I am still weary of this idea because of the fact it's so invested in the brothel. She may be innocent, but she comes to a brothel for work? That seems like a bit of a miss match. On top of that, you claim to train her for the player,
She decides to work at the brothel because the money is good from what she hears. It's hard to earn money in general in the city she's in. She's desperate perhaps. If you can think of a better angle that you like, let me know. Something that won't come off as NTR in anyway, but involves the brothel.
Oh, perhaps she was coerced into taking a job at the brothel. When she gets to the brothel you discover she's getting a job there under the dourest of someone tied to the brothel. You realize that since you recently took control of the brothel, you realize things need to change? So you end up saving her perhaps, but if you still want to be an evil sadist, then you save her only because she's vulnerable, and you want to make her your personal sex servant, and corrupt the hell out of her, but only for your pleasure? So you come off as the nice savior, but your end game is personal sex slave/servant; of her own free will though. I can imagine an evil sadist MC, "aww, that's terrible girl. i can't believe he'd force you to do that. you'll be safe with me, I'll take good care of you."
yet her training revolves around pleasing the customers? What does that even mean?
Good catch. I was typing fast and didn't change that. Okay, instead of the MC saying she'd please the customers, he'd talk about he would train her for his personal use and still help her out financially? Sound better?
While having the girl watch you fuck your mother could be hot, I fear that the fact the setting is a brothel would turn me off already.
Once you acquire the brothel, you'll be able to change it something like a personal sex den. Enough people have voiced their opinion for me to justify the change. I can also make the change while still using 90% of existing assets, so it's efficient.
Side note, it sounds like you want to play a kind of good guy or hero, that's cool? Actually, no, scratch that. .... CHAOTIC NEUTRAL. I need to ingrain this mentality in my head as I revise and revise the non-ntr route:
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" A chaotic neutral character follows his whims. He is an individualist first and last. He values his own liberty but doesn't strive to protect others' freedom. He avoids authority, resents restrictions, and challenges traditions. A chaotic neutral character does not intentionally disrupt organizations as part of a campaign of anarchy. To do so, he would have to be motivated either by good (and a desire to liberate others) or evil (and a desire to make those different from himself suffer). A chaotic neutral character may be unpredictable, but his behavior is not totally random. He is not as likely to jump off a bridge as to cross it. "
I don't necessarily believe every MC has to be the good guy, in fact I'm a bit of a bastard with a sadist side to me. So I enjoy a bit of asshole in my protagonists. In addition, the other thing you'e said makes me believe you are somewhat the same. So, how about something like this?
Indeed. I want the dominant MC to optionally be an evil sadist.
A city that is dominated by drugs and crime, ruled by gangs. The protagonist is a possessive asshole who doesn't like to take orders from anyone, nor does he like to share his belongings. .................. Causing the main story to be the protagonist vs the top gangs within the city............ As for the brothel, you could use this as a punishment location [BROTHEL CONVERTED INTO HIDEOUT, CAPTURE, SEX DEN - CAN REUSE 90% of assets with slight variation that would take about 20 minutes to create].
Hah, nice! Did you steal my script off my computer?
I edited your words a bit to show what I can leave in and do. I love your ideas. I excluded some parts, but kept the ones I can definitely do.
The enemy gangs may have women in high positions, or may have bitchy/arrogant wives, or slutty daughters. As an insult to your enemy, you capture them and force them to work in the brothel.
Fantastic. This is what I have planned,
except the forcing part, that would
violate patreon rules unfortunately. I want to avoid any kind of rape or forcing and instead rely on the MC's incredible ability to SEDUCE, persuade, manipulate, debate and win people to his side of their own free will; which would be the ultimate insult to your enemy; like you said, corrupt his daughter, make her side with you of her own free will, and your enemy will be sooo angry that you got his own daughter to betray him using nothing but your social status, power, crew and mad game; all the things that make a true playa and alpha male; IMO. There will still be massive amounts of sadism, but consensual, but not in a way that's an erotic turn off.
While gathering your own personal toys not associated with the brothel.
Yes! This is what I have planned for the MC non-ntr route.
Your personal toys could work in related fields which help you take down your enemies. Like your mom could be the manager of some location which helps bring in cash, your sister could be a hacker, that kind of thing. Allowing them to be a part of the story but not the brothel itself.
If your mom works as a manager, it's important a sexual scenario exist in relation to her manager status, that also reflects on the game
in a sinful environment. I want to avoid creating a scenario that divides itself from the main, sinful theme of the game.
What environments do you typically want the MC to have sex in? I try to avoid the bedroom as much as possible, but bedroom sex will exist though.
Hmm, the sister being a hacker is a non-sexual ideal. Hmmm. Of course, a non-sexual profession could indicate innocence, and of course, corrupting innocence is very erotic. I've actually already decided her profession, but I want to keep it a surprise. I've already figured out a non-ntr route for her profession, but it involves A LOT of exhibitionism, which then leads to other women seeing your big dick and sexual expertise, which opens the door for you to seduce them away from their husbands/boyfriends; LOTS of netori.