Just finished this, one of the higher quality games on here. **With that context**, some criticism
- the game really needs a detailed walkthrough, because some of these are so counterintuitive that most people will inevitably get stuck on a puzzle and quit the game because it's too much effort. I cleared nearly the entire content of the game before i managed to mind invade evelyn once, because the initial puzzle has you get called a moron by both evelyn and the pixie immediately for asking if she bates, and in EVERY SINGLE OTHER INSTANCE when you're insulted for your choice, you've made the wrong choice. I didn't realize I was supposed to press on and...confront her for bating when she admits she bates? Super counterintuitive dude.
- too many of the girls don't have enough build up, and are immediately down to bang. To each their own, but I immediately lose interest when they're banging 10 seconds after meeting them.
- the ending(s) really need expanding, the "absorb" ending especially is really disappointing when you could go full corruption/domination instead of basically a few lines of text saying "now i can do whatever i want, haha"