- Aug 8, 2017
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@Studio Errilhl
Some wrong words in the intro and a very nice surprise I seen for the first time.
Wrong words.
Need to add "you" at the end "mind you."
Not "have" but "has"
This next one has 2 words that need to be changed, "tried" to "trying" and "my day" instead of "the day".
Now for the nice surprise.
Some wrong words in the intro and a very nice surprise I seen for the first time.
Wrong words.
Need to add "you" at the end "mind you."
![need to add you, mind you.jpg need to add you, mind you.jpg](https://attachments.f95zone.to/2018/04/thumb/95648_need_to_add_you_mind_you.jpg)
Not "have" but "has"
![not have but has.jpg not have but has.jpg](https://attachments.f95zone.to/2018/04/thumb/95649_not_have_but_has.jpg)
This next one has 2 words that need to be changed, "tried" to "trying" and "my day" instead of "the day".
![tried to trying and my day instead of the day.jpg tried to trying and my day instead of the day.jpg](https://attachments.f95zone.to/2018/04/thumb/95650_tried_to_trying_and_my_day_instead_of_the_day.jpg)
Now for the nice surprise.
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