VN Ren'Py Abandoned Cherish These Times [Ch. 3] [Dartred]

[e-disfunction]

If you didn’t watch the futa scenes, you will see that in first scene a police officer is giving Silvia a BJ. Meant to be a big sign that she has power in high places. Her father was also a former politician so she may have ties in there too.

also, incest isn’t illegal in 2 states in the US. The game takes place in one of the two. So him recording her having sex and taking it to the police, even if they weren’t in her pockets, wouldn’t do anything. Maybe actually get MC in trouble for recording peoplehave sex without their consent.

Provided the sex—not the incest—was consensual, if not than it's still criminal. The Overview seemed imply that it wasn't consensual with the Aunt.

 

[dartred]

yeah, it's a grey area, but it was consensual. I don't want to get to far into the semantics of the laws I really don't know.

Though this is how Silvia would play it out. If the police didn't just take Silvia's side from the start of course.

Silvia - "But officer, she said she DID want to have sex with me."
Officer - "Is this true mam?"
Claire - "I did, but I thought I was dreaming!"
Officer - "Then there is no crime, you gave your consent, but your mistake doesn't mean Silvia did anything wrong."

My law knowledge really stops at 9 months of criminal justice in another state which i won't say for identity reasons. Here, if you get drunk and have sex with some one you wake up to and decide that person was ugly or you wouldn't have done it if you were sober, you can't call rape. It's what we called "Buyers Remorse", you gave your consent, even while under the influence, there is no crime.

The only thing that might prove Silvia guilty is if they brought evidence of the drink, but neither Claire or Javier questioned it so they have no evidence of it either. that was a lot longer then I wanted to go into that. Once you start having to explain things, it loses the silly porn logic.

 

[skyteam]

the only way i see for the Aunt to lose here, is if the MC gets someone to join with him, and set a trap, one that she wouldn't be able to escape, even if she has help of the police force, or connections in higher places

or even, find evicende that she actually smuggled those drugs from brazil, which she said are heavily illegal. that could be a point for her downfall, because if she is not arrested for that, that would mean the politicians are corrupt, and could lead to a mass investigation, resulting into a chaotic situation where several people would lose power

i'm rambling, but it's the only way i see for the MC to win, and the aunt to actually lose

 

[dartred]

Yeah, Silvia will be met with justice. I just can't say how for spoiler reasons, in case any one thinks Silvia is just going to keep on winning. The MC needs time and patience, while deflecting her moves and keeping every one safe. He doesn't have the tools needed yet to stop her.

 

[skyteam]

haha i see that the way you're writting the story is very similar to Power Vacuum, which is good! i dig this kind of game, and the fact that you're making it linear, will take the grinding feeling Power Vacuum has

 

[dartred]

Yeah, I got my inspiration from PV and I'm ashamed to say it lol.

"When something is good, there will be copycats" or something like that.

 

[Icarus Media]

Speaking of which, what of the idea that the aunt has a futa daughter that hates her and joins the MC to help bring her down but secretly wants to do the girls as well?

 

[dartred]

I'm just gonna say "no comment". You know how it is. I feel like I answered too much in this thread already. I really need to hold my hand better.

 

[Larry2000]

That was actually a coding issue. if i could just write it in the code to never ask you to watch an NTR scene, i would. i know people that don't want it, would rather not see it. It's just that i don't know how to code that. A few things I wanted to do, i had to scrap because I didn't know how to do it.

Hey! Don't worry about it. You just started. I imagine there is someone out there that can help that sort of thing. It's not lost on me that developing something like this can be VERY complicated and "NTR AVOID Buttons" are not in the Renpy manual. But you will learn in time. So don't feel pressured. Now, if you're at update 10 and you still haven't added the button, then we'll come to give you hell

 

[Larry2000]

It's alright if you disagree with my assessment. After all, no two people will ever think the same way. And don't get me wrong, I too think that dartred has a lot of room for improvement. That's why I said to keep the positive criticism in mind. I wanted to encourage him because he already said that this is a work of passion for him. When one works on something and puts a lot of heart and effort into it, then releases it to the world, only to get negative feedback, that can hurt, no matter how prepared for that possibility you were. Now, it's possible that he has a thicker skin than I believe but even so, a little encouragement can go a long way.

Also, I felt that in some of the comments, people were complaining without doing any kind of research. People, please remember to check the first page and use the search tab. Trust me, it's very likely that some of your questions have already been answered already.

Oh snap, I didn't mean it like that. I wasn't trying to call you out, i was just referring to your comment in general. I was simply clarifying what you said. I understand people can drag people down. I just saw a thread of a decent game that made a BIG change recently and people were pissed and the Dev was SUPER frustrated. I know how bad it can get and I didn't want to throw you under the bus.

Regardless, you now know my intentions. Even if you thought my intentions were bad, you replied with a respectful response. I applaud you for that. Have a fantastic day good sir/madam or in between

 

[Deepfaceboy]

So it seems that the futa content is intrinsically tied to the NTR content. Is this correct? Is the only/lion's share of the futa content your aunt fucking your family?
Really disappointed if so.

 

[dartred]

Yes, the Futa character is your rival in this. So her content will stay on the NTR side, sorry.

 

[dragonflame]

i was enjoying this game until someone pulling power vacuum game. thanks for ruining game

 

[clowns234]

Please don't post misleading information like this. What I've said is I don't know how to appease what every one is asking, that much is true. I know very much how I want to play out my game.

I'm not sure what's point of this. People will still ask these questions even if I answer them.

I wouldn't let anyone lock you into anything this early in development.
It's your game. Do what you want to do. You will never please everyone and from what I have seen here in the last couple of months, haters will find a reason to hate regardless of how many times you answer their questions.

 

[Chericheri345]

Yo. I really liked this. For so long I really wanted a Futa centric NTR game. Thanks a ton for making it happen.
Please make a scene where the MC completely loses to her and ends up as the fucklicking bottom to her.

Thanks again bruh! Much love <3

 

[Alex5280]

This one looked interesting and since I really like the game that inspired it, I decided to give it a try. The renders look good and so far I'm liking the story. However, the pacing seems a bit too fast to me for most of the game. One scene that felt like the pacing was about right was the bad end with Claire. It had a good amount of dialog and the scene didn't feel as rushed.

One thing that didn't make much sense to me was that nobody came down to check out the MC's room. I mean it doesn't seem like there is much to do around the house except explore the place. If they had, you would think that they would feel pretty guilty about having really nice rooms while the MC lived in the basement. Since no other rooms are supposedly available, you would think that they would move his bed into one of their rooms or have the sisters double up and put him in the empty one. My personal choice would be to move him in with the mom. That would be a nice defeat for the aunt and her plans since she made it clear no other rooms were available. Well those are just my initial thoughts. Looking forward to see how this one progresses.

 

[Raerngaming]

just to be clear, it might not be canon, but that doesn't mean i won't do my best to make sure they are enjoyable to watch.

edit: just finished building the maps. now I just have to figure how to connect them in ren'py to make progress in-game. I'm still new to the Ren'Py side of things
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if lay out looks familiar, it's because i looked at Power Vacuum's code into how to do it lol.

If I have my way this is the room the Aunt will be having without bed just the ground and nothing else. I am looking for the whip to beat her with as it is lol.

 

[miller205]

ic patch

 

[anubis1]

I'm just gonna say "no comment". You know how it is. I feel like I answered too much in this thread already. I really need to hold my hand better.

I know you consider it a "bad" ending, but my ideal ending would be "saving" the girls from Silvia by falling on the sword (her dick) and making her forget all about the women.

 

[Jacky779]

It seems like Silvia's not going to win based on prior comments which makes sense but I personally am in the small camp that would probably welcome a route where she does. I'm really not going to complain if it doesn't happen though, as long as every 'bad-end' choice along the way is fun. That's the only 'gripe' I'd have with this game and Power Vacuum but hey, need to please the fanbase and stifle the rage of the non-ntr players so I get it. They're both still good games anyway so far.

You know what, after reading more dev comments, I'm pretty content with what ntr fans are getting so nevermind, I don't actually have any gripes.