Just one comment: The word is 'losers', not 'loosers'. 'Looser' does not exist as a noun in the English language. You might want to make that correction in your next release.If someone is still unawared what they have here, let me describe it shortly by myself:
- It's a "Kinetic Novel", where the player may only click to proceed the story line. If I planned to create a linear story, that is logical that I used this sort of the game. This novel is very simple and I didn't want to make players do extra actions (clicking, walking somewhere etc). Just click and read.
- The main idea of this novel is that a naive, silly, arrogant girl from a small town came to the big city with her fiance where she got surrounded by a number of perverted guys of different age. Most of them are either old/young, ugly, poor... in other words, they are outsiders/loosers. So instead of manipulating people, MC got in situations when she is used by all those characters. If you don't like it, then you shouldn't try it. (I will place this warning to the OP)
I hope now it's clear. Have a good time!
Regards,
Dee
Absolutely. Thank you very much.I'm not trying to be an asshole here. Just suggesting a minor correction to something that bugs me.
Hate for the art style sure, hate for this or that sure, but literally pinpointing that the storytelling is bad when it doesn't appeal to what they like is just ridiculous.You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Interesting pose! And she seems to have something dripping from her chin. Does Liza have a drinking problem?
If someone is still unawared what they have here, let me describe it shortly by myself:
- It's a "Kinetic Novel", where the player may only click to proceed the story line. If I planned to create a linear story, that is logical that I used this sort of the game. This novel is very simple and I didn't want to make players do extra actions (clicking, walking somewhere etc). Just click and read.
- The main idea of this novel is that a naive, silly, arrogant girl from a small town came to the big city with her fiance where she got surrounded by a number of perverted guys of different age. Most of them are either old/young, ugly, poor... in other words, they are outsiders/losers. So instead of manipulating people, MC got in situations when she is used by all those characters. If you don't like it, then you shouldn't try it. (I will place this warning to the OP)
I hope now it's clear. Have a good time!
Regards,
Dee
Thank you for your opinion. My next game will be much more complicated and there you'll be able to do a lot of clicks. I prefer this game to be linear and "kinetic", because it's my tryout. While being able to present the story, I spend this time to improve my 3D skills.Sounds good,but i don't mind to do and some other clicks and make some choices
The main thing here is the story of how the arrogant, but silly glamour girl can be used by tricky outsiders/losers. Sure I will continue the novel to present more scenes and situations. Thanks.Continue with the good work - the game is very nice,i hope will start to be even more and more amazing!