VN Ren'Py Completed Shaping Her Future [v1.0] [Ellaraia]

[HathgarNiche]

Yeah, not much. It was, and still is, something different that I want to try adding. However, it seems to just cause more arguments than anything, so it's far from my priority right now.

There are a few scenes I definitely want to add, beyond that depends on how they're received.

I hate ntr, betrayal, cheating, backstabbing, i think people who do it are scum. YET, i'd still vote for you to put it into the game. I wont play that part, and i hope to god for my sake it's optional, but this is YOUR game, YOU create it. People will like and dislike every single part of it, the best you can hope for is to create a quality game and story, and hope that people love it the way you do. There WILL be people who hate it, and it's up to you to work out what is genuine criticism and what is just "haters gonna hate".

The games and stories are always better when you love your work, and make what you yourself would like to play.

 

[HathgarNiche]

Hmm, question. When the diary says end of line, is that telling me thats the end of the content for the current route, or is it telling me there are no more diary entries for that route? Went through the slave route, and the diary says wait a week, but it also says on the same page end of line. Am i wasting my time waiting a week?

 

[Ellaraia]

Hmm, question. When the diary says end of line, is that telling me thats the end of the content for the current route, or is it telling me there are no more diary entries for that route? Went through the slave route, and the diary says wait a week, but it also says on the same page end of line. Am i wasting my time waiting a week?

End of the Line is the end of that path/set of diary entries.
I don't understand at what point you're at though, and it doesn't make much sense. Maybe a bug? It sounds like an entry was called when it shouldn't have been.

 

[HathgarNiche]

End of the Line is the end of that path/set of diary entries.
I don't understand at what point you're at though, and it doesn't make much sense. Maybe a bug? It sounds like an entry was called when it shouldn't have been.

I thin the diary was bugged for me the entire way through to be honest. It only ever updated after doing what the update tells me to do. Like, i messed with her while asleep and THEN the diary updated and told me i should mess with her while asleep. The diary didnt update again until after the mc had sex with her on the couch, then it updated saying MAYBE he could get a blowjob or something.

The point i was at with the slave training though. Had slapped her many times, the the surprise sex in the slap scene. Then i think something else happened, but i forget, could have been a bj. Then the diary entry came up saying wait a week. After a week nothing happened though. Slapping her more, or insulting her in the kitchen did nothing either.

 

[Ellaraia]

I thin the diary was bugged for me the entire way through to be honest. It only ever updated after doing what the update tells me to do. Like, i messed with her while asleep and THEN the diary updated and told me i should mess with her while asleep. The diary didnt update again until after the mc had sex with her on the couch, then it updated saying MAYBE he could get a blowjob or something.

The point i was at with the slave training though. Had slapped her many times, the the surprise sex in the slap scene. Then i think something else happened, but i forget, could have been a bj. Then the diary entry came up saying wait a week. After a week nothing happened though. Slapping her more, or insulting her in the kitchen did nothing either.

Yeah, something's gone rather wrong there. The diary has it's issues. It'll be gone in about 10 days anyway.

 

[SentryAl]

Really like the graphics, even if I hate usual 3d model based games, this one looks so good.
mechanics and events are really broken in here, like you made her a slave and she fucks you off if you touch her in her sleep or what the point to lift her skirt or trying to get a peak on her panties if you can just fuck her after some molesting at night(in a first few days), game should progress from small things to big ...
Also Ellaria you could just add most sex scenes from fuck buddy to the Slave road cause when she is slave you can just use her as you want.

 

[SvenVlad]

Is it nearly finished?

 

[Ellaraia]

Really like the graphics, even if I hate usual 3d model based games, this one looks so good.
mechanics and events are really broken in here, like you made her a slave and she fucks you off if you touch her in her sleep or what the point to lift her skirt or trying to get a peak on her panties if you can just fuck her after some molesting at night(in a first few days), game should progress from small things to big ...
Also Ellaria you could just add most sex scenes from fuck buddy to the Slave road cause when she is slave you can just use her as you want.

I'm re-doing the entire progression system. You progress through scenes as you play the game and all are replayable. Also, I'm converting the paths into affinities. Basically you choose an affinity (Girlfriend, Pet, Slave and so on) and that will change the dialogue you see and some of the images. It's a lot of work having to re-write so much, so slave and servant won't be in the next update but will be added in 0.11 and 0.12. This is also because the slave affinity will need its own interactions, as will servant.

 

[Ellaraia]

Is it nearly finished?

Not yet, sadly.

 

[Ti'elby Mercedes]

I'm re-doing the entire progression system. You progress through scenes as you play the game and all are replayable. Also, I'm converting the paths into affinities. Basically you choose an affinity (Girlfriend, Pet, Slave and so on) and that will change the dialogue you see and some of the images. It's a lot of work having to re-write so much, so slave and servant won't be in the next update but will be added in 0.11 and 0.12. This is also because the slave affinity will need its own interactions, as will servant.

By "servant", do you mean "pet", or is that another path?

 

[SvenVlad]

Not yet, sadly.

 

[Ellaraia]

By "servant", do you mean "pet", or is that another path?

Servant is the part before you choose either pet or slave, it will be expanded upon when added. Pet will be in 0.09/0.10, as will girlfriend and another secret one.

 

[Claudio83]

For activate NTR which path i have to choose?

 

[HeavyEavy]

@Claudio83 I don't think there is one, other than her homework, it happens at her school.

 

[hameleona]

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[Tanwise]

Which of the three current paths are shown in the screenshot images on the OP? I really like the intimate "lover" look of them. But can't find any posts that really explain how the story will differ between the three paths.

Also I've played through an in-game week so far and it's been the same choices all the time. What do I need to do to get anywhere in the game. For instance, there isn't any option to help her with her school work when entering the kitchen. So far it's just sitting with her during TV, or talking with her. That's it.

 

[HeavyEavy]

@Tanwise It's a "Trainer" game so one week in game is nothing (about 5 minutes of play). Read the Diary, there is a walk through posted(search the thread).

 

[Tanwise]

Ok, at this point shortly after I posted that message I was able to do the kitchen scene with her in the maid uniform. But since then I've been following the walk through all along, but I'm now on week 3 or 4 and I've made sure the MC is sitting at the couch every afternoon at 16:00. But she is always in the kitchen at that time. And as for the Diary, it doesn't give me any indication either, it just says, "maybe she isn't in the mood", but I don't see how that helps with triggering the lounge/couch maid fruit scene.

@Tanwise It's a "Trainer" game so one week in game is nothing (about 5 minutes of play). Read the Diary, there is a walk through posted(search the thread).

 

[Tanwise]

I'm using the latest version of the game, I've gone through the walk through and the Diary, done the kitchen scene and have had the MC driving down all of her stats. While also sitting on the couch when ever she is cleaning, going on the third week now and she never comes to clean the fruit. I've also had the MC working in the shop constantly when she's at school. So unless, there is a specific level her stats need to be at, I don't know what else I'm missing.

Sorry about the tone, but done repetitive tasks in game more than a few times, with no progress is frustrating.

Watch TV while Sarah's cleaning. Also, make sure to lift her skirt.

 

[HeavyEavy]

@Tanwise What version of the walk-through are you using? Version 8 has most of the stat requirements needed. I think your current problem is all of her stats are down, if she isn't in the mood then she isn't aroused enough. Here's a copy of the latest walk-through.