things on the map, and get a free tuition
-Release from dad's hold

Not to mention if MC gets some silly inheritance from a grandfather, he solves Maya and Quinn's problems/debts with ease.

So I believe that things with Maya(Burke mostly) and MC's backstory will be dragged on till the very end, since it offers an easy fix that makes no sense using now.

But the starting problem remains, we know Maya will never work for Quinn.
So we can't really feel any pressure there.
Hell, even a Neutral MC is ok with Quinn at this point, so I kind of don't see MC letting anything happed to Maya due to him knowing about 95% of the stuff that happens in the Hots, since he's friends with or dick'd most of them.

We also knew that Jillybean would not end up with Tybalt, yet blackmail occupied the girl's story for an entire season.

Whatever happens at most can end, more or less temporarily, the story with mc, but not take an LI out of the picture (otherwise it would be another fire)

 

[osculim]

Maya dropped out of the CUMpetition at the beginning of the game, to be replaced by Mel. Mel ended up with Derek as her partner. Incest bullet dodged?

Forgot about that. That would have been awkward. Your sister grinding on you.

 

[The Glorious LIME]

We also knew that Jillybean would not end up with Tybalt, yet blackmail occupied the girl's story for an entire season.

Whatever happens at most can end, more or less temporarily, the story with mc, but not take an LI out of the picture (otherwise it would be another fire)

I get you, hence I said of the bat, from a narrative point of view, you are 100% correct.
Overall, we shall see what DPC has in store for us.

 

[soprano31]

Forgot about that. That would have been awkward. Your sister grinding on you.

A lot can happen after a wild night,
and what could be more beautiful than a close,sensual bond between brother and sister?

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

A lot can happen after a wild night,
and what could be more beautiful than a close,sensual bond between brother and sister?
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I need that bottle now

 

[felicemastronzo]

A lot can happen after a wild night,
and what could be more beautiful than a close,sensual bond between brother and sister?
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With Patrick suddenly entering. "finally with a guy!!!"

 

[Wizard_Shiryuu]

Maya dropped out of the CUMpetition at the beginning of the game, to be replaced by Mel. Mel ended up with Derek as her partner. Incest bullet dodged?

Hey, that's a guarantee of success. Derek would never cum

 

[The Glorious LIME]

A lot can happen after a wild night,
and what could be more beautiful than a close,sensual bond between brother and sister?

lol, even more so since NH is an awesome dude

I need that bottle now

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Hey, they might be from Alabama for all we know

 

[soprano31]

lol, even more so since NH is an awesome dude

Hey, they might be from Alabama for all we know

out of reactions,
but you are absolutely right about this,
wonderful and talented artist,Night Hacker ,
who also helps other artists on their way with advice and assistance where he can.

 

[znar25]

Guilty as charged, just like Quinn when she gets a life sentence and dies in prison.

Three words: Quinn: conjugal visits.

 

[NebulousShooter]

the danger of Maya ending up in the restaurant should be kept alive a little longer

 

[znar25]

Reading the last few days, what I've missed:

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Don't get offended now, all in good fun ​

"Next up after station identification. "The Amazing Quinn! A Documentary."

And after that. Start your own home business with this amazing Quinn franchise opportunity! Have you ever considered working from home? Being your own boss? We'll show you how!"

:::"This is QTVN...The Quinn Television Network!"::::

 

[The Glorious LIME]

"Next up after station identification. "The Amazing Quinn! A Documentary."
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And after that. Start your own home business with this amazing Quinn franchise opportunity! Have you ever considered working from home? Being your own boss? We'll show you how!"

:::"This is QTVN...The Quinn Television Network!"::::

You just gave me an idea for a peace of fan art, when I get to it, I'll tag you in the art thread, lol

 

[vogelbeest]

I also think it is a fake danger, in fact I said that DPC will keep it alive, not that it will ever happen.

if Maya now finally resolved the issue, everything would vanish immediately, so I doubt it will happen so soon (??!).

Yeah, pretty much... Maya will no longer have any main storyline once her loan/blackmail arc is solved...
And since that whole arc is kinda lame to begin with (get a job, a lawyer, a sports scholarship or get a restaurant girl to seduce daddy and film it to turn the blackmail in your favor... too many options to get out of it lol) i expect at least the solution will come with a bang in the story... I expect no less than public and total humiliation for Burke, perhaps some semi heroic redemption for Quinn, a furiously fuming and exploding Jade, a total meltdown for Tybalt and of course a father groveling for forgiveness of his daughter... This will not end without an overdose of drama!

 

[The Glorious LIME]

Yeah, pretty much... Maya will no longer have any main storyline once her loan/blackmail arc is solved...
And since that whole arc is kinda lame to begin with (get a job, a lawyer, a sports scholarship or get a restaurant girl to seduce daddy and film it to turn the blackmail in your favor... too many options to get out of it lol) i expect at least the solution will come with a bang in the story... I expect no less than public and total humiliation for Burke, perhaps some semi heroic redemption for Quinn, a furiously fuming and exploding Jade, a total meltdown for Tybalt and of course a father groveling for forgiveness of his daughter... This will not end without an overdose of drama!

Don't forget Sage. Her birthmother plot is still a mystery, and Burke resolution is the destruction of her current adoptive family.
This all comes back to Sage, who actually studies and wants to live a normal life I'd say. Being branded with her adoptive father's crimes is sure to blacklist her. So it will have far reaching consequences.

 

[Lurcher1]

Don't forget Sage. Her birthmother plot is still a mystery

 

[ChipLecsap]

Maya dropped out of the CUMpetition at the beginning of the game, to be replaced by Mel. Mel ended up with Derek as her partner. Incest bullet dodged?

It was Camy not Mel

 

[Abazzaba]

After playing through every girl's branch, as well as "others", I can say with certainty that I'm a member of the Jillybean cult.
Long live our autistic raccoon wife.

 

[ShadowLordV1]

You need a good lawyer. I remember that, Maya got that kind of advice, but she couldn't afford a lawyer, Jill should be thanked for that.

1 v 1 fight to the death against Maya's Dad.

 

[osculim]

Hey, that's a guarantee of success. Derek would never cum

Who knows maby he just might. You never know