- May 17, 2020
- 11,099
- 21,714
To speak of 'love' is perhaps excessive, but why should they not 'fall in love' with him? (I don't know if in English the two terms are different as they are for me)i don’t believe that any of the characters in this story could possibly love each other yet, no matter how DPC writes it.
All the characters have known each other for only a couple months at most. MC hasn’t even spent much time with any of the girls individually other than Maya or Josy who are the most forced upon him for plot reasons. Like if we tallied up all the time we know for certain the MC has spent with each of the girls, it might be maybe slightly over like 24 hours over the course of two months for each of them (some less, some more).
Nobody is in love because they all barely even know each other. The girls/MC might be horny or infatuated, but I don’t believe for a minute that anybody is in love. Bella has who knows how long of sexual frustration pent up, she would likely get mixed up emotionally for the first person to start melting her ice (MC or not). Right now she just wants to fuck and the wife in her wants to make it more official somehow so she doesn’t judge herself so harshly
thats how I see it anyways.
you don't need to know each other so much to fall in love, you fall in love with the wrong people in life, more than who they really are, when we fall in love it matters who we think they are.
every LI has a quite different path, but at this point of the story we can say that all of them are more or less in love with Mc, the two most delayed in this path are Sage and Bella. Josy, Maya and Jill expose themselves quite a bit. if there are no explicit declarations of love it's just to keep the story still in suspense