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VN Ren'Py Completed Picture Perfect [v1.0] [SuperWriter]

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SuperWriter said:
It wouldn't make sense for Sasha to get pregnant while she's trying to start her acting career with the biggest audition of her life literally around the corner.
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I'm not going to say you're wrong, 'cause you're the writer and by definition, you're the most correct anyone can possibly be, but it does bear mentioning that the audition she's going for is in a father daughter incestuous relationship. It also bears mentioning that producers in the past have been able to use plot contrivances to hide pregnancies on screen (e.g. Patricia Richardson doing a lot of laundry during a pregnancy that occurred while she was still in Home Improvement) and there's real world precident for an actress being just as convincingly sexy while pregnant (Hunter Tylo winning a lawsuit when her company attempted to fire her because "she couldn't look sexy while pregnant" She just wore loose clothes, and the judge saw her point).

TL;DR- You're not wrong, I'm just sayin'.

Miracle answer bring up are about to start college, so it doesn't make sense for them to start getting pregnant with that pressure either.
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I don't have anything for that, except this, which also makes some kind of sense for Sasha: People suddenly change for no apparent reason. It's one of the significant justifications for even having incest plots in the first place. I mean like who does that? Incest taboo plots are already contrived. A not insignificant portion of the crowd is looking for contrivance.

I'm... neutral, but slightly optimistic.
 
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steelsmiter said:
I'm not going to say you're wrong, 'cause you're the writer and by definition, you're the most correct anyone can possibly be, but it does bear mentioning that the audition she's going for is in a father daughter incestuous relationship. It also bears mentioning that producers in the past have been able to use plot contrivances to hide pregnancies on screen (e.g. Patricia Richardson doing a lot of laundry during a pregnancy that occurred while she was still in Home Improvement) and there's real world precident for an actress being just as convincingly sexy while pregnant (Hunter Tylo winning a lawsuit when her company attempted to fire her because "she couldn't look sexy while pregnant" She just wore loose clothes, and the judge saw her point).

TL;DR- You're not wrong, I'm just sayin'.


I don't have anything for that, except this, which also makes some kind of sense for Sasha: People suddenly change for no apparent reason. It's one of the significant justifications for even having incest plots in the first place. I mean like who does that? Incest taboo plots are already contrived. A not insignificant portion of the crowd is looking for contrivance.

I'm... neutral, but slightly optimistic.
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Sure, I get everything you're saying, though Sasha's auditioning as a detective with serial killings going on in a small town. The play she does with the MC was given to her by Sarah Green just for practice.

To me, pregnancy is a jarring thing, and of course it is. When somebody gets pregnant, it is a huge thing and becomes their life. It kills the stories I want to tell, you know? This is not a game about pregnancies lol
 
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SuperWriter said:
Sure, I get everything you're saying, though Sasha's auditioning as a detective with serial killings going on in a small town. The play she does with the MC was given to her by Sarah Green just for practice.

To me, pregnancy is a jarring thing, and of course it is. When somebody gets pregnant, it is a huge thing and becomes their life. It kills the stories I want to tell, you know? This is not a game about pregnancies lol
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Yeah, I was just spitballing here. I'm in for the ride either way. Although personally, pregnancy has the appeal because of how jarring it is. Well, and the fetishized bump I guess, but that's secondary for me. I would have been equally fine to have never gotten the option for any pregnancy as I would to have every pregnancy... or at least the main 4.

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steelsmiter said:
Yeah, I was just spitballing here. I'm in for the ride either way. Although personally, pregnancy has the appeal because of how jarring it is. Well, and the fetishized bump I guess, but that's secondary for me. I would have been equally fine to have never gotten the option for any pregnancy as I would to have every pregnancy... or at least the main 4.

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Thanks for playing regardless.

As for Sasha and Miracle getting pregnant if they have trouble is creating plot devices FOR the pregnancy lol. That is not the end goal for me here. I want them to succeed.
 
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Did Sasha dye her to be a brunette now? Or is that supposed to be a shadow darkening her blonde locks in the last picture? Not that I wasn't paying attention to the ass of course...
 
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Caeir said:
Did Sasha dye her to be a brunette now? Or is that supposed to be a shadow darkening her blonde locks in the last picture? Not that I wasn't paying attention to the ass of course...
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Lol Still blonde of course. Probably just looks darker of the angle/lighting
 
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Just recently discovered this. Great writing. Some of the...'escalation'...feels a bit rushed at the moment but obviously it's still in active development. For example, Mir just
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was a bit unsettling and 4th wall breaking ("Oh right this is a porn game").

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Just my 2c. Definitely looking forward to future updates.
 
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h2812337 said:
Just recently discovered this. Great writing. Some of the...'escalation'...feels a bit rushed at the moment but obviously it's still in active development. For example, Mir just
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was a bit unsettling and 4th wall breaking ("Oh right this is a porn game").

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Just my 2c. Definitely looking forward to future updates.
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Glad you enjoy the game.

To answer your two comments, Miracle hands the MC her panties unprovoked because of one reason, so I guess you haven't reached that part yet.

And Sasha is still definitely a tough girl, but people have multiple sides to them. She likes compliments, romance, and you sticking up for her, just like any girl would =]
 
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What's with Miracle's teeth? Has she read so many vampire novels that she grew fangs? It really shows in the scene with her and the M/C on his bed while he is "teaching" her.

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BigDaddyDom said:
Yeah this game takes a lot longer to leak than other games. Unfortunately part of the reason why this thread is pretty dead now days
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My threads are always pretty quiet between releases, I haven't seen any differences lol. And it takes longer to leak, but this game gets updated pretty much every month, a lot more than most games.
 
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Macinnes said:
What's with Miracle's teeth? Has she read so many vampire novels that she grew fangs? It really shows in the scene with her and the M/C on his bed while he is "teaching" her.

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You're very late to the the party when it comes to Miracle's vampire teeth lol. As for Mom finding out about the relationships, there's a very big difference between a romantic relationship versus abuse.
 
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