VN Ren'Py Abandoned Rebel Daughter [v2.0] [Walkernight]

[swaghaver9000]

i really dislike ''mc's'' that act the opposite of what the player wants. rlly infuriating.

 

[BitTorah]

For anyone who sees this, the spanish dialogue that's in the game was intentional

Lucy: "And my opinion doesn't make any difference."
MC: "Eh princesa, no es así."
MC: "Aunque ya seas toda una mujer, para mi serás siempre la mejor."
Lucy: "You say that to make me feel good, but I know it's not true."

If these two random lines are intentionally in a different language you'd expect for there to be, like, a line about how both of these people are bilingual. ...Or a reason to switch to Spanish for these two random lines at all haha

 

[BitTorah]

If it wasnt for finding his game here I would not have gone to his patreon and started supporting him. so just because someone here bitches you should remember if it wasnt for these forums they would not get half the support many have gotten. some would never make it off the ground if it wasnt for places like this so yes its in their best interest to listen to what people on places like this say because if the dev is paying attention and works with people here he will draw in even more support. since he doesnt listen however i dropped my support.

This sounds like the long winded form of "this game isn't for me so I'm not going to support it"

 

[Hellster]

Lucy: "And my opinion doesn't make any difference."
MC: "Eh princesa, no es así."
MC: "Aunque ya seas toda una mujer, para mi serás siempre la mejor."
Lucy: "You say that to make me feel good, but I know it's not true."

If these two random lines are intentionally in a different language you'd expect for there to be, like, a line about how both of these people are bilingual. ...Or a reason to switch to Spanish for these two random lines at all haha

*shrug*, i got told to leave them like it when i cleaned up the english translation

 

[SeveredRealms]

This sounds like the long winded form of "this game isn't for me so I'm not going to support it"

No he changed the models for monetary gain. In turn he lost people that would have supported him because they liked the original models that did not need to be changed but because money talks and not reason talks I wont support him anymore.

 

[Hellster]

No he changed the models for monetary gain. In turn he lost people that would have supported him because they liked the original models that did not need to be changed but because money talks and not reason talks I wont support him anymore.

That's not the case at all, he had a partner making the original game, who had all the assets/models etc, and they vanished, so he had to make everything again from scratch and learn daz himself (he wasn't originally making the renders), and i guess his subs decided on the way the girls look etc

 

[COOLMASTER]

i think that the face of lucy and megan have to be rework, especialy for lucy there s sometibg wrong in the expressiob of her face....megan have a strong faces.....
the girl sit in the bar are more suitable...

for the other point good job, go on, maybe more teasing and hope caracyere s get a very strong mind developpement to make a good story..

 

[kansasdude]

will this get abandon also?, his other game got abandoned after 2 updates

 

[Hellster]

will this get abandon also?, his other game got abandoned after 2 updates

See my post 3 posts up

 

[TungstenDuck]

Why fake tits for the daughter though?

Probably to avoid the L word.

 

[taru]

i feel like the dad has a stick way to far up his ass it kinda makes the game a bummer

 

[Hellster]

i feel like the dad has a stick way to far up his ass it kinda makes the game a bummer

I'm sure it will mellow over the next few updates

 

[taru]

I'm sure it will mellow over the next few updates

hope so I do like the game even if I'm complaining

 

[Deleted member 1399911]

Probably to avoid the L word.

Sure... But the middle girl on the banner is closer to Loli than the daughter..

 

[SeveredRealms]

That's not the case at all, he had a partner making the original game, who had all the assets/models etc, and they vanished, so he had to make everything again from scratch and learn daz himself (he wasn't originally making the renders), and i guess his subs decided on the way the girls look etc

As a developer myself "I" control the assets no one else even those that have helped me while I learned use my assets. This keep control not matter what happens of everything related to the game. That was a dumb move on his part if true.

As for the models used. I will be blatantly honest the daughters tits look fake and not right for her petite body size. Do not get me wrong I actually dated a girl years ago she was 17 and petite like the one in this game but her tits large as they where and the largest i had seen on a any girl her age where not like the daughters fake tits in this game they where not nearly as large and did not look like a shitty plastic surgeon job. They matched her frame size where this daughters do not.

I knew another woman that I swear needed two 5 gallon pails to hold her tits butttttttttttttttt she was a larger woman that had a lot of kids so Yes big tits do happen naturally but again her tits matched her frame size as a large woman.

Also as a dev and someone that also uses daz I know the daughters tits are modified form the original model. The models tits size was set that way to math her frame size for a reason. I also do not make and have never made choices in what I have done off patreon alone but include those that are not my patreon members from forums. I may be new to avn's but I am not new to patreon and forums like this and any dev worth his salt listens to everyones suggestions and then decides if he/she will follow them. Many of the posts her all point to the fake tits but he ignores the very same people that could potentially become supporters just because a few people said I LIKE BIG FAKE TITS ON A TEEN I"LL PAY.... Hence my end of support. Sure I need money for ugrades to my own pc but I wont make my girls look stupid and fake for a extra dollar.

 

[Hellster]

As a developer myself "I" control the assets no one else even those that have helped me while I learned use my assets. This keep control not matter what happens of everything related to the game. That was a dumb move on his part if true.

As for the models used. I will be blatantly honest the daughters tits look fake and not right for her petite body size. Do not get me wrong I actually dated a girl years ago she was 17 and petite like the one in this game but her tits large as they where and the largest i had seen on a any girl her age where not like the daughters fake tits in this game they where not nearly as large and did not look like a shitty plastic surgeon job. They matched her frame size where this daughters do not.

I knew another woman that I swear needed two 5 gallon pails to hold her tits butttttttttttttttt she was a larger woman that had a lot of kids so Yes big tits do happen naturally but again her tits matched her frame size as a large woman.

Also as a dev and someone that also uses daz I know the daughters tits are modified form the original model. The models tits size was set that way to math her frame size for a reason. I also do not make and have never made choices in what I have done off patreon alone but include those that are not my patreon members from forums. I may be new to avn's but I am not new to patreon and forums like this and any dev worth his salt listens to everyones suggestions and then decides if he/she will follow them. Many of the posts her all point to the fake tits but he ignores the very same people that could potentially become supporters just because a few people said I LIKE BIG FAKE TITS ON A TEEN I"LL PAY.... Hence my end of support. Sure I need money for ugrades to my own pc but I wont make my girls look stupid and fake for a extra dollar.

Well that's why i said a while back, personally i would reduce the size of the tits on the daughter, and make the nieces face look a little younger, but other than that i like the girls.
Would be easy to do and adapt in the story, back trouble so got a breast reduction, and the niece, maybe a little makeup etc, so it wouldn't be hard to do

 

[Walt Dee]

Very promising. One suggestion, though: Any daughter, no matter how old, is not going to use her father's first name in conversation. You should consider adding terms of endearment for both to use in those situations, i.e. "Dad" or "Daddy" for the daughter to use and "Baby" or "Sweetheart" for the father to speak to the daughter.

 

[Hellster]

Very promising. One suggestion, though: Any daughter, no matter how old, is not going to use her father's first name in conversation. You should consider adding terms of endearment for both to use in those situations, i.e. "Dad" or "Daddy" for the daughter to use and "Baby" or "Sweetheart" for the father to speak to the daughter.

I'll talk to the dev and change them in the next update if he agrees

 

[Bernd L]

> Name "Rebel Daughter"
> " You'll just have to deal with your daughter, in her rebellious time"
> No spanking tag

What kind of evil sorcery is this

 

[Paprika]

No breast reductions, please. They can be made to look more natural and not fake without awful reductions that just make the girls look less feminine.
The only change I' d make is the off putting sister's masculine face. That jaw, man.
Looking forward to see more about the dad and daughter.
Pa'lante amigo.