- Aug 22, 2016
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Ok, What the fuck is wrong with the story? The MC is supposed to be a badass, yet he gets his ass handled in the most ridiculous ways. He's supposed to be "The Chosen One", which I suppose comes with some bigger purpose, a sense of duty or anything that helps him along the way, yet he gets distracted all the time. His family,friends or love interests are kidnapped? He gets worried for like 2 seconds before he fucks anyone and everyone in sight. Instead of looking for ways to save them he just lets shit get itself worked out by doing the bare minimum. You either fuck 'em all when you have the chance or get killed for not doing it.
Having in mind that the only choices are you either fuck this person or you die, this feels like a kinetic novel with no real choice whatsoever.
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Having in mind that the only choices are you either fuck this person or you die, this feels like a kinetic novel with no real choice whatsoever.
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