AnyName'llDo
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- Feb 12, 2018
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Seth's big reveal was only a big reveal to Mike (and it will be to Euphie). It's not intended to be a big reveal to readers. As soon as you saw that Seth had been in love with Bella, you can see how the backstory unfolded. It's hard to imagine any woman being that rotten to her own children, so that's at least one thing that isn't a cliche. I'm surprised she even had kids. Second thing that's not cliche was Mike's plan to deal with this problem.Kind of lost me with this update ngl. Seth being a pos was posed as some big reveal yet it was obvious from the start. Renders are good and the girls are hot, but man Im just sick of playing a MC who is just a fucking idiot all the time. Now one of the LI are a "bad guy" character working for seth, I'm sure its going to turn into a scenario where she was forced to sleep with the MC because seth wanted it but now she really loves him. Ruins her character for me.
Only girl I like is Euphi but shes that stereotypical refuses to believe her dad could possibly be a bad guy, is going to find out something to join MC's side and confront the dad character.
I just really didnt like the plot development of ch4 and what it did for the characters, just cliche after cliche.
I rejected the bar chick from the get go, but if you had a fling with her, why would you get attached? Euphemia and Agnes both seemed like decent romantic options if this story has a happy ending. I don't know if it will.
In general, I agree with Godussop93's comment. Let the dev tell the story he has in mind.
