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This. MC, the lawyer's reactions and justifications for choices remain a meme. Parody tag, when?Victimhood sympathy points only really hold till the person in question becomes a perpetrator themselves.
Still think making choice for the characters is one of the worst copeout way out of the writing dead end they got themselves in. I don't want to be the one to chose how characters react to my choices, I want you the writer to do so, in a coherent and in line with characters set personalities. The 'relationships' still go from 2 to 11 and makes characters look worse going out than going in the storyline.Sis/Vicky
Pretty decent rewrite all things considered,putting the relationship talk in the forefront was the most workable solution.
Bisexuality and attraction still rather comes out of left field,especially for Sis and should have been hinted at starting far earlier in the narrative but overall its fine,circumvented the cheating angle well enough.
I agree, i also dislike that.View attachment 2606553
tf is this shit? choice with another character?
so practically the player decides if they cheat on the mc or not and if any player is not interested in lesbian they lose the threesome and even close the path with a LI... hilarious another dev who thinks that for a threesome the LI should be bisexual and forces the player with X content to get X content.
Trisha and the Mayor maybe? MC's sister/step/roommate and Vicky maybe? The Twins who whore themself out with the whole town and beyond?What exactly is the Netorare in this??
trisha is just casual sex, twins same and they aren't lis and they don't whore whole town and beyond and even if did then so what, vicky and sis is what players complain (so far haven't complained that sis wasn't virgin when she and mc had sex 1st time).Trisha and the Mayor maybe? MC's sister/step/roommate and Vicky maybe? The Twins who whore themself out with the whole town and beyond?
what do you call sex for cash?trisha is just casual sex, twins same and they aren't lis and they don't whore whole town and beyond and even if did then so what, vicky and sis is what players complain (so far haven't complained that sis wasn't virgin when she and mc had sex 1st time).
cash for sex: prostitution but as long as it's legal then who cares (outside religious groups etc).what do you call sex for cash?
So far you know that those 5 (Trisha,Ivy and Lily, Mc's whatever you choose and Vicky) fucked or fooled around with others then mc
And the twins talk about how they meet with "clients" and clients are in my book who payed for a certain service like they said sometimes for a dinner company etc. or sextrisha is just casual sex, twins same and they aren't lis and they don't whore whole town and beyond and even if did then so what, vicky and sis is what players complain (so far haven't complained that sis wasn't virgin when she and mc had sex 1st time).
at start they said that they fuck with 1 interesting guy and who gets to him 1st gets benefits. well daddy priest is ahole but many games need 1 (and this has 3).if they would do it for fun there are sluts I mean they obviously like it and now the Father Daddy wants the youngest also become a prostitute
I never said it bothers me that others fuck someone other then mc except the twins with the "escort" ring but I shut up now about thatcash for sex: prostitution but as long as it's legal then who cares (outside religious groups etc).
yes every1 except sc, yuki and connie had had sex before they met mc and trisha is doing it with mayor (mc knew that and got option to reject trisha's advances) and sis and vicky rekindled old flame and if plans to return to home with nic then who other girls fuck doesn't matter shit's worth.
and yet there lied about that and play there games with you (switching at the bathroom and you go always with the one you didn't choose in the barn)at start they said that they fuck with 1 interesting guy and who gets to him 1st gets benefits. well daddy priest is ahole but many games need 1 (and this has 3).
that they did since they changed mind that they both want mc.and yet there lied about that and play there games with you (switching at the bathroom and you go always with the one you didn't choose in the barn)
To be fair,he has become a lot more of an active paticipent in the rewrite.This. MC, the lawyer's reactions and justifications for choices remain a meme. Parody tag, when?![]()
Agreed but we are obviously past the point of good writing and in the salvage stage.Still think making choice for the characters is one of the worst copeout way out of the writing dead end they got themselves in. I don't want to be the one to chose how characters react to my choices, I want you the writer to do so, in a coherent and in line with characters set personalities. The 'relationships' still go from 2 to 11 and makes characters look worse going out than going in the storyline.
Considering that the absolute majority of "harem" VNs(even more so if you include official japanese products)are MC centric and utilize the traditional harem setup,MrDots reliance on an actual emotial connection between the different members does give the games a rare quality.I agree, i also dislike that.
But did you play DmD or Melody ? IIRC you can't get any threesome scenes, or relationships with more than 1 LI, without them going bi or getting romantically involved with each other if they are full LI's...
I already dread how their harem game will play out, if you are not into lesbian content...![]()
By the common definition?What exactly is the Netorare in this??
had to cause some didn't like it.Putting a choice on a third party in a pov narrative is indeed simply bad writing but there isnt all that much they could do at this point.
they only had to talk to him I don't think he would decline one twin but it isn't written like that and so be it I don't think mc or the twins shed a tear about the end of the casual relationshipthat they did since they changed mind that they both want mc.
well no but at least will have some good memories. also could have ended twins path several updates ago so their revelation of escorting wouldn't been cheating.they only had to talk to him I don't think he would decline one twin but it isn't written like that and so be it I don't think mc or the twins shed a tear about the end of the casual relationship