- Dec 28, 2017
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OK, so I finished playing all the current content.
I like the kind of story you are narrating. It's quite interesting, and the historical parts add to its originality. I wonder what other historical figures we will have the pleasure to meet
Also I like how you pay attention to all the visual details. Art looks phenomenal, those transitions between renders or scenes are really cool, and you combine everything with fantastic music and sound effects.
However, I have two big complaints.
1) Spelling and grammar need a lot of revising. The text is absolutely chock-full of all sorts of mistakes. Some of them really hurt my eyes, like wrong verb conjugations and wrong use of auxiliary verbs. If English is your first language, you should take some time to go over everything. If it's not, you could find someone to check it for you. Many guys here on F95zone would definitely do it without asking for anything in exchange
2) You have the habit of skipping from one render or animation to the next one without giving us the time to enjoy them. It's really annoying and it ruins the fun, seriously. It's a pity because all scenes and animations look really good but you take them away from us in just 2 seconds. This is especially painful in sex scenes. For example, in the scene with Boudica the 4 animations take like 10 seconds to play one after the other without any possibility to stop and enjoy them. Besides, how did that scene end? We saw nothing at all and suddenly the legate is already outside the tent.
If you will accept some advice, I will give you 2 pieces:
- Firstly, stop skipping most renders automatically. Let us click or press our keyboard to turn to the following one. The same applies to animations: let us watch each of them in a loop so we can move to the next animation by clicking or pressing enter.
- Secondly, do not reduce all sex scenes to only animations. You do a good job providing a lot of hot renders of the moments before sex, while the characters are undressing and getting warmed up. Do the same during the actual sex. Between the animations, include renders from different angles, maybe with sexual dialogues that will make the scene much richer.
That's all. Overall it's consistent 4-star game but those flaws are really annoying and tarnish an otherwise very good project.
And thanks so much for Jenny. She's one of the hottest (if not the hottest) black girl I've seen in any of these games
I like the kind of story you are narrating. It's quite interesting, and the historical parts add to its originality. I wonder what other historical figures we will have the pleasure to meet
Also I like how you pay attention to all the visual details. Art looks phenomenal, those transitions between renders or scenes are really cool, and you combine everything with fantastic music and sound effects.
However, I have two big complaints.
1) Spelling and grammar need a lot of revising. The text is absolutely chock-full of all sorts of mistakes. Some of them really hurt my eyes, like wrong verb conjugations and wrong use of auxiliary verbs. If English is your first language, you should take some time to go over everything. If it's not, you could find someone to check it for you. Many guys here on F95zone would definitely do it without asking for anything in exchange
2) You have the habit of skipping from one render or animation to the next one without giving us the time to enjoy them. It's really annoying and it ruins the fun, seriously. It's a pity because all scenes and animations look really good but you take them away from us in just 2 seconds. This is especially painful in sex scenes. For example, in the scene with Boudica the 4 animations take like 10 seconds to play one after the other without any possibility to stop and enjoy them. Besides, how did that scene end? We saw nothing at all and suddenly the legate is already outside the tent.
If you will accept some advice, I will give you 2 pieces:
- Firstly, stop skipping most renders automatically. Let us click or press our keyboard to turn to the following one. The same applies to animations: let us watch each of them in a loop so we can move to the next animation by clicking or pressing enter.
- Secondly, do not reduce all sex scenes to only animations. You do a good job providing a lot of hot renders of the moments before sex, while the characters are undressing and getting warmed up. Do the same during the actual sex. Between the animations, include renders from different angles, maybe with sexual dialogues that will make the scene much richer.
That's all. Overall it's consistent 4-star game but those flaws are really annoying and tarnish an otherwise very good project.
And thanks so much for Jenny. She's one of the hottest (if not the hottest) black girl I've seen in any of these games
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