Just finished .8 & ill say there was more content than I originally estimated there would be ....but as soon as I saw
I knew right there the end point would be before that happened, which is a natural cliffhanger point, well done there
I have to say when I came across the 'cursed paragraph' spoken by red/pink that has so many fragile ego's bruised I literally said out loud 'that's what all the fuss is about ?'
.....SMH.......but whatever lol
Overall I'm enjoying this as much as I did originally, which was quite a bit, I Love the way the vampire girls speak & how it organically lends to the comedy aspect of the dialogue, keep up the great work!!