I see a lot of comments on the models of the characters. This is for me, not the biggest issue. I say make it look how you want since it's your game. The only thing that really gave me any issues was the grammar. I would suggest maybe finding an editor to clean up dialog. I think it was a nice start and am looking forward to seeing how your game develops. I am hoping for a good story since you set a good foundation for it. Keep up the good work.
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have you thought about how the models would feel about you? don't be so picky and one day you may no longer have to fap.
soon I'm revamping the game for the next update, but it has taken me longer than I wanted but soon ^_^
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Those are all of the characters that matter as those are the ones that will be around the MC and will have interactions with him.
Those are all of the characters that matter as those are the ones that will be around the MC and will have interactions with him.
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Good luck waiting on that as the one from
Good luck waiting on that as the one from
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will never be allowed here unless it's first edited as it contains a patch file which would break the sites rules and not sure if anything else would have to be edited when the patch file is removed.
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The new models looks amazing and I like the wife telling the daughter to go after her dad and it seems that she will do that to with the other I just hope the dev doesnt add ntr and if s/he does at least make it avoidable. Btw it seems like there is an error by the pool zone where the MC that I choose didnt show up
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I revamped the game models after 0.1 it said so in the game xD that's the improved MC. and that's the new Micaiah I'm working on 0.3 right now XD thank you for playing the game ^_^
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Just to help with the grammar that someone pointed out.
"Breath, Breath, Breath." should be "Breathe, Breathe, Breathe."
To put it in more explanatory terms.
Breath is the nounverb (describing the act), Breathe is the verb adjective (doing the act).
i.e. When you take a breath, you breathe. Which is breathing (just to throw a monkey wrench in there
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Just to help with the grammar that someone pointed out.
"Breath, Breath, Breath." should be "Breathe, Breathe, Breathe."
To put it in more explanatory terms.
Breath is the noun
i.e. When you take a breath, you breathe. Which is breathing (just to throw a monkey wrench in there
)
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