Ren'Py Abandoned The Fox Goddess's Village Rework [v0.13a] [Master Hyo]

[Moonis]

This seems promising. Girls are pretty and plot is interesting. I enjoyed it, though days were too empty. I'd like to see more conversations or events during the days. Those were so short.

While I played this I took notes of the spelling errors I found. There were couple sentences more, that could have be written somewhat differently, but as I'm not native english speaker either, I left them out. I suggest that creator gets a dictionary and checks correct spelling if he's not quite sure.

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Some errors:

If you visit shop again, you'll always get message from Mei asking money. That should be one time only.
And in my playthrough I got shop visit where Mei bought nipple clips when I had already seen the event with girls wearing them twice, so timeline could be little better.

When Mei says "I'm joking idiot. You are great. Thanks for being here!" there's two images of her in different clothes.

Anyway, keep up working on this. I have great hopes for this.

 

[Hyohyo]

This seems promising. Girls are pretty and plot is interesting. I enjoyed it, though days were too empty. I'd like to see more conversations or events during the days. Those were so short.

While I played this I took notes of the spelling errors I found. There were couple sentences more, that could have be written somewhat differently, but as I'm not native english speaker either, I left them out. I suggest that creator gets a dictionary and checks correct spelling if he's not quite sure.

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Some errors:

If you visit shop again, you'll always get message from Mei asking money. That should be one time only.
And in my playthrough I got shop visit where Mei bought nipple clips when I had already seen the event with girls wearing them twice, so timeline could be little better.

When Mei says "I'm joking idiot. You are great. Thanks for being here!" there's two images of her in different clothes.

Anyway, keep up working on this. I have great hopes for this.

I'm actually currently working on a lot of what you have mentioned. I have more or less completely reworked the gameplay of the first few days and I'm currently adding more events to fill the days until saturday.

 

[applepie68]

Is it just me or is the background for the third image from Love Money and Rock N Roll?

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

I hope everything is coming along well for you, Hyohyo. I'm sure you're busy working on the game when you can. I'm looking forward to the next update whenever you manage to finish it. I know this type of work is extremely time consuming. I like where you've taken the story so far and am intrigued by the fox god itself, the significance of the tattoos on the girls, etc. You definitely have an interesting, creative story so far.

 

[gumba]

The story of the game is in my opinion great, the art too. Thanks you very much for your work Hyohyo.
I'm hoping for an upate too

 

[Lost gamer]

Any update coming?

 

[Emelex]

Being a perfectionist, I corrected several spelling errors in the game script file:

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

Being a perfectionalist, I corrected several spelling errors in the game script file:

And by "perfectionalist", I assume you mean "perfectionist"?

 

[Cirro84]

Is it worth a run? Story seems interesting so far from what I read.

Normally a scientist has a 'no humbug' approach to research work. Can become a good counterpart to the 'fox goddess' (I had read fox girl so I assume a goddess) and strange rituals in the plot. Sober rationality versus superstition.
There is place for fun encounters too, scientist needs to be convinced that things beyond his horizon of thought do exist. Can end badly for him (at least temporarily). Don't you mess with the goddess. ^^

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

Is it worth a run? Story seems interesting so far from what I read.

Normally a scientist has a 'no humbug' approach to research work. Can become a good counterpart to the 'fox goddess' (I had read fox girl so I assume a goddess) and strange rituals in the plot. Sober rationality versus superstition.
There is place for fun encounters too, scientist needs to be convinced that things beyond his horizon of thought do exist. Can end badly for him (at least temporarily). Don't you mess with the goddess. ^^

I had fun running through it personally. It's fairly short, ofc, because it's a first release (plus a couple of short bug fix releases). For some people, that disqualifies it from being playable yet, so I leave that to your discretion. It's cute and a little silly, which is something I quite enjoy. I also like the conflict that you mentioned: reason vs. superstition. It's an interesting premise and could turn out to be a very well-made game.

Master Hyo is new to coding I guess, which may explain the silence since the latest update. Sometimes you have to put your head down and eliminate distractions to make progress. If you let it be, F95 can def. become a distraction.

 

[Cirro84]

tyvm for your advice. You're sb I'd trust with pov comments. *sigh* Well, I got burnt with 'first releases' and like to give the dev some time, but I have that particular trembling in my fingers when I'm looking at these pics. You know what I mean... I very much like what I see.
The story may still develop, more content be added (fetishes etc.), who knows where this is going. But there's hoping the two girls coming next will also have some character depth and will be fun to interact with. A 'lonely village' setting is sth more realistic than the usual 'big city' games with hardly any inhabitants around. I'm being brave and going to risk it.

And noo, F95zone being a distraction, really?? Okay maybe a little. But there's inspiration too, cookie. I remember Oni dev (doing a Rogue trainer) was fighting with his game, being more an artist than coder. It made slow progress but that's alright.
Is why I hope Hyo does know to set priorities, seems the dev is on a good way right from the start. Better small and beautiful than high hopes and promises, which turns out too much to deliver for a first time project. :/ I'd rather be optimistic. Don't like to see another 'abandoned' in a title.

Wishing the dev the best, good luck with your game! Keep us updated pls!

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

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tyvm for your advice. You're sb I'd trust with pov comments. *sigh* Well, I got burnt with 'first releases' and like to give the dev some time, but I have that particular trembling in my fingers when I'm looking at these pics. You know what I mean... I very much like what I see.
The story may still develop, more content be added (fetishes etc.), who knows where this is going. But there's hoping the two girls coming next will also have some character depth and will be fun to interact with. A 'lonely village' setting is sth more realistic than the usual 'big city' games with hardly any inhabitants around. I'm being brave and going to risk it.

And noo, F95zone being a distraction, really?? Okay maybe a little. But there's inspiration too, cookie. I remember Oni dev (doing a Rogue trainer) was fighting with his game, being more an artist than coder. It made slow progress but that's alright.
Is why I hope Hyo does know to set priorities, seems the dev is on a good way right from the start. Better small and beautiful than high hopes and promises, which turns out too much to deliver for a first time project. :/ I'd rather be optimistic. Don't like to see another 'abandoned' in a title.

Wishing the dev the best, good luck with your game! Keep us updated pls!

I felt the same way seeing the girls and playing this short release. I hope you enjoy it! (And thx for the kind comment about me personally, btw.)

 

[Emelex]

And by "perfectionalist", I assume you mean "perfectionist"?

Yeah. Well now don't I feel silly. I swear my spell checking in the script file isn't as sloppy as I was there.

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

Yeah. Well now don't I feel silly. I swear my spell checking in the script file isn't as sloppy as I was there.

Totally teasing, ofc. I think it's cool that you were willing to put this together for Master Hyo. It could save him time later, for sure.

 

[Emelex]

Totally teasing, ofc. I think it's cool that you were willing to put this together for Master Hyo. It could save him time later, for sure.

Assuming there are future updates.

 

[Hyohyo]

To all the guys who actually still care. There is an update coming this evening (my internet is struggling with the upload, so It might take a while) Sorry, for the long wait, but I was busy with school and haven't been at home much in the last two months.

 

[Hyohyo]

Ok, update is done. Use Workupload or Gdrive. For some reason I couldn't upload on nofile, I will try again later

 

[Lost gamer]

To all the guys who actually still care. There is an update coming this evening (my internet is struggling with the upload, so It might take a while) Sorry, for the long wait, but I was busy with school and haven't been at home much in the last two months.

I like the start and want to see how it progresses. However I don't see 1.3 on Google or Workupload

 

[Emelex]

It's still called 0.1.2, but I checked the Google Drive file's contents and they constitute the latest version.

 

[Canto Forte]

I get dev is old .. like in the mister myiagy kind of old venue ... maybe even yoda old ...
Still ... version number to indicate actual moves forward in development ... understanding
how the world CHI or DAO or Win Chung works would me much appreciated.
Misdirection in this case is very inflammatory and damaging to ... master dev status ... is all!