VN Ren'Py Completed Liza's Story [v0.07] [DeesCo]

[smexosmexy]

Some people like small boobs, some like the big ones. Everyone has his own opinion. There isn't a thing in this world that everyone would support it and share same thoughts... I'll say you did real good job 'till now and we hope you keep up the good work

Edit: Wow, took me a year and a half to make a first post, but I really had to share my thoughts

And usually when I'm in mood to watch the comedy, I read the posts on this forums..

Best Regards.

 

[Behemoth19]

looks very promising. im gonna keep an eye on this 1. also dont get discouraged by nobos say. this is X 2.0... it dosnt matter. il play 100 games like elena´s life if i find em. just make good story and all will be good

 

[attilas]

update?

 

[DeeSav]

update?

I hope to present the Day 2 update by the end of the month. Currently working on the last scene and the whole scenario.

 

[smexosmexy]

I hope to present the Day 2 update by the end of the month. Currently working on the last scene and the whole scenario.

You just brightened my day Good job on making progress, looking forward to try it

 

[DeeSav]

Dear Friends!

I've finished the second part of the "Liza's Story" demo - Day 2. I hope you will like how the story continues and the scenes there. I will keep creating this novel untill the logical end. I count that there will be some more days with new characters, events and scenes.
The present update is still the part of the demo so it's free for downloading from the start. The next updates will be distributed among my patreons according the schedule.
Thank you for your interest and support. I wish you to enjoy playing the novel.

Best regards,
Dee

 

[Trasher2018]

First please add kinetic novel tag. There are no choices.

Then we have a small town with a lot of guys with a lizard fetish. The story is so generic, absurd and simple...

Sure she goes into mindless fuckdol model on every touch and is so stupid that she probably needs a headphone with breathing instructions to survive...

The renders are not that good and very grainy.

With a better looking girl and at least some player choices and more build up - this could become at least a mediocre game.
But it is boring when the girl gets fucked by a stranger on day 1. In these 2 days we have drugging, groping, blackmailing, raping ... wtf?

 

[AntiVeraX]

The preview images are full of fireflies. Try to make clearer renders.

 

[DeeSav]

With a better looking girl and at least some player choices and more build up - this could become at least a mediocre game.
But it is boring when the girl gets fucked by a stranger on day 1. In these 2 days we have drugging, groping, blackmailing, raping ... wtf?

Thanks for the opinion. I appreciate anything if it's not abusive. There are reasons why I do it this way:
- it's my tryout in 3d and Renpy. I'm still learning, that's why a linear novel without player's choices is the best option for me;
- My rendering device is quite weak. That's the reason why I use only renders to present the story line. I use what I have;
- I planned that it would be a story with fast advancing. And I planned that this story will be simple.

How many men, so many minds.

 

[Trasher2018]

Thanks for the opinion. I appreciate anything if it's not abusive. There are reasons why I do it this way:
- it's my tryout in 3d and Renpy. I'm still learning, that's why a linear novel without player's choices is the best option for me;
- My rendering device is quite weak. That's the reason why I use only renders to present the story line. I use what I have;
- I planned that it would be a story with fast advancing. And I planned that this story will be simple.

How many men, so many minds.

Ok, I understand that - especially with a low end rig. But the story is not fast advancing. There is no story. Everything escalates to the max on day 1. The MC get drugged and raped on day 1. Everything after that is just the same only less extreme or just different.

It is a common trope in these stories that in the new building live more rapists and perverts than in a whole city, but there is no reason that they all have to put their hands into the MCs private parts on day 1.

So maybe you should reconsider your approach, because there is a reason why we have some form of progression in good stories. For a first tryout this is just fine, but I doubt that it will generate any larger amount of money. Maybe you should just release the game for free and gather as much feedback as possible to improve

 

[DeeSav]

So maybe you should reconsider your approach, because there is a reason why we have some form of progression in good stories.

Thanks, I understand what you are talking about and even more, I agree with you. But I planned this visual novel as a parody game with fast advancing story line. I don't want to spend 4-5 months just to get close to the sexual content. That's my point. So this game will have the same pace in the future. And I'm not going to update it for years. When I will tell everything what I planned (and what I would like from the players' opinions), then I will end it.

I have an idea of another game in my mind, but it's not up for now. I have a lot of things to learn and to do before proceeding towards it. So the next months I will continue this novel.

P.S. I have added Kinetic Novel tag to the OP. Thanks for the advice.

 

[Kertug]

We can't all have the same taste, fantasizes, fetishes etc.
Personally i like that kind of stories, to help my mind travel to a sexual fantasy world.

 

[Claudio83]

A very good game, high heels, thongs, miniskirt and sexy dress, etc.
I would add also stockings and garter belts to this, and also NTR/cuckold/swinging theme, why not!
Keep it up!

 

[Tom10]

A very good game, high heels, thongs, miniskirt and sexy dress, etc.
I would add also stockings and garter belts to this, and also NTR/cuckold/swinging theme, why not!
Keep it up!

Not a big fan of NTR storylines, but damm, can't lie, this girl is looking great !

 

[sweetjp]

shitty story, heavily 2003 styled compression, that awful looking face. 2/10 not enough worth a free download

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[Tom10]

I guess white chicks with long blonde hair, long legs, short skirts, high heels are always gonna be irresistible

 

[hagai2]

the avg normal stupid game. art is ok - 4/10, however - story is just the same stupid one - the girl who fucks with everyone since the first second. nothing else.
overall less than 2/10.

 

[patrickB]

@DeeSav : please don't get discouraged by some of the criticism in here, everybody is entitled to his own opinion of course, but I happen to like this game very much, I don't mind the rather fast pace, and i mean not at all ! There are a bunch of 'excellent' games on this site where you have to wait for over more then half a year before you get to see a tit or pussy of the MC And then even don't give much 'porn' content after that, but rather the so called 'good' story. Keep up the good work and make us happy with the pixeled porn pls !

 

[smexosmexy]

shitty story, heavily 2003 styled compression, that awful looking face. 2/10 not enough worth a free download

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Maybe you'd like to introduce us to your game and we'll give you feedback on that. I want to see you do just 2 renders with similar quality and you're good.

 

[DeeSav]

please don't get discouraged by some of the criticism in here, everybody is entitled to his own opinion of course

Thank you. I can accept criticism and some of such opinions may have sense. But I will keep getting my own way as I see it. Don't worry. My main goal at this stage is to find those who like my first steps in 3D creation. I don't expect that all would like them. Everything is simple. If you have tried this and like it, then play and enjoy. If you don't, then it's better to ignore me.

I'm glad to create and share with those, who understand my ideas. Thank you all!