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Bathazar666

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That update was pretty damn hot. Tags need to be updated now.

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Give the dev more credit than that man. lol. Where would the logic be when the only characters talked about/shown are the daughters. the youngest's bff and the mentioned ex wife that ran away. Not to mention his current financial situation why would he risk that for what he has in front of him and had worked so hard alone on. Not saying it doesn't happen or that it couldn't but that's one of those highly unbelievable left field turns that makes the story hard to follow not to mention damages the foundation of what's been established
 

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That update was pretty damn hot. Tags need to be updated now.

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Give the dev more credit than that man. lol. Where would the logic be when the only characters talked about/shown are the daughters. the youngest's bff and the mentioned ex wife that ran away. Not to mention his current financial situation why would he risk that for what he has in front of him and had worked so hard alone on. Not saying it doesn't happen or that it couldn't but that's one of those highly unbelievable left field turns that makes the story hard to follow not to mention damages the foundation of what's been established
Yeah, Bathazar made some good points as to what I'm trying to do. In Picture Perfect, there are NO side characters, and there probably won't be one in any games that I do. I want all the time you spend with a love interest to be important and mean something to the plot. So as you grow with these girls, boinking them will mean more =]

That's what I'm going for anyway Lol. And I still have one more character to introduce to you guys! The supermodel he wants to win the photography contract for, stay tuned!
 

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Gotta say, up until now I didn't really like Paris all that much. Miracle is cute beyond words, Sasha is assertive as hell, but Paris just came off as manipulative and borderline mean girl. This update really flipped my opinion of Paris, I get why she was acting that way, and I am now really appreciating the character. Excellent character development and a fun story so far.
In Picture Perfect, there are NO side characters, and there probably won't be one in any games that I do. I want all the time you spend with a love interest to be important and mean something to the plot. So as you grow with these girls, boinking them will mean more =]
Definitely like the way the way you are focusing the story. Though I have to admit...I was half hoping the mother would show up just so the girls could all let her have it, especially Miracle. We know Paris and Sasha would go off on mom, but Miracle is always the peacekeeper. In this case though, I can imagine how shocked they would all be if little Miracle just went nuclear on her mom.
 

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Gotta say, up until now I didn't really like Paris all that much. Miracle is cute beyond words, Sasha is assertive as hell, but Paris just came off as manipulative and borderline mean girl. This update really flipped my opinion of Paris, I get why she was acting that way, and I am now really appreciating the character. Excellent character development and a fun story so far.

Definitely like the way the way you are focusing the story. Though I have to admit...I was half hoping the mother would show up just so the girls could all let her have it, especially Miracle. We know Paris and Sasha would go off on mom, but Miracle is always the peacekeeper. In this case though, I can imagine how shocked they would all be if little Miracle just went nuclear on her mom.
That's what I was really hoping for - that Paris' true character with shine through on this update, so that's awesome that you see her in a different light now, dude. And I do agree that the mother showing up would be an interesting aspect, so I definitely won't rule it out completely, but I don't have any plans for her as of right this second =] might be worth it just to see miracle go crazy on her like you said though haha
 

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wow... amazed how miracle is writed, spledidly. liked "her x sabrina" scene was short, wonder if lesbian content planned ? but seriously... the smell panties scene was kind of hot for a waifu shy girl with her daddy :p
 

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wow... amazed how miracle is writed, spledidly. liked "her x sabrina" scene was short, wonder if lesbian content planned ? but seriously... the smell panties scene was kind of hot for a waifu shy girl with her daddy :p
I'm glad you like Miracle so much! She really is adorable, haha. But for sure, there will be more content with her and Sabrina in the future, though I think it would be more with the MC involved, instead of just them two by themselves. But three's a party, right? =D
 

L3z1l3

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Well that escalated quickly!

After the removal of the titty flash scene I did not expect to get to vaginal sex with a chance of pregnancy with Paris within a single update. Not that I mind.

Some of the renders could use some work and animation would be nice, but otherwise good job.
 
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fzaner

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I'm glad you like Miracle so much! She really is adorable, haha. But for sure, there will be more content with her and Sabrina in the future, though I think it would be more with the MC involved, instead of just them two by themselves. But three's a party, right? =D
oh, i think... yeah. she's kind of adorable, i guess?. but that wasn't my point exactly to be honest. she's an adult with social awkwardness problems. then her stuttering issues related to her mother's case and the way she's healing from it. that's why i found her plot interesting compared to other daughters. then(my opinion) im so glad we have the choice to avoid the "bacteria" called "harem" because of romance refusal routes.

*i think lesbian-Bi content is needed for those we won't romance so no one end sad.
*i think financial problems is a weak drama-plot for sush a happy story. and evelyn's presence is mush needed "often" thus a strong plot to go, but again. i understand it's a porn game allright... because i noticed how author try to deep relationships with "details" between MC and each character. :giggle:
 

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Well that escalated quickly!

After the removal of the titty flash scene I did not expect to get to vaginal sex with a chance of pregnancy with Paris within a single update. Not that I mind.

Some of the renders could use some work and animation would be nice, but otherwise good job.
The removal flash was in the demo, so that's 3 updates ago. But would you mind putting your spoiler comments hidden in a spoiler tag, please? Just for others who haven't had a chance to play yet =]
 

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Holy shit that was hot.
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Haha, I'm glad you enjoyed that scene! And things definitely escalated quickly, but considering the situation, it made a lot of sense in my mind, so I'm glad it did for you too
 

ohhaiguize

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Just downloaded and played 0.3 and it was great! Love the "simple" family story, and I don't mean simple in a bad way(most games try to be in outer space or in 1920's America but just become confusing). If I had to review I would quickly say the good is the WRITING and the SCENES are good too. The main complaint would be some minor clipping on clothes and the grass going through Paris's hand in the outdoor scene.
OVERALL: 8/10
Keep on trucking bro! I love this and would consider donating if this quality continues.
 

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Is weird that a game has almost no tags, all the content goes around those? Or there are more because if you add tags the game will be more visible. Personally I feel bad for not knowing this game.
 

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Just downloaded and played 0.3 and it was great! Love the "simple" family story, and I don't mean simple in a bad way(most games try to be in outer space or in 1920's America but just become confusing). If I had to review I would quickly say the good is the WRITING and the SCENES are good too. The main complaint would be some minor clipping on clothes and the grass going through Paris's hand in the outdoor scene.
OVERALL: 8/10
Keep on trucking bro! I love this and would consider donating if this quality continues.
Thanks so much for commenting and I'm happy that you think the writing is the best part of the game. I don't call myself SuperWriter to be cocky or anything like that, but because I want to live up to that name and bring give you guys the best shit possible that I'm capable of.

And I definitely got some good stuff coming for next update, so I definitely plan to make you a patron! =]
 

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Is weird that a game has almost no tags, all the content goes around those? Or there are more because if you add tags the game will be more visible. Personally I feel bad for not knowing this game.
Dude... I am so happy that you said that because I just checked other games and they have like 20 tags while I have like 4

-_- I'm new to developing still, so I'm still learning. And I'm literally going to update the tags right now. Thank you, man!
 
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