VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Changing Season [Ch.5] [Storyteller97]

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fanboi

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Apr 19, 2018
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Two big-titted MILFs and planned femdom - interested to see where that goes. I liked the description of being in a house of strong women, although I didn't get much of that in evidence during my playthrough. The preview with Lana and what Jane says about your reaction to not being in control seems promising though...
 

mrmcfappen

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Sep 10, 2019
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Very good start, this game has all the potential in the world.
tutorial may (or may not) help with clothing ladies with big breasts.
 
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St97

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Very good start, this game has all the potential in the world.
tutorial may (or may not) help with clothing ladies with big breasts.
Thanks for that review :D I have sky-high expectations for this game so stay tuned.
I'm aware of that tutorial but have a different approach in mind.
 
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Horst_Kevin

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So Far, so good.

Definetly not a Bad Start / Demo.

Some Pictures are a bit grainy (Restaurant Scene), some Backrounds could be better and Jennys Hair in the first few Renders.
Edit: Ok, you wrote that you did it on a 10yo PC. That kinda explains it.

But what bothers me most: Janes Face. I try to describe. It's like a cute/sweet Alien that needs Sleep and a litte bit MakeUp.
In some Renders like i it, in the next i want to scream. I can dig that it's not the typical Model-Mom like in most Games. Maybe she just needs a different Haircut. But still...
Also Jane and Lane need a PushUp Bra ...

Jenny is Cute.
Lily could be interesting too.


Story: Nothing new here so far.


I will keep an Eye on this.
 

St97

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Dec 10, 2019
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So Far, so good.

Definetly not a Bad Start / Demo.

Some Pictures are a bit grainy (Restaurant Scene), some Backrounds could be better and Jennys Hair in the first few Renders.
Edit: Ok, you wrote that you did it on a 10yo PC. That kinda explains it.

But what bothers me most: Janes Face. I try to describe. It's like a cute/sweet Alien that needs Sleep and a litte bit MakeUp.
In some Renders like i it, in the next i want to scream. I can dig that it's not the typical Model-Mom like in most Games. Maybe she just needs a different Haircut. But still...
Also Jane and Lane need a PushUp Bra ...

Jenny is Cute.
Lily could be interesting too.


Story: Nothing new here so far.


I will keep an Eye on this.
Thanks for playing. I'll be fixing/changing many of the things you mentioned in your review. Stay tuned.
 
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St97

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As far as looks go it could use a little refinment here and there.

-I disagree generally with people saying that there's a problem with Jane. I think she has a pretty good au naturel milf look going on and frankly I'm sorta tired of the "landladies" with bodies that put 90% of models to shame and whose only signs of age is slight wrinkling on the face.
-Dialogue is decently written, nothing to blow me away but it was pleasant and believable.
-As long as in the future ntr is avoidable then I'm good. The whole scene with your dad banging jane is about as close to the line of ntr as I can get. Of course it's your dad's girlfriend... but the first chapter already rapidly has her as a developing love interest. It'll be fine to have ntr as a path, but IMO it should be totally avoidable.

Overall I'm excited to see where this project goes!
Thanks for the review :) I appreciate what you said about Jane, but I think you'll like the updates I've given her for the next release, which (barring unforeseen circumstances) should be dropping later this month.
 

ThunderRob

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:eek: typical Canadian city...oh happiness..a smutty perv game set in my home and native land..best game 10/10 Oscar worthy #1 dev free hype for life!!!
Jane's new model is a massive improvement..she still needs a healthy dose of Extra Strength Clear Eyes(tm) but its not scream inducing anymore :p
 
4.10 star(s) 27 Votes