GreenDark

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I really didn't like this latest update.
I can't believe I'm going to rant about the plot of a porn VN. Then again, I never expected a porn VN to grab my attention with its actual writing in the first place.

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It's like someone killed the original writer and derailed the script. Since most of the pieces of this new direction for the plot didn't fit a bunch of contrivances had to happen. And they happen far too fast. No time to process any of it, no inner dialogue from the MC, no additional interactions with the other characters so that these plot twists feel at least somewhat like a part of the story.

I hope that I'm totally wrong and all of this will make perfect sense later or that I misunderstood all of it. But for now, I'm concerned.
 

Proto Persona

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I really didn't like this latest update.
I can't believe I'm going to rant about the plot of a porn VN. Then again, I never expected a porn VN to grab my attention with its actual writing in the first place.

SNIP for spoilers I'll address below

It's like someone killed the original writer and derailed the script. Since most of the pieces of this new direction for the plot didn't fit a bunch of contrivances had to happen. And they happen far too fast. No time to process any of it, no inner dialogue from the MC, no additional interactions with the other characters so that these plot twists feel at least somewhat like a part of the story.

I hope that I'm totally wrong and all of this will make perfect sense later or that I misunderstood all of it. But for now, I'm concerned.
A lot of this current plot feels like an abrupt plot twist because it is, and probably was always meant to be. The dev could make more of an effort to show the MC's inner dialogs. Same for Panki showing more surprise and outrage about it, that's simply adding another passage or two.
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The dev is working on the next installment, which should be out soon. I'd wait to see how this cliffhanger resolves before passing judgement on what's been going on so far.

EDIT: Just made a discovery about the one time choice. You don't have to delete all your saves. The variable about which guess you make for the one time choice is stored in the persistent file inside both your saves folder and the AppData\Roaming\RenPy\hs-1555821003 folder. However, that file also stores what text you have already seen too.
 
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ashrana88

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I really enjoy the level of visual and auditory polish present throughout this game, and the fact that it allows you to determine your sexual orientation instead of funneling you into scenes you wouldn't enjoy is greatly appreciated, and something that a lot of games omit. The speed of updates along with the amount of unique renders and art is rather very impressive, especially when minute details and one off gags are given fully rendered images.

I'm not entirely sure whether it is deliberate or not, but I really dislike most of the companions. I mostly like Panki and Lel, and I enjoy Roopah from a fetish perspective (even though I find her treatment abhorrent, but obviously that's being talked about and given character development), I also enjoy the relationship with your neighbour being developed, but the main crew are really hard to enjoy being near.
The completely condescending attitude, sheer incompetence, and the lack of nuance and understanding most of the characters show towards Sparkle is borderline aggravating. The constant insults towards her intelligence and blame directed for things that she has no responsibility or fault in, despite her often having some of the most reasonable and rational points of the entire group, are rather exhausting to read.

I couldn't stand Wejit, obviously this is erotica, but treating it realistically, his sexual harassment made him very hard to appreciate having around, and I personally didn't find him particularly funny. I also find it exceptionally odd how the game tries to guilt Sparkle for leaving Wejit behind, even though the reason given is completely reasonable and rational.
It makes far more sense for him to be a leader, actually helping improve the lives of the people around him, then tag along being a lecherous creep making jokes I don't find amusing. But then everyone else constantly tries to guilt Sparkle for not appreciating the sexually harassing goblin. Acting as if it was a "betrayal" when he willingly left the group.

The revelations about Leigh and his immorality make it hard to imagine keeping him around, so I don't exactly know how that route pans out if you bring him, but it is certainly a strange direction to take the character. Kayden's "justification" for his treatment of Lel is atrocious and intellectually stunted, especially since Panki is so forgiving and compassionate towards her, and the only other people who have a problem with Lel are straight up assholes who don't deserve time of day (and this is coming from someone doing the Roopah romance path). I enjoy Harmony, but I am suspicious now that she is willing to take advantage of Sparkles willpower loss/mind control during the smuggling.

Despite being negative, I rather enjoy this and am interested in seeing how the character development expands overtime, and it's probable that a lot of this is deliberate, even though it feels a little overdone.
I'm unsure why Sparkle stays with this group and takes this sort of treatment, although that makes Panki standing up for her feel a lot more gratifying. That being said, her calling Sparkle a slut (in a denigrating insulting manner, not as a kink or sex positive manner) felt completely unjustified, and made zero sense considering Sparkle was being completely transparent about her relationships, and was openly communicating her boundaries and interests in a mature manner.

Is there a way to start a relationship with Panki whilst taking the Roopah romance route, or is the only way to have a poly/group/open relationship via romancing Panki and having a one night stand with Roopah?

I certainly wouldn't mind a way to become a lady/futa loving "slut", although with the choices thus far being unsolicited magical advances, and orientation indiscriminate and status insulting/degrading looter, I'm going to bide my time (also the fact that the developers choice is final and there shouldn't be any more extra routes, pressure or workload than planned and decided by them).

Ignoring my rant, I really appreciate the amount of work being put into this, I feel it is excellent and has a lot of potential. I wish the developer the absolute best of luck and support.
 
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Ghostface Reborn

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Yes when Wendy talks to you about the transformation, you can choose to become a boy (a sort of trap). And if you were a male in the beginning you can ask to not change at all (so you keep your nerdy appearance).
a better male transformation wouldn't hurt...
 

Ghostface Reborn

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Don't forget one thing the game is called "healslut" not "healalphamaleultracool" ;)
And so far every character you are with seems to like girls, trap, or androgynous appearance so an alpha male is not for now ^^' (but who knows maybe in a few update there will be a choice with it).
someone else in the party can be the healslut. there was that one who wanted a a blow job-and no, i didn't.
 

Proto Persona

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someone else in the party can be the healslut. there was that one who wanted a a blow job-and no, i didn't.
I think you're asking for the game to have something it's never going to. A central point of the game is to turn you into an effeminate slut. If you're looking for a game game where you transition into being a more dominant male collecting a harem of girls, there are a ton of those out there already.
 

punion

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Heyyy!
This game shows potential, but I have a few questions.
There are some H events that don't make it into the gallery, like the blowjob for money in the beginning, and many others. Is that intended? Either way how many scenes are currently unlockable in gallery? I could only unlock 6, one of them crashes when I try to open (Champ: sexytimes). I couldn't get for the life of me get the 3some, even tho I read the walktrough, and followed instructions. I'm missing something for sure, and dunno what.

Anyway I played trough like 6 times already, having fun, but I dunno why I can't get more scenes, I feel like I've already tried everything (I know I didn't, the game is filled with choices and consequences). Is there a way to unlock the gallery with cheat? Or with saves?



Also I really love the premise of the game, I played DnD once with some friends, and I was a healer dwarf that had heal fetish, so everytime I healed my character could potentially loose his mind to arousal. The healer dwarf wasn't as sexy as this healslut, but the story resonates for sure.
 

Proto Persona

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Heyyy!
This game shows potential, but I have a few questions.
There are some H events that don't make it into the gallery, like the blowjob for money in the beginning, and many others. Is that intended? Either way how many scenes are currently unlockable in gallery? I could only unlock 6, one of them crashes when I try to open (Champ: sexytimes). I couldn't get for the life of me get the 3some, even tho I read the walktrough, and followed instructions. I'm missing something for sure, and dunno what.

Anyway I played trough like 6 times already, having fun, but I dunno why I can't get more scenes, I feel like I've already tried everything (I know I didn't, the game is filled with choices and consequences). Is there a way to unlock the gallery with cheat? Or with saves?



Also I really love the premise of the game, I played DnD once with some friends, and I was a healer dwarf that had heal fetish, so everytime I healed my character could potentially loose his mind to arousal. The healer dwarf wasn't as sexy as this healslut, but the story resonates for sure.
I think the gallery is a work in progress right now. There are a lot of scenes that don't unlock in it right now.

For those looking for a way to clear the one time choice variable from your game, over at TF Games forums.

  1. Exit the game
  2. Enable the dev console
    (open the file renpy\common\00console.rpy in Notepad++, go to line 108, change False to True, save)
  3. Launch the game
  4. Load your save
  5. Open the dev console
    (press SHIFT+O as in Oscar)
  6. Type:
    del persistent.guesswho

    If the console throws an exception, the variable doesn't exist anymore or it has not been created yet. Just click "Ignore".
  7. Close the dev console
    (press Esc)
  8. guess a new name, go back, repeat points 5, 6 and 7.
Do NOT delete the persistent file.
 
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tontoman

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Heyyy!
This game shows potential, but I have a few questions.
There are some H events that don't make it into the gallery, like the blowjob for money in the beginning, and many others. Is that intended? Either way how many scenes are currently unlockable in gallery? I could only unlock 6, one of them crashes when I try to open (Champ: sexytimes). I couldn't get for the life of me get the 3some, even tho I read the walktrough, and followed instructions. I'm missing something for sure, and dunno what.

Anyway I played trough like 6 times already, having fun, but I dunno why I can't get more scenes, I feel like I've already tried everything (I know I didn't, the game is filled with choices and consequences). Is there a way to unlock the gallery with cheat? Or with saves?



Also I really love the premise of the game, I played DnD once with some friends, and I was a healer dwarf that had heal fetish, so everytime I healed my character could potentially loose his mind to arousal. The healer dwarf wasn't as sexy as this healslut, but the story resonates for sure.
It's a Renpy game, so if you want to see the content to check you've got everything (or just to look), you can always unpack it.
https://f95zone.to/threads/unren-ba...compiler-console-developer-menu-enabler.3083/
 

Proto Persona

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tontoman

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Don't even have to do that. All the image files for the gallery are just sitting there in the \game\images\gallery folder. They're all just jpgs you can open. Same goes for any other image in the game, they're all decompiled already.
Oh, he didn't archive them them, that's rare. I just assumed he had like so many others.
Cool
 
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I'm not entirely sure whether it is deliberate or not, but I really dislike most of the companions. I mostly like Panki and Lel, and I enjoy Roopah from a fetish perspective (even though I find her treatment abhorrent, but obviously that's being talked about and given character development), I also enjoy the relationship with your neighbour being developed, but the main crew are really hard to enjoy being near.
The completely condescending attitude, sheer incompetence, and the lack of nuance and understanding most of the characters show towards Sparkle is borderline aggravating. The constant insults towards her intelligence and blame directed for things that she has no responsibility or fault in, despite her often having some of the most reasonable and rationale points of the entire group, are rather exhausting to read.
That's how Davie tends to write his characters. Check out one of his older works, no money down blues:

I like it though, I'm into degradation.
 
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