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The baseborn curs of the order must have had spies around our bedcha- I mean must have used their watered down magic to create an illusion that they sold to the simple minded people, maybe even manipulated their senses so they would percieve our relationship as anything other than loyal service to the dark lord.
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Good, one can never be too sure. To think someone could imagine two of the dark lord's most loyal servants engaging in romantic behaviour with eachother, such things are clearly preposterous, no matter how wondrous and blissfull it feels... Theoretically of course, not that we would have any idea.
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I did some matchmaking and got already into the sight of authorities
Any % speedrun completed
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Excuses, this just proves you're a spy.I did some matchmaking and got already into the sight of authorities
Any % speedrun completed
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Please no, too many boobs that are mistaken for moons on this site, normal size is fine, even some small or large is fine, diversity is king.
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I've hoped someone would say this. I certainly had just about enough of unnatural and unreal breasts all over the place. I do give variety on characters as it is, but I am not making another Cabin by the Lake here.
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Voldar clearly needs some enchantmentsI've hoped someone would say this. I certainly had just about enough of unnatural and unreal breasts all over the place. I do give variety on characters as it is, but I am not making another Cabin by the Lake here.
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Rose is being corrupted and brainwashed. Good luck with that.That’s mod abuse
I’ll call Rose to help me
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This feels more like a book than a game. You let me name the MC, but he's just another character in your story, he isn't the player.
The main character talks (and thinks) too much.
Every conversation feels like the author is jerking off into the textbox.
I'm still not sure why. Maybe if the MC spoke less or was less edgy better-than-thou it wouldn't feel so weird.
The MC knows things the player should know but never saw, such as Rose hiding bodies in the well. Little things like that further separate the player from the MC.
All the other POV scenes in the intro are in first person. This is confusing when we don't know who the characters are, and in some cases they don't even have names or distinct speech patterns.
Finally because there was no relationship other than "I'm better and smarter than you woman, and I know all your secrets", it then feels really weird for her to suddenly ask him to "pound her like an anvil". That really came out of nowhere. I didn't get any further than that. Maybe it gets better after.
The main character talks (and thinks) too much.
Every conversation feels like the author is jerking off into the textbox.
I'm still not sure why. Maybe if the MC spoke less or was less edgy better-than-thou it wouldn't feel so weird.
The MC knows things the player should know but never saw, such as Rose hiding bodies in the well. Little things like that further separate the player from the MC.
All the other POV scenes in the intro are in first person. This is confusing when we don't know who the characters are, and in some cases they don't even have names or distinct speech patterns.
Finally because there was no relationship other than "I'm better and smarter than you woman, and I know all your secrets", it then feels really weird for her to suddenly ask him to "pound her like an anvil". That really came out of nowhere. I didn't get any further than that. Maybe it gets better after.
I mean, it is a visual NOVEL, just one with more text. The fact that he talks too much is something I see as a positive, in contrast to all the other games where the MC gets thrown around with little say in the matter. He is suppose to be edgy and better-than-thou, he is a not very suttle copy of Sauron. As with him knowing things the player does not, how would one write a very knowledgable character? Everything he knows can't be told to the player, the game would be a hundred times longer if that were the case.
I don't think it's wierd, she is clearly an isolated and disliked girl who cannot find anyone who accepts her. Him already knowing her secrets took off the load of her needing to tell him about her, or her having such a secret the guy does not know about. She has found someone who accepts her, someone who shares hee darker instincts. That plus his corruption over her. Sure, it's not extremely realistic, but it is almost impossible to make such a game with fully realistic people, it's easier to make fun stories when they aren't.
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Was travelling so I couldn't reply to this, but you've put it better than even I personally could or would. And when it comes to a lot of ''books'', you're there to put yourself in the shoes of particular character. Not be given an empty character that is bland like soup without salt.
If this doesn't contain my writing, then it is worthless. I can understand some people dislike it, but it is what it is. Not here to please everyone nor I intend to do so. Some enjoy it, some don't. It is for some, and it isn't for some. Simple as that.
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> MC: I have many vices. but lust is not one of them
> In fact I really look down on sexual acts
> Mind controlled this cute inn keeper...
> I am not gonna touch her though.
> optionally can kill her.
> Recruit wicked mercenary.
> She asks you to hammer her.
> Don't try teasing me, I can tell you are a virgin
> Also no thanks. I am not into the whole sex thing
Does MC ever have his balls drop and start actually fucking women?
As far as I can tell MC is just an edgy asexual.
> In fact I really look down on sexual acts
> Mind controlled this cute inn keeper...
> I am not gonna touch her though.
> optionally can kill her.
> Recruit wicked mercenary.
> She asks you to hammer her.
> Don't try teasing me, I can tell you are a virgin
> Also no thanks. I am not into the whole sex thing
Does MC ever have his balls drop and start actually fucking women?
As far as I can tell MC is just an edgy asexual.
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Rose looks really old. Her face is full of old person wrinkles (forehead, around eyes, to left and right of nose. etc).
And her hair looks old woman gray instead of platinum blonde.
Her body looks young, but her face looks very old.
And her hair looks old woman gray instead of platinum blonde.
Her body looks young, but her face looks very old.
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