- Nov 16, 2017
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I agree...Just finished the last update. Well, lewd scenes in this one are much better than in the few previous ones. But I won't stop complaining about the number of girls. It is already ridiculous in the worst meaning of this word. And encounters with them always goes in the same script:
- Hello, I am *her name* and you are Matsumoto-sensei, right?
- Hello, nice to meet you. You actually can call me by the first name. How come we never met in school?
- I don't know. But let me tell you the difference between me and other girls *she talks about her hobby or about where she is from*
- Wow, so interesting. I hope to meet you again soon, goodbye *speaks to himself how hot she is*
This cliche becomes irritating.
As I mentioned in my review, there are far too many characters constantly being introduced into the story... And the amount of story for even just a few characters is usually really thinned out, which causes harm to the main story overall... It doesn't help that the developers are selling custom characters (for a huge amount of monthly dollars) in order to pander to their paying audience... It's why I'm beginning to believe this project is overreaching, and it's now just about the money over a highly lengthy development cycle, rather then producing an overall good product to read/view... You can't just keep adding more and more characters and expect the story to not suffer because of it, just so you can make more money in the short term... Because the long term just ends up becoming diluted and strained, going in far too many directions at once...
I see it in how tiny the content is with just a few of those characters throughout week 2... Just too much going on, with too many non-interweaving characters, with just short stints of content revolving around a few of them with each content update, that the story as a whole becomes less and less of a priority as all those characters randomly get short amounts of content generated each week... You get lost in this ocean of characters, that may or may not have anything to do with the main plot line... Almost to the point of causing the main plot line to become obscured if not disappear entirely...
Add to that, we're only getting a current average of 2 weeks of content in a real time year... With the overall goal of 365 days of total content, this project is gonna take an eternity to complete, if it ever gets that far...
I don't want to say this project is now mostly about greed, but what I thought was a fun and interesting story in week 1 is becoming this thinned out creation that appears to be now, just about sustaining the high monthly income, rather then creating a fun and interesting story based erotic visual novel....
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