kktcross

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Thanks! I'm not sure if I want pure femdom in the game, though. I would make a sort of variation (for example, sometimes Chloe is dominant, sometimes MC is dominant)
looks good so far good luck with this project (y) and no offence to anyone out there going hard on femdom but please make it optional thanks (plz optional save names ty lol)
 

JeQueZ

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God it's so perfect when you found a game that's not like others what you engine you using its looks like a vam
 

Wicks99

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Graphics look like a good blend between Honey Select and Daz3D, an excellent addition as I feel there are way too many games using these 2 engines that look similar.

Will be watching for a couple of updates before trying, good luck!
 

MrBenny

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I don't even know why you should be able to answer if there is no right answer. Even so you'd have to type in the exact right answer. It doesn't feel earned. Just out to make the new kid look stupid so she can ask something that didn't require it. It doesn't endear me to her, it makes me want to tell her to fuck off. Embarrass you in front of everyone to ask you a favor......who does that besides a psycho? I get it, porn setup, but come on. She didn't do this nonsense to the girl you know from back home who also obviously knows French.
That teacher scene actually made me dislike her reason to treat MC the way she did. Which I almost picked the "not helping her" choice after that scene. As I felt that scene could have been better if there was a real choice included that actually made MC out to be an intelligent young man, instead of a inexperienced uneducated fool (he's an exchange student...which normally means he's an above average student in intellect and knowledge).

It would have been better to establish the teacher's interest in wanting to explore MC's French culture, due him showing he is above average in his intellect than the other students (it would right away establish her interest in pursuing her desire to be taught by him)...thus establishing the teach the teacher time being a more believable path. But instead he is made to look like a uneducated fool in front of all his new classmates...and that irritated me, considering I already knew the answers to her questions.

(Sigh) For me I'm tired of the same constant young idiot MC's in AVN's...it's like having a skinny ugly MC with a tiny dick establishing a huge harem of girls...it makes no sense. Or it would be hard to take a harem story seriously when the main character is working with a 5" dick.

For me it would have been a better scene if the MC was successful at completing the teacher's test, instead of failing it. As it would be more believable why she wants to hire the MC...for his impressive quick right response (him answering the right answers would create the environment / spark of desire she would have towards the MC. And why she would be OK right away with establishing meeting him out of class, as well in her home. And risking her job by doing that.). And as they interact with each other, her attraction could develop more for the MC overtime (they would have academic interests together).

For me that would be a more believable path, instead of a teacher who makes a fool out MC, then she lays out some lame excuse for her reasons of putting him on the spot. Thus make MC look like he going to become a sub idiot for the teacher (I really hate femdom content, or anything that is close to it).

Regards.
 

BlasKyau

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That teacher scene actually made me dislike her reason to treat MC the way she did. Which I almost picked the "not helping her" choice after that scene. As I felt that scene could have been better if there was a real choice included that actually made MC out to be an intelligent young man, instead of a inexperienced uneducated fool (he's an exchange student...which normally means he's an above average student in intellect and knowledge).
I have chosen the option of not helping her, and she has insisted, and I have said no again. I don't see why I should help her after what happened in class.

It would have been better to establish the teacher's interest in wanting to explore MC's French culture, due him showing he is above average in his intellect than the other students (it would right away establish her interest in pursuing her desire to be taught by him)...thus establishing the teach the teacher time being a more believable path. But instead he is made to look like a uneducated fool in front of all his new classmates...and that irritated me, considering I already knew the answers to her questions.
It doesn't matter if you know them, she tells you they're wrong anyway.
 

Gussifriz

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I'm not sure if I want pure femdom in the game, though.
I don't know what you mean by "pure".. But there is much more to fandom than what your average Joe might think. It does not only revolves about the heavy dominatrix cliché in high boots latex suit towering woman who will put you on all four, peg you and make you bark while licking her boots or put her heels on your balls, cockblock you ruin your orgasm, is a sadist and whatnot.. Humiliation, bdsm, sadism doesn't need to be here at all.

This is a cliché and unfortunately 90% of femdom you can find in VNs. And I don't like this kind of femdom, in fact most of us don't.

Now, femdom can also be caring and empathize service, taking the lead and initiative of pleasuring you while you don't necessarily feel helpless, and that is also "pure" femdom. Go beyond the preconceived ideas and find out and explore all aspects of a practice before taking a decision !

On a side note, I will follow your game with great interest. I haven't played it yet since I never play v0.1 and wait for a good chunk of content to already be present, but you've already piqued my interest.
 

Chris2041

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Nope, it's a plot device. Although I probably should've added an alternate scene if you get it right:unsure:
Not cool she is making the new kid making himself look like a fool in front of everyone to later ask him a favor thatss mean and psycho behaviour bad way to present a li i hope we can reject her and dont help her that scene makes me dislike her i dont know if that was the idea tho .
 

hysepReC

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I think people are overreacting to the teacher thing a bit. She apologises to the MC for embarrassing him and you can refuse to give her French lessons. I didn't get femdom vibes from her or any of the LIs, really. Seems like topic of Chloe being dominant only came up because she jokingly called the MC a good boy? Lol.
 
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rspkers

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I'm kinda sick of the "idiot MC who somehow has girls fall out of the sky for him" trope. If he was intelligent, confident, successful and proactive, etc, it'd be so much more believable. I mean the girl he quite literally just met, who caught him snooping around in her room, kisses him literally the next day? That fast...? With this braindead MC...? Come on bro.

As for the teacher thing everyone is talking about, I'm not really mad about it. It's just that from a storytelling perspective, it made no sense. Dev, are you wanting us to dislike her? Because if you are, fair play, but it seems like you thought that how she handled herself as a teacher was perfectly normal and that we as a reader were supposed to actually like what she did. It's one thing if you're setting her up for MC revenge, in which case, again, fair play, but this made no sense if you're trying to portray her as a desirable LI. Quite obviously, that's not really how you treat a new student unless you're an antagonistic character, which is perfectly fine if that's the goal, but I don't think that's what you were trying to accomplish here, hence the disconnect and confusion.

In short, the writing is suffering from a social literacy issue here, which, unfortunately, seems to be present through most of the interactions in this game. Pacing is all over the place as well.

Overall I really like the renders and the girls are very attractive. The MC is your typical idiot herbivore doofus often found in stories like this, that gets swept along for the ride, which I'm not a fan of at all, but otherwise there's a lot of potential here. Good luck Dev.
 
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