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SanchoMod - Spelling Corrected Dialogue

Howdy. I was already invested in studying the script variables so decided correct the mass spelling issues. After hours of sifting but it's done.

Slang and grammatical errors left in place as there's so many that I don't know what's truly intended or simply poor structure. I left spellings alone for example: left "learnt" in place instead of replacing with "learned" as it's proper British-English even though US/Canadian-English prefers the latter, both are correct.

Game version: v.0.5
Installation: Copy into "game" directory overwriting as needed.

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seathblack said:
NTR is so.... I don't know. It changes based on what anything thinks it is. It's annoying lol. The way I do it is, if another character has sex or any form of sex together without the main, I'll either have where you don't have to watch, or you watch or even join in.
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Since i noticed you are having this problem. I thought i would throw 2 cents in to see if it helps.

Whether it be clearing any confusion or solution to clear others confusion. I cover pretty much every possibility so just skip to the one that applies :) (is also why some may seem like they don't apply cause well, I only have the comments to go off with my current knowledge).

First off, NTR is NTR whether or not MC knows/watches/joins in later. So best be careful with that, MC needs to give permission for stuff without them to not be NTR. (whether that be sharing, lez stuff, etc.) I find some devs tend to unintionally do it with female on female content (not saying you do though). Nothing groundbreaking here.

As for people who don't understand throught the textbook definition at them helps, here I give you both the literal translation and the f95 definition for the tag, use them to your hearts content.

netorare: "to be taken from."

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The forum official def:

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One thing to note is both don't require there to be a proper relationship or romantic involvement, just romantic interest from MC. (some devs get caught in that trap). Hence why childhood friend is done quite a bit in NTR. (the memes of it be everywhere).

Throw either of these at people who argue wrongly. Seriously, nothing better than cold hard truth to throw at em.

tripple ex, is a big one that would make people cautious now with female on female NTR (the sister cucked the MC many times, and in fucked up ways, like while he was out in the army possibly dying). So just be sure to have it clear that MC is okay with/gave permission, use big bold and underlined letters if you need to. You could also make it optional but that branches stories and causes more fuckery code wise, so would be more effort.

Hopefully something there helped, whether it be with making shit clearer in game so people can get it through their heads, or le definition to through at them so they can... well get it through their heads.
 
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mythlock said:
i dont know why you kill stacy no matter what, ive tryed all paths for it and not change in that sence, only thing is hanna dont die but i dont care about hanna. when i got to sal part i stopped, if i cant save the girls when i want to whats the point
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wrong. Stacy is alive in all versions. Not sure where you see this. Want proof? Alive and well in v.5 :)
Anything else?
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mav99 said:
Seth Black idk reading some of this drivel here wow....man I haven't played through your whole game yet started it earlier but Sweet Jesus the softies who bitch about content in video games is so fucking weird? Do I write the Hauser Brothers and say "Please remove that part in GTA V when Trevor rapes his...blahblah" Fucking games people wtf thats why you go around driving down streets running people over because its pixels and its not even near real nor does it even involve real people doing fake shit like movies so you can critique and make suggestions but I fucking hate lesbian shit or beta male shit in adult games but I just skip it or play something else or maybe critique it in the forum if it could be constructive in someway not just because I am offended. So go hard Seth! I love hardcore videogames!
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Not every criticism is made by 'softies' as you put it and not every other is also constructive. But regarding your 'play it or move on rule' is not the wisest marketing policy in anywhere. I'm not even a business student. Dev has a vision. He should stick to it. But if a large number of people wants some changes he should listen to it if it's not a passion project rather than business project.
 
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Well from what i can see, the branching path is total bullshit. Regardless of your choices you only get to see or not see the sex scenes. There's some dialog where they bemoan the fact that the MC is a sick fuck..... yes, if u go with evil choices to actually see the porn in the porn game it's quite true, you do some fked up shit, but then i try to do the good route ( as good as it can be ), and the dialog is exactly the same.... 0 variables and the end choice is exactly the same.

As for the criticism regarding people bitching about some of the decisions, the only one i actually see as an issue is the use of the magical macguffin , write yourself into a corner, booom mindcontrol/it was all a dream/drugs, hopefully the story won't devolve into time travel, the other lazy way to fix sloppy writing.
 
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fuzzythanatos said:
Well from what i can see, the branching path is total bullshit. Regardless of your choices you only get to see or not see the sex scenes. There's some dialog where they bemoan the fact that the MC is a sick fuck..... yes, if u go with evil choices to actually see the porn in the porn game it's quite true, you do some fked up shit, but then i try to do the good route ( as good as it can be ), and the dialog is exactly the same.... 0 variables and the end choice is exactly the same.

As for the criticism regarding people bitching about some of the decisions, the only one i actually see as an issue is the use of the magical macguffin , write yourself into a corner, booom mindcontrol/it was all a dream/drugs, hopefully the story won't devolve into time travel, the other lazy way to fix sloppy writing.
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its a dark game. yes, I give the player a choice, but it is a dark game. There are 1000s of games on here for the vanilla gamers to love, hell I love a few of them, but I wanted a dark game. This is dark. I can only make a dark game as dark as possible and still try to please the "goodies". Know what I mean? I dont go to a football game and ask the players to stop playing football and start to throw a baseball around. In the dev notes, it clearly says this is a dark game. People want to complain about the darkness... um. It's a dark game. Not quite sure how I can express that enough. Hell, the MOMENT you open the game, it says the same thing.
I can not understand wtf is so hard for people to understand.

"Oh look. A game! Hmmmmm, oh it says rape and graphic violence in the tags... wait, it also says its a dark game...I'll try it out, maybe its REALLY about some 18yo kid home from college like ALL the other 1000s of games on here and I'll get to fuck my sister... wait...THIS GAME HAS RAPE AND VOILENCES IN IT! HOW DARE HE NOT WARN ME!"

sigh... Jesus, save me from the people who can't read. I'm sorry if I come across as a dick, but Goddamn people, read the damn dev notes and the tags. This game is not for everyone. Fact. I get it is dark. Thanks, I know, I made it. But I can not fathom how people will get on a game about rape and violence, and then bitch about said rape and violence, you get me?
Thanks for posting. Have a good day, brother!

Edit: This wasn't directed at you, whoever I replied too. I think I replied to the wrong poster.
 
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