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I love it, for sure, but I don't think it'll be a good replacement for the original main menu screen. I love it as it is, and thought maybe you could just add more and more characters to it with the subsequent chapters. Like, the Vannie crew for chapter 1, add the Joneses and Mike when chapter 2's out, then Kelly and Amanda for chapter 3, etc.

It works great as a wallpaper, though.
Also, Annie, where did you find that lil' dress, you minx? :love:
 

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I love it, for sure, but I don't think it'll be a good replacement for the original main menu screen. I love it as it is, and thought maybe you could just add more and more characters to it with the subsequent chapters. Like, the Vannie crew for chapter 1, add the Joneses and Mike when chapter 2's out, then Kelly and Amanda for chapter 3, etc.

It works great as a wallpaper, though.
Also, Annie, where did you find that lil' dress, you minx? :love:
Certainly I was thinking of updating as we trundle along but one of the things I want to plant in people's minds is that there are more people than just the four you meet in One. Also! I have explosions! ;)
 

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Oooh! That's awesome! Like a sci-fi action movie poster! :)

The only thing I'm missing is the Vanguard! I can't believe she didn't make it. And somehow a gun for Annie?:D

More seriously, one improvement could be to give some shading to the title so that it stands more pronounced against the planet. I like it very much overall!:)
 

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Oooh! That's awesome! Like a sci-fi action movie poster! :)

The only thing I'm missing is the Vanguard! I can't believe she didn't make it. And somehow a gun for Annie?:D

More seriously, one improvement could be to give some shading to the title so that it stands more pronounced against the planet. I like it very much overall!:)
Vannie was being a naughty bitch so got dropped....

As to Annie *Just grins*
 

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Certainly I was thinking of updating as we trundle along but one of the things I want to plant in people's minds is that there are more people than just the four you meet in One. Also! I have explosions! ;)
Oh, for sure it works as intended, then. But to me, it does seem overkill that the first in-game image that welcomes the player would be this.
I think my favorite part on it, apart from Annie's legs and the promise of honey and gold that lays in-between, is the double trouble couple formed by Chris and Sarah. Cutie + underwear + gun = Chris sexy mama.png
 

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But I think it's better than what I had plus it's a teaser in itself for the game....well more or less.
If you can "separate" the chapters well enough, between each you could throw a screen like that with the characters/places that may be involved.

Personal opinion though is the VR persons shouldn't be on a main loading screen, they should be on the VR equipment as a loading screen.

The explosion kind of looks bad, more like a tasty piece of food.

The two portions of planet ophion and ground ophion kind of clash a bit, so two different ones would be nice, one purely space and one purely ground.

I get where it is trying to go, just not my cup of tea (bitter water).
 

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If you can "separate" the chapters well enough, between each you could throw a screen like that with the characters/places that may be involved.

Personal opinion though is the VR persons shouldn't be on a main loading screen, they should be on the VR equipment as a loading screen.

The explosion kind of looks bad, more like a tasty piece of food.

The two portions of planet ophion and ground ophion kind of clash a bit, so two different ones would be nice, one purely space and one purely ground.

I get where it is trying to go, just not my cup of tea (bitter water).
Ah well here we come down to pers pref a little. Ultimately it's better than what we have and, with the mighty power of paint.net, is the best I can do. :)

I will do something about the title words tho.
 

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Personal opinion though is the VR persons shouldn't be on a main loading screen, they should be on the VR equipment as a loading screen.
I concur those and the SP may not be important for the main screen. Although they represent a significant part of the game, it's still a part that is very much optional and on the side of the story.

The two portions of planet ophion and ground ophion kind of clash a bit, so two different ones would be nice, one purely space and one purely ground.
IMO it rather nicely shows the setting of the game. One part in space and the other on the planet.
 

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Ah well here we come down to pers pref a little. Ultimately it's better than what we have and, with the mighty power of paint.net, is the best I can do. :)

I will do something about the title words tho.
I can fully agree it is personal pref, and I don't expect movie poster/billboard level of loading screens.

Maybe it just feels like too much to me with everyone/thing/action smushed to the center.

As an aside, paint net? I forgot that existed. If you need something more powerful/free look into GIMP.
 

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I can fully agree it is personal pref, and I don't expect movie poster/billboard level of loading screens.

Maybe it just feels like too much to me with everyone/thing/action smushed to the center.

As an aside, paint net? I forgot that existed. If you need something more powerful/free look into GIMP.
*nods nods*

Thanks. Gimp is on my list of things to learn at some point as well....paint.net does it's best but.....yeah.....

Oh. Meant to add. Obvs I want the remaster of One out this week so I can't really spend too much more on the title page for that reason to. I figured I could throw a day at it tho.
 

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If I could offer an idea.

I am not sure if you have played harem hotel. It has a rotating set of images as its main image. Might be something for heavy five. Especially if you could code to add more of them as you get further in the chapters. (example, images 1, 2, 3 rotate on chap one, on chap two you can get 1,2,3,4,5. etc.) Allows for a handful of interesting but pertinent renders attached to how deep the story is. Unsure what the code is for it though, so unsure if it is outside of your wheelhouse.
 

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*nods nods*

Thanks. Gimp is on my list of things to learn at some point as well....paint.net does it's best but.....yeah.....

Oh. Meant to add. Obvs I want the remaster of One out this week so I can't really spend too much more on the title page for that reason to. I figured I could throw a day at it tho.
Never could learn Gimp myself, and I'm a proud user of paint.net as well. It's not the best editing software, but it does the job.
 
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