mr.moonmi

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Thank you for your feedback, guys. Yep, I get that the last scene for those, who choose to avoid femdom and either interested in Liu or not, seems awkward and forced. You're right, and that will be fixed(maybe even reworked a bit with some new renders). I had to cut this freedom on purpose because I worried about the lack of lewd content in this update, and obviously, it was a mistake. Lesson learned. I'll pay more attention to similar scenes in the future. Also, I want to add, that I planned both ways with Octavia from the beginning. So with proper approach she may even change. I understand that her behavior and nature drives some people crazy) And I'm speaking about non sub/dom path, but about genuine love interest.
 

AL.d

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heck i even chosen the option to pursue Lui as a human not a slave

But didnt even matter i got stuck into a slave forplay scene with Lui with a lame exuse when lui says lets treat this just as a first date

Like wtf the scene should have ended with the mc standing firm in saying no or walk away

But no matter how u look at it no matter what choice u make in the game ur forced to dance to octavia her femdom tune

That whole scene made the mc just look like a big beta male
I agree about forced sex scenes, they should be optional. But if you don't like dancing to Octavia's tune in general, maybe that's the wrong game for you. It's already established she is practically a dictator of a police state. MC is just a clueless dude, snatched out of his time. Going in there and acting like an "alpha" dumbass seems like the quickest way to be thrown out of the airlock.
 

michael1984

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I agree about forced sex scenes, they should be optional. But if you don't like dancing to Octavia's tune in general, maybe that's the wrong game for you. It's already established she is practically a dictator of a police state. MC is just a clueless dude, snatched out of his time. Going in there and acting like an "alpha" dumbass seems like the quickest way to be thrown out of the airlock.
i play it caus u can choose to be a alpha or a beta male ... So just caus i wanna play as a alpha route and dont wanna comply with octavia i shouldnt play this game ? that makes zero sense

I have zero problems with Octavia being the main antagonist in a corrupt police state

And i dont mind a bit of a struggle here and there even if im on the alpha path

The only problem with the game that bugged me was the scene with liu and octavia were even if u said you didnt wanna use lui as a slave u still get locked in a scene were slave shit happends

The rest of the game i have zero problems with game looks nice i enjoy the look of the characters

Its just that one thing that botherd me
 

AL.d

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i play it caus u can choose to be a alpha or a beta male ... So just caus i wanna play as a alpha route and dont wanna comply with octavia i shouldnt play this game ? that makes zero sense

I have zero problems with Octavia being the main antagonist in a corrupt police state

And i dont mind a bit of a struggle here and there even if im on the alpha path

The only problem with the game that bugged me was the scene with liu and octavia were even if u said you didnt wanna use lui as a slave u still get locked in a scene were slave shit happends

The rest of the game i have zero problems with game looks nice i enjoy the look of the characters

Its just that one thing that botherd me
Thing is that so far she isn't presented as the antagonist in this setting. She seems like the quest giver to me. I might be wrong because it's still early but that's my impression
 

EZ8lt

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Thank you for your feedback, guys. Yep, I get that the last scene for those, who choose to avoid femdom and either interested in Liu or not, seems awkward and forced. You're right, and that will be fixed(maybe even reworked a bit with some new renders). I had to cut this freedom on purpose because I worried about the lack of lewd content in this update, and obviously, it was a mistake. Lesson learned. I'll pay more attention to similar scenes in the future. Also, I want to add, that I planned both ways with Octavia from the beginning. So with proper approach she may even change. I understand that her behavior and nature drives some people crazy) And I'm speaking about non sub/dom path, but about genuine love interest.
While I'm not a fan of solely femdom focused games, I don't have a problem with that, since I just silently nope out in those cases. If the intention is to have it both ways, going femdom and an actual love route or maledom, then a bit more time for development never hurt nobody, especially if you're truly committed to the project. Otherwise, you'd just alienate a group that would otherwise play the game.

Story, cohesion > lewd scenes for most of the people in my experience, but yeah, preferably, don't take years between them scenes either. :)
 
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mr.moonmi - While i understand the Dom/Sub part on Liu. Octavia trying abuse MC on every turn does not make sense story wise because she needs him. maybe things will change with the new "savior"

the art is fantastic and story lore wise is quite good (except where the part octavia is trying to spank MC out of no where). Even dictators have to try lure their ppl with carrot and not stick every time esp when they need MC and not the other way around.

If i am MC i would blow up the portal and to hell with Octavia with the constants abuse. Unless Octavia have some leverage or something to threaten MC, there should be a limit how forceful she can be on MC. I understand the part of following orders, respect and saving the world but the way she handling MC does not motivate the character and is poorly written. Also try limit fake decisions in game, its better to have less choices than have the illusion of choices in game.

How do we get the second picture in gallery btw ?
 
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Looks really really good. Downloading it now. I'm theoretically cool with sexual content not being the primary focus of the game, but I hope there is still a good amount of it. Doesn't seem like the kinda game where we would end up waiting a year to see some T&A but I'll be kinda bummed if "not the primary focus" means "almost none". That being said, all my concerns could be completely unfounded since I haven't played the game yet, but I guess I will find out soon.
 

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I found some typos:
Cathy: "We're here. Behind you are the shoes, and ..." <-- showers, because she was escorting MC to the shower rooms
"chose one" <-- chosen

Also, isn't an uniform a better word for the clothing instead of costume? Especially when we talk about agents-in-training. Kids wear costumes on Halloween or people wear them as they are pretending to be someone else, such as a character from a game or a comic.
 
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