RPGM Completed Kakuriyo Village ~Moratorium of Adolescence~ [Steam] [I'm moralist]

[dazedanon]

I found these images and translated them with the help of DeepL, I just started translating them, so I am open to help and criticism.

Do you know what the original file name was?

 

[_Sad_Man_]

Do you know what the original file name was?

the images are in Chinese, I didn't find any Japanese language in the images.

Here's a sample

 

[S3vatari0n]

the images are in Chinese, I didn't find any Japanese language in the images.

Here's a sample

My recommendation is to change "To the Beginning" to "Back to Start" it sounds much less like something Google would say.

 

[_Sad_Man_]

My recommendation is to change "To the Beginning" to "Back to Start" it sounds much less like something Google would say.

what you think can be changed here

 

[S3vatari0n]

what you think can be changed here

As there are a lot of pictures, I will only list my opinions on the ones that I think could be better, if I do not mention the picture, I think it is okay as it is.

As far as text goes, the only one that feel strange to me is "Tell me about a girl's body", but I'm unsure as to what that choice does. If he's literally asking her to explain a girl's body, then it's fine.

For visual appeal:

• 0003_001_99_finish.png is too fuzzy, and has too much space underneath the text
• 0003_423_3_smell.png is almost perfect, just move the text down, like 4 pixels
• almost all of the Omank, Onna, finish, nipple, and vaginatouch don't have enough space at the beginning of the text, if there's space after the text, try to move the text over a little bit so that it isn't right against the box on the left and the image is more centre aligned

 

[_Sad_Man_]

As there are a lot of pictures, I will only list my opinions on the ones that I think could be better, if I do not mention the picture, I think it is okay as it is.

As far as text goes, the only one that feel strange to me is "Tell me about a girl's body", but I'm unsure as to what that choice does. If he's literally asking her to explain a girl's body, then it's fine.

For visual appeal:

• 0003_001_99_finish.png is too fuzzy, and has too much space underneath the text
• 0003_423_3_smell.png is almost perfect, just move the text down, like 4 pixels
• almost all of the Omank, Onna, finish, nipple, and vaginatouch don't have enough space at the beginning of the text, if there's space after the text, try to move the text over a little bit so that it isn't right against the box on the left and the image is more centre aligned

Thanks for your advice

• 0003_001_99_finish.png is too fuzzy, and has too much space underneath the text

This is how the original looks like

 

[S3vatari0n]

Thanks for your advice

• 0003_001_99_finish.png is too fuzzy, and has too much space underneath the text

This is how the original looks like

Yeah, compared to the other ones, I still think it's too fuzzy. It might just be because the characters have a lot of brush-strokes, so it makes the normal blur on the outline look too strong. On English text where there are fewer lines over all, the effect is much more noticeable.

 

[kurosx]

This is how the original looks like

Translatium translates that with "Now I'm here".
Does this make any sense in context?

 

[_Sad_Man_]

Translatium translates that with "Now I'm here".
Does this make any sense in context?

Not at all, the context is different there

 

[_Sad_Man_]

Here's everything translated up to now

 

[kurosx]

"Semen V" could be written as "Semen Vol.", that would be more obvious, I think.

 

[_Sad_Man_]

"Semen V" could be written as "Semen Vol.", that would be more obvious, I think.

I translated only this, and the rest was translated by dazedanon

 

[kurosx]

OK, sorry. That seems to be fitting.

 

[_Sad_Man_]

I'm done with the translation all img, but if there are any mistakes please let me know
drop to Kakuriyo Village of Dirty Practicess v1.4\
Please go easy on my translation, it's my first time doing this. If you spot any mistakes, let me know where and what needs fixing, and your suggested correction too!

download this file

 

[WaffelGun]

Should change the OP posting since almost all of these CGs are still censored

 

[_Sad_Man_]

Should change the OP posting since almost all of these CGs are still censored

Take it and use it

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[hinoda]

how the hell i saw this pop up in latest updates in 7/1 but when i try to find it back it says this was 9 months ago

 

[_Sad_Man_]

I'm done with the map translation, it's available for download in my previous post, along with all the other translated images

TL Map

 

[Reversedh]

Wish there would be an update DLC for this game, i can't get enough of it, the BGM, the relaxing atmosphere and characters, everything is perfect

 

[nova7]

Any Walkthrough And it's not full translate yet bro ?