KMN510
As one of the former patrons of Serio, this fan-game really got my interest. I wasn't able to even start his games after his decease, but somehow I feel he would be happy, that there is someone who tries to honor his work this way. Playing this game brought back a lot of good memories. Some new elements of the game may be good, some are not. After playing the latest version it is clear that this fan-game will not as good as the original.
There are some changes that you made to the characters, that I don't like that much. You took Susan's obsession with her ass away and mixed James with the pervert cop. Cassandras complicated relationship with her twin sister seems to be gone at this point. Grace isn't shown any longer as the brave girl that got harassed in the school. These are only some examples, some small details, but I noticed that.
Of course there are small bugs in this game, like missing map areas that can crash the game. Nothing serious. Still, although I didn't show Selenas chest to anyone in the first case, her boobs were in the newspaper afterwards.
Sometimes you forgot to replace a picture of an evidence (like the birthday cake) or copied sentences that mention a missing character, who isn't in the game anymore. I can live with that, because Serio's releases were buggy as hell, very often
The graphics you use to show the characters and scenes are not as good as the original, although your game is younger. Still, I can see that you really try to compete, especially with Selena.
Some characters are missing or were replaced with others. In the original a lot of things and characters were connected. I am not sure if you know about the morality system, that also benefited the player when staying a more or less pure girl. I had hours of conversions with Serio when he was alive and maybe that's why I know things and see things you don't see. I don't know if I should scared about the next chapters, when you show more of Cassandra or Sarah or Kate from the gym.
Still, it's nice to see a vision from a fan of this game. You simplified the game, but I am not sure if this is always a good decision. I just hope you try to keep the ENF core of the original. Would be nice if you had some kind of account or link that you connect with the game. Had to look a little bit longer for the origin of this one
If you like to chat more about Selena OHA, I could share some information, that you might want to know about the game.