Ren'Py Abandoned The DeLuca Family [Season 1] [HopesGaming]

[Mortarion]

HopesGaming

Now that I've finished the current version of the game, I have a little rant to make. It's about the H-scene with Eiza:

I personally found the scene too rushed. Eiza is standing in front of the MC in full costume and from one moment to the next she is lying in bed like God made her. Please don't get me wrong, but it reminded me of one of the old (bad) porn movies from the 80s. Something like "How much does it cost to repair the car?! Bend over slut and take it in your mouth! ok *suck*".

The transition could have been written better to make it more erotic, with some supporting render. If this is - understandably - too much effort for you, just leave out the animation. A good and cleanly written scene is much more erotic than any form of animation. I'm sure I don't need to tell you how to write such a scene, you've already proven that more than adequately in Vinyasa, Massage the Actor and A Soldiers Sacrifice. Hell, even Town Time had more eroticism in that one kiss than all the sex with Eiza.

Take your time, write the scenes carefully and don't get rushed because "WTF, still no sex?!" Please don't try to ride the animation train by hook or by crook, animations are rarely worth the effort it takes to create them, and completely unnecessary in h-scenes. Look at the animations in Summer's Gone, ok there is no intercourse yet, but there the animations are beautifully woven into the narrative.

Maybe I'm just the only one here who feels that way, but I just wanted to get that off my chest.

Spoiler: Some kind of messed up script in the last mission?

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[HopesGaming]

HopesGaming I am replaying the game and did things in different order. Could I suggest putting the blizzard princess (isabel) happen only after my name is luna? there are many things that happen in this chapter that I feel are lost if you can do them before that (not simply things that happen in my name is luna, but given those other things, as Joey, appear in parts that are necessary for my name is luna that restriction is enough) i think that makes way more sense.

Nice find. Will look into it.

HopesGaming

Now that I've finished the current version of the game, I have a little rant to make. It's about the H-scene with Eiza:

I personally found the scene too rushed. Eiza is standing in front of the MC in full costume and from one moment to the next she is lying in bed like God made her. Please don't get me wrong, but it reminded me of one of the old (bad) porn movies from the 80s. Something like "How much does it cost to repair the car?! Bend over slut and take it in your mouth! ok *suck*".

The transition could have been written better to make it more erotic, with some supporting render. If this is - understandably - too much effort for you, just leave out the animation. A good and cleanly written scene is much more erotic than any form of animation. I'm sure I don't need to tell you how to write such a scene, you've already proven that more than adequately in Vinyasa, Massage the Actor and A Soldiers Sacrifice. Hell, even Town Time had more eroticism in that one kiss than all the sex with Eiza.

Take your time, write the scenes carefully and don't get rushed because "WTF, still no sex?!" Please don't try to ride the animation train by hook or by crook, animations are rarely worth the effort it takes to create them, and completely unnecessary in h-scenes. Look at the animations in Summer's Gone, ok there is no intercourse yet, but there the animations are beautifully woven into the narrative.

Maybe I'm just the only one here who feels that way, but I just wanted to get that off my chest.

Spoiler: Some kind of messed up script in the last mission?

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Thank ya for the feedback. Tho, to make stuff clear - I didn't rush and especially not due to the sex crazed people.
I felt it was fitting as she was a side character and didn't want to make her feel like an important LI.

Now, some questions:

1) Who did the Chibi characters design? They look sooooooooo good. I'm guessing when we get Cordia update, we'll be getting her Chibi design as well. Any chance we'll see more of them? Eiza? Caterina? Amita? Amata? Wilfred? Antonio? Serpent? etc?

2) So we currently have Chibi Isabel as one of Special renders. Will other girls Chibi designs also be Special Render rewards in the future?

3) Are we gonna find out

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4) Any chance we can sell our old, obsolete equipment back to the shop rather than just discarding them? My guess is, with higher ranked contracts, shops will have higher priced equipment also. While we're likely to have increase in income with Promotion and other events as well, I actually think it might be great if shops can buy our old equipment back at second hand price (like 70% or 80% of original purchase price).
It would fit with MC's in-game personality too, with how he reacts to expensive things.

5) (Not sure whether you can say anything about this, but) will we get to visit Isabel's former workplace "The Daring Flamingo" a bar of the underworld (possibly for Isabel's Netori or even Friendship path, to dig more into Antonio's secret life)?

6) In Antonio's bio, it says he dislikes the Profaci Family. Will we find out why in a later arc?

7) So far, I have gotten every single Special Render except Milky Luna. Is that Render not available yet in this update?

1) That was an artist from fiverr

2) Yup, that is the plan.

3) That is the plan, yup.

4) Hmm.. It would make sense with MC's personality as you said, but may break the balance. Will look into it to see how well it be.

5) Can't say much about this part sadly.

7) Mistake from my side. Wasn't supposed to be in.

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

Nice find. Will look into it.



Thank ya for the feedback. Tho, to make stuff clear - I didn't rush and especially not due to the sex crazed people.
I felt it was fitting as she was a side character and didn't want to make her feel like an important LI.




1) That was an artist from fiverr

2) Yup, that is the plan.

3) That is the plan, yup.

4) Hmm.. It would make sense with MC's personality as you said, but may break the balance. Will look into it to see how well it be.

5) Can't say much about this part sadly.

7) Mistake from my side. Wasn't supposed to be in.

boss I have a question will I have the opportunity to go on more romantic dates with Luna in the future

 

[JJJ84]

Put the last part from my post here into your collection.

whichone i have reported your post, that contains the guide for the contracts, with the request to put the link into the startpost.

You mean this post?

https://f95zone.to/threads/the-deluca-family-v0-07-1-hopesgaming.15459/page-885#post-5557398

I was thinking of adding yours (as well as Ayhsel's My name is Luna should really be one of prerequisites of Isabel's The Blizard Princess event), but it seems Hopes has started answering people's questions combing through everyone's questions and everything.
So I think Hopes will definitely get around to your post (if he somehow misses it, I'll try asking him)

Regardless, I added your question into my post as well.

So I'm sure he'll answer your question as well - by the way nice find. The exact thing happened to me where Luna's Femme Fatale event happened even though I completely forgot to speak to Wilfred after the Soldato promotion event with Blackie (that leads to collecting the Soldato package at the park with Luna).

You can request to put the link into the starpost? Been in f95 for quite a while now, but I still didn't know about that. Actually the existence of starpost itself even sounds so foreign ( at myself lol).

 

[HopesGaming]

boss I have a question will I have the opportunity to go on more romantic dates with Luna in the future

Yea

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

Yea

best leader ever


best leader ever

I am I need a minute

 

[Excalibur]

Hi Skataaaaa, here is my save.

Excalibur

 

[JJJ84]

Nice find. Will look into it.



Thank ya for the feedback. Tho, to make stuff clear - I didn't rush and especially not due to the sex crazed people.
I felt it was fitting as she was a side character and didn't want to make her feel like an important LI.




1) That was an artist from fiverr

2) Yup, that is the plan.

3) That is the plan, yup.

4) Hmm.. It would make sense with MC's personality as you said, but may break the balance. Will look into it to see how well it be.

5) Can't say much about this part sadly.

7) Mistake from my side. Wasn't supposed to be in.

Hey Hopes following post (link) is something that you might want to take a look when you have the time.
Tried to make a comprehensive list of stuff that is mentioned by several people:

https://f95zone.to/threads/the-deluca-family-v0-07-1-hopesgaming.15459/post-5557398

 

[c3p0]

Hey Hopes following post (link) is something that you might want to take a look when you have the time.
Tried to make a comprehensive list of stuff that is mentioned by several people:

https://f95zone.to/threads/the-deluca-family-v0-07-1-hopesgaming.15459/page-885#post-5557398

You should change your link. It has the page info in it and not everyone use the same settings. Use this one
https://f95zone.to/threads/the-deluca-family-v0-07-1-hopesgaming.15459/post-5557398
Also same goes for the links in the linked post.

For the future you can go to the post number and then with right click save the link (at least in Firefox).

 

[Tony_AG]

any chance the contract mission get rendered? or it stay text only

 

[Cartageno]

any chance the contract mission get rendered? or it stay text only

Fully rendered: probably not. But there's a huge campaign to get some key scenes rendered

 

[Saipan]

Who knows if there will be some flirtation/scene with Lilianna, kiss her during the contract he didn't mind

 

[JJJ84]

You should change your link. It has the page info in it and not everyone use the same settings. Use this one
https://f95zone.to/threads/the-deluca-family-v0-07-1-hopesgaming.15459/post-5557398
Also same goes for the links in the linked post.

For the future you can go to the post number and then with right click save the link (at least in Firefox).

Huh, that's odd. Does it not go to the exact post when you click on the link? I just clicked on the time the post was made and copied and pasted the link on the website search bar.

Hold on, let me try something.

 

[Niv-Mizzet the Firemind]

Hi Skataaaaa, here is my save.

Excalibur

Something's really fucked up with your save. It allowed me to rollback during the painter contract and it showed Wilfred on the background of said contract, allowing me to interact with him. That doesn't happen with my saves.

Do you use any mods or the console? Or did you load a save from the previous version of the game? In any case, the game didn't see you as having finished "the contract", the first side story, for whatever reason and wouldn't allow me to start it, so you couldn't do the promotion event. It's now fixed on the second page, second position of the saves. Remember to remove the random numbers and the "_" from the filename before you put it in the saves folder.

 

[Cartageno]

Huh, that's odd. Does it not go to the exact post when you click on the link? I just clicked on the time the post was made and copied and pasted the link on the website search bar.

This does have me scratching my head a little bit.
Currently I'm using Chrome.

I think what the young Sir is referring to is that Sir can personalize Sir's settings. As an example the number of posts displayed on one page. So if Sir posts a link to page 500 with Sir's 20 post/page setting, it will not be on page 500 with some other Sir using the 50 post/page setting (it would probably be on page 200 then), then the respective post number cannot be found, and any Sir clicking on the link would be stranded atop the page far away from land.

 

[JJJ84]

You should change your link. It has the page info in it and not everyone use the same settings. Use this one
https://f95zone.to/threads/the-deluca-family-v0-07-1-hopesgaming.15459/post-5557398
Also same goes for the links in the linked post.

For the future you can go to the post number and then with right click save the link (at least in Firefox).

I tried changing it. How does it look now?

 

[JJJ84]

I think what the young Sir is referring to is that Sir can personalize Sir's settings. As an example the number of posts displayed on one page. So if Sir posts a link to page 500 with Sir's 20 post/page setting, it will not be on page 500 with some other Sir using the 50 post/page setting (it would probably be on page 200 then), then the respective post number cannot be found, and any Sir clicking on the link would be stranded atop the page far away from land.

How do we personalize the settings? I changed my links to the posts by manually deleting page number before the post number in each link, but whenever I click on the time the post was made, in the web address search bar, the link always seems to have the page number on it for some reason.

Would be good to know how to extract the link without the page number for future uses (currently using Chrome).

 

[Cartageno]

How do we personalize the settings? I changed my links to the posts by manually deleting page number before the post number in each link, but whenever I click on the time the post was made, in the web address search bar, the link always seems to have the page number on it for some reason.

Would be good to know how to extract the link without the page number for future uses (currently using Chrome).

Unfortunately I do not know how to avoid the page number except for manually removing it, but Sir can change said preferences, if Sir clicks on Sir's name under the search bar, and chooses "preferences". The number of posts per page is approximately 1/4th to 1/3rd the way down.

 

[c3p0]

How do we personalize the settings? I changed my links to the posts by manually deleting page number before the post number in each link, but whenever I click on the time the post was made, in the web address search bar, the link always seems to have the page number on it for some reason.

Would be good to know how to extract the link without the page number for future uses (currently using Chrome).

What our good Cartageno said is spot on. You can change the post per page under your account/settings/preferences to 20, 40, 60 or 100 per page.

If you copy the link form the post (where the number is) the link don't have a page number in it.


Or you can manually removed them. Either with single click on the link during writting post and then select edit link and edit it or by toggle BBcode off and edit it there and toogle BBcode on again after it.

Your link here:
https://f95zone.to/threads/the-deluca-family-v0-07-1-hopesgaming.15459/post-5555860
https://f95zone.to/threads/the-deluca-family-v0-07-1-hopesgaming.15459/post-5560633

 

[JJJ84]

Unfortunately I do not know how to avoid the page number except for manually removing it, but Sir can change said preferences, if Sir clicks on Sir's name under the search bar, and chooses "preferences". The number of posts per page is approximately 1/4th to 1/3rd the way down.

What our good Cartageno said is spot on. You can change the post per page under your account/settings/preferences to 20, 40, 60 or 100 per page.

If you copy the link form the post (where the number is) the link don't have a page number in it.
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Or you can manually removed them. Either with single click on the link during writting post and then select edit link and edit it or by toggle BBcode off and edit it there and toogle BBcode on again after it.

Your link here:
https://f95zone.to/threads/the-deluca-family-v0-07-1-hopesgaming.15459/post-5555860
https://f95zone.to/threads/the-deluca-family-v0-07-1-hopesgaming.15459/post-5560633

What our good Cartageno said is spot on. You can change the post per page under your account/settings/preferences to 20, 40, 60 or 100 per page.

If you copy the link form the post (where the number is) the link don't have a page number in it.
View attachment 1144294

Or you can manually removed them. Either with single click on the link during writting post and then select edit link and edit it or by toggle BBcode off and edit it there and toogle BBcode on again after it.

Your link here:
https://f95zone.to/threads/the-deluca-family-v0-07-1-hopesgaming.15459/post-5555860
https://f95zone.to/threads/the-deluca-family-v0-07-1-hopesgaming.15459/post-5560633

Ahh, yes.

When I right click the post number, it has "copy link address." and that way works.
Got it 100%.

Thanks to you both!