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Wildbill5150

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In this new release, you can decide for the FMC if you want to fuck the Male MC or her new girlfriend but honestly, the game is 5 min long so just try it and if you want to try the first and by far better version let me know I still have it and can upload it again.
Thank you for your reply your right I should at least try it I'm just apprehensive that I'll start to enjoy it then future releases are going to have something that is not enjoyable (ntr, forced swinging, unneeded rape, cuckold) to be specific and an open relationship is implying that your LI, sexual partner whatever is interested in and going to have sex with others male & female

I mean Will there be gay content as well? Will they be having sex with there partners sex partners? And why not just have sex with your partner?
Good enough for the emotional stuff just not good enough for sex stuff? Why not find someone that can fulfill both needs?
And I thought the whole reason she got someone else was to let him go now she wants cake and eat it too?

I don't know you are right and I should play it at least just wish dev was more forthcoming with details doesn't have to be story related but at least about the kind of sexual content the game will have?

Would playing the first one change anything that ones not the one the dev is going forward with is it?
Thank you for your time
 

HansDampf788

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Thank you for your reply your right I should at least try it I'm just apprehensive that I'll start to enjoy it then future releases are going to have something that is not enjoyable (ntr, forced swinging, unneeded rape, cuckold) to be specific and an open relationship is implying that your LI, sexual partner whatever is interested in and going to have sex with others male & female

I mean Will there be gay content as well? Will they be having sex with there partners sex partners? And why not just have sex with your partner?
Good enough for the emotional stuff just not good enough for sex stuff? Why not find someone that can fulfill both needs?
And I thought the whole reason she got someone else was to let him go now she wants cake and eat it too?

I don't know you are right and I should play it at least just wish dev was more forthcoming with details doesn't have to be story related but at least about the kind of sexual content the game will have?

Would playing the first one change anything that ones not the one the dev is going forward with is it?
Thank you for your time
The story has an undertone of NTR but only with another girl not a guy. The problem is that the first version is visually far superior, additionally, the storytelling was better than in the new because you could see that not only the male MC didn't like the new relationship situation but also the female MC had doubts about it.
 

Wildbill5150

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The story has an undertone of NTR but only with another girl not a guy. The problem is that the first version is visually far superior, additionally, the storytelling was better than in the new because you could see that not only the male MC didn't like the new relationship situation but also the female MC had doubts about it.
Oh man wish dev would have stuck with that! But this whole open relationship thing is not something I'm going to be interested in because that "opens" up technically not ntr events in the future of the game? Just wish we knew?
Would have definitely liked the first version especially if it is the superior version and sounds like it was visually and story wise. Dev could have just added the choice he added in this one and expanded on the story? Any idea why he changed with out using the first version?
 

HansDampf788

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Oh man wish dev would have stuck with that! But this whole open relationship thing is not something I'm going to be interested in because that "opens" up technically not ntr events in the future of the game? Just wish we knew?
Would have definitely liked the first version especially if it is the superior version and sounds like it was visually and story wise. Dev could have just added the choice he added in this one and expanded on the story? Any idea why he changed with out using the first version?
Here is the old version now you can compare
 
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Wildbill5150

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The story has an undertone of NTR but only with another girl not a guy. The problem is that the first version is visually far superior, additionally, the storytelling was better than in the new because you could see that not only the male MC didn't like the new relationship situation but also the female MC had doubts about it.
Curious is the story at least the same? Or was it slightly changed as well? Thanks for link
 

HansDampf788

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Curious is the story at least the same? Or was it slightly changed as well? Thanks for link
Both versions are so short that there is no story advancement, but here is the original overview of the story:

"A monthly visual novel whose story revolves around the lives of two criminals, Kel and Shane. They've had a casual sexual relationship for years but now Kel has started to date someone and they both have to deal with that readjustment."

The first release showed better that this new situation is not only a struggle for Shane (male MC) but also for Kel(female MC).
 

Olympus3DX

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Was that story related or visual? Do you know?

Thank you for your time
Mainly story related. The writing felt rushed and there was a very clear lack of "show don't tell".

That being said I have great respect for the Developer for pushing through and following his dream of making a visual novel. I hope this will become a great success for him
 
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Wildbill5150

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Both versions are so short that there is no story advancement, but here is the original overview of the story:

"A monthly visual novel whose story revolves around the lives of two criminals, Kel and Shane. They've had a casual sexual relationship for years but now Kel has started to date someone and they both have to deal with that readjustment."

The first release showed better that this new situation is not only a struggle for Shane (male MC) but also for Kel(female MC).
Sense there pretty short and not all that big I'll play um both might as well there's not really much to latch onto yet so it'll be interesting to see the differences between both thanks

Mainly story related. The writing felt rushed and there was a very clear lack of "show don't tell".

That being said I have great respect for the Developer for pushing through and following his dream of making a visual novel. I hope this will become a great success for him
The story doesn't seem all that different very few things so it must be future story?
I found the original much better story and visually but the visual I understand do to lose of artist but in this version story not much different original did show more regret or uncertainty on both mc's which I liked just my opinion.

Both versions are so short that there is no story advancement, but here is the original overview of the story:

"A monthly visual novel whose story revolves around the lives of two criminals, Kel and Shane. They've had a casual sexual relationship for years but now Kel has started to date someone and they both have to deal with that readjustment."

The first release showed better that this new situation is not only a struggle for Shane (male MC) but also for Kel(female MC).
Wow liked the original had more emotions, new version not much different but you do miss out on some of the emotional things not much but definitely in the relationship between both mc's
The choice on which one you have sex with is kinda redundant she has and obviously can have sex with either at anytime so really only there to give player the choice of which they want to see doesn't really have any bearing on the relationship just her having her cake and eating it too

This could be really good but I'm very apprehensive I mean the romance tag is there but there having sex with other people? Not my idea of romance? Out on romantic date but she goes home with guy she meets while on date with other mc? "Open relationship"

And spend the whole game building up some sort of relationship trying to make all the right choices just to go have sex with someone else I mean as the mc I'm putting in all this work and there having sex with someone that did nothing? Even her girlfriend are they so close now that all the time kel spent with Shane is just not worth trying to be together?
Notice Shane didn't get a new girlfriend? Only kel? Because in porn games every female is bisexual not that it matters

Just wish we had more info that's all?
Thank you for your time :)
 

Steppen Wolf

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Mac version has crushed before starting the game.


Also the Pc file is not working when I convert to Mac using "renpy 7.3.5 sdk"
 
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Cuss__

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DEVELOPER HERE

To clear up any apprehensions and distaste, here is more info on how the game will progress. I'll also specify how soon these things will come into effect.

The game is small now, but soon will be very big and you'll be able to follow only characters that you want to:
1. Lesbian woman who has casual sex and is not in a relationship(soon, next few episodes)

2. Heterosexual relationship between one man and one woman(VERY SOON, Episode 3)

3. Monogamous Relationship between two women(Later)

4. Monogamous Relationship between a young man and older woman (Later)

That's just some of the characters for now.
 

HansDampf788

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DEVELOPER HERE

To clear up any apprehensions and distaste, here is more info on how the game will progress. I'll also specify how soon these things will come into effect.

The game is small now, but soon will be very big and you'll be able to follow only characters that you want to:
1. Lesbian woman who has casual sex and is not in a relationship(soon, next few episodes)

2. Heterosexual relationship between one man and one woman(VERY SOON, Episode 3)

3. Monogamous Relationship between two women(Later)

4. Monogamous Relationship between a young man and older woman (Later)

That's just some of the characters for now.
With this post and the horrible new renders, the game goes straight to ignore not worth my time because I expected something else after the first release.
 
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