xav66ier

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Jun 5, 2017
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Thanks for the Official Compressed Win version of the game. I really like other developers offered compressed versions of his games.
Excuse my bad English.
 

smurfy

Newbie
Sep 23, 2017
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This game looks promising.
I agree with others that some of the fine hair detail was a tad too much, but that can easily be remedied going forward.
I hope it wont take a ton of updates before we get to meet back up with the old flame and friend (and the surprise baby of course)
 

Ponos13

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Apr 23, 2020
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I actually loved the long flashback.The story was so compelling.Man that shit was heavy you know.So many emotions right there.This VN seems on the right track.Solid story telling,the renders are amazing.Finally people who look their age at all points.Geat start and i hope it keeps going strong.
 

EZ8lt

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Dec 24, 2019
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I played the first version as well, and despite the back story not having renders, it being smaller, and was only a tell not show type of flashback, I liked it much more. Sure, he was cheated on by Rachel in it, and he was an idiot in love, but it was much more realistic than this corrupt cop and whole gangbanger story that it is now.
 

HarveyD

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Oct 15, 2017
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Fuck me 3GB for all that exposition. I just closed the game when the second flashback started.
 

heyyoo

Active Member
Jun 1, 2018
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Wow, I remember the first time this game came out and i played it i liked it, but now you doing this whole intro blew my mind and i'm in love with the game/story it made me feel all kinds of emotion.
I don't mind the flashbacks with little choices, I loved it how it all got together and started pulling me in.
Keep continuing this legendary work because I know this will be a gem.
The story, the characters, the emotions, just everything...

So thank you for this game and story, I can not wait till the next one to blow me away
 

FormerlyknownasOlheden

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May 20, 2020
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It does feel like a lot of commentators are quite unfair towards the developer. Yes the intro is very long. Yes, there is a lot of exposition.
So what? I applaud the ambition!
Sure, dev has a bit to learn about pacing and the spelling/grammar needs a bit of polish, but for a first attempt this looks really good and as I said, the audacity of the ambition is off the scale. This could, in time be something very interesting and accomplished.
Too much text? Too many words hurts your little head? Well, Pornhub is just a click away.
 

Faptime

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Mar 25, 2018
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Way too many people complain about games that put us in the middle of the MC's life without us knowing MC's past and then asking us to make choices, only to then reveal some background info that would lead us to make a different decision had we had that info first.

This game, in my opinion, is doing it right. We are getting all the info we need via an extended flashback. No, we cannot change anything because it is in the past. It already happened. The only choice we get is an opt-out-of-sex-content question: do you want to potentially have sex with a trans character?

The big question is what is going to happen after MC's past is fully revealed. Will we then be given choices to direct the narrative of the story? That's going to matter to some people.

Personally, I think this is a beautifully rendered and staged VN/KN. The only thing that I found jarring was losing the music when the animations at the playground happened.
 

kantigura

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Mar 17, 2019
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Way too many people complain about games that put us in the middle of the MC's life without us knowing MC's past and then asking us to make choices, only to then reveal some background info that would lead us to make a different decision had we had that info first.

This game, in my opinion, is doing it right. We are getting all the info we need via an extended flashback. No, we cannot change anything because it is in the past. It already happened. The only choice we get is an opt-out-of-sex-content question: do you want to potentially have sex with a trans character?

The big question is what is going to happen after MC's past is fully revealed. Will we then be given choices to direct the narrative of the story? That's going to matter to some people.

Personally, I think this is a beautifully rendered and staged VN/KN. The only thing that I found jarring was losing the music when the animations at the playground happened.
Totally agree with that, love seeing the MC background and how he got to this point in his life. I hope we get choices then as well, Danna seems like a cool character, but I am hoping we get to set out to find, and re-connect with Rachel again.
 

sergesan

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Aug 3, 2018
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at first i thought he tells a little from the start but this is like a biographie...i stopped after he hit the guy who kissed and maybe more with his girlfriend...and after the cop came the whole story fell off...now the story is a psychothriller on his emotions...will she meddle in all his life?? so i´m out it´s too much for my little heart...only seeing them kiss in the hallway(school) made my pulse become 250...i dont get how you can play and enjoy that??? for me it´s like iwas himself....but the story was interessting maybe when i cool off in a coupple of weeks i play further...but i´m also in movies no tragedy fan...please dont relpy , it´s only my opinion nothing more....
 

MrFriendly

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Feb 23, 2020
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I'm interested, well done so far but I have to ask... Is this a Kinetic Novel? It feels like there are two choices so far - Name and Trans content, nothing else. The story is interesting and I'm going to continue but as this wasn't labeled KN I guess I had different expectations.
 
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bonetown

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Jun 14, 2017
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I'm interested, well done so far but I have to ask... Is this a Kinetic Novel? It feels like there are two choices so far - Name and Trans content, nothing else. The story is interesting and I'm going to continue but as this wasn't labeled KN I guess I had different expectations.
There are a few more choices in the introduction, but seems like the main story will be more focused on that.
 

MrFriendly

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There are a few more choices in the introduction, but seems like the main story will be more focused on that.
Thank you, not sure how I missed this first time around. Solid storytelling which is what I like most in these games. If there will be more choice after the introduction then I am sure I will be very happy.
 
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