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Edit: As of Chapter 34...
Lisa does have a few scenes through out the story where she goes behind the MC's back, trying to upsurp the MC's position of power. That's the main thrust of the story, the battle for dominance between the MC and Lisa. Because of this, the story has veered from 'sharing' into the realm of NTR, hence the warning when you the start of the game. Not everyone's cup of tea I suppose... but as the dev, it's VNAdult's story to tell.
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Ok I finally finished playing both the old and new version.
Old Version
It wasn't that bad i like that you have options but the thing that I found stupid that you couldn't put the nephew in his place like just grab him by the hair and deepthrought and facefuck him to put him in he's place. The second is that if you choose the love option with your nice you get killed like WTF what the hell is that! That's so stupid like really. Other then that no complaint.
New Version
It was good but could be better.
1: Your supposed to be the Dominant one yet your niece is getting out of line and your not having any option to put her in her place or punishing her by showing her your the Dom and she's your slave.
2: The choices don't really make any sense. I feel like whatever you do don't matter because the option are not really affecting anything except the scene where your brother gets a bj from the trans, that's it.
3: The scene with the waitress again no real options, again your the Dom yet your the one sucking instead of making the waitress do the sucking.
4: The scene with Zack again your supposed to be the Dom yet your the one being submissive. Again no choices.
5: The scene at the pool with the nephew and boyfriend also no sense, like I said before your supposed to be the Dominant one yet you don't get the option to be one.
Your supposed to be the one making them you slave and putting them in there place yet your the one sucking and getting fucked instead of the one being in charge and fucking them.
If your going to make a game about being the master and making everyone around you, your slave you need to give the option to do so.
There is no options for being the Dom, no option to put people in their place, and he options you do have don't seem to matter.
Don't take it the wrong way, I'm not hating the game, it's the opposite.
I love the game, the story is good but its lacking in options.
It has soo much potential, and could be made into a great game.
I seriously love it. i played the whole game like three times choosing different choices but it was the same.
The nice is getting too ahead off herself the MC is allot older and has more experience and is supposed to be the Dom, yet the niece has her wrapped around her fingers.
Just wanted to give you my opinion to let you know you have a great game that i loved.
So keep at it, hope you improve it and take my suggestion. Sincerely Thank you @ VNAdults
Old Version
It wasn't that bad i like that you have options but the thing that I found stupid that you couldn't put the nephew in his place like just grab him by the hair and deepthrought and facefuck him to put him in he's place. The second is that if you choose the love option with your nice you get killed like WTF what the hell is that! That's so stupid like really. Other then that no complaint.
New Version
It was good but could be better.
1: Your supposed to be the Dominant one yet your niece is getting out of line and your not having any option to put her in her place or punishing her by showing her your the Dom and she's your slave.
2: The choices don't really make any sense. I feel like whatever you do don't matter because the option are not really affecting anything except the scene where your brother gets a bj from the trans, that's it.
3: The scene with the waitress again no real options, again your the Dom yet your the one sucking instead of making the waitress do the sucking.
4: The scene with Zack again your supposed to be the Dom yet your the one being submissive. Again no choices.
5: The scene at the pool with the nephew and boyfriend also no sense, like I said before your supposed to be the Dominant one yet you don't get the option to be one.
Your supposed to be the one making them you slave and putting them in there place yet your the one sucking and getting fucked instead of the one being in charge and fucking them.
If your going to make a game about being the master and making everyone around you, your slave you need to give the option to do so.
There is no options for being the Dom, no option to put people in their place, and he options you do have don't seem to matter.
Don't take it the wrong way, I'm not hating the game, it's the opposite.
I love the game, the story is good but its lacking in options.
It has soo much potential, and could be made into a great game.
I seriously love it. i played the whole game like three times choosing different choices but it was the same.
The nice is getting too ahead off herself the MC is allot older and has more experience and is supposed to be the Dom, yet the niece has her wrapped around her fingers.
Just wanted to give you my opinion to let you know you have a great game that i loved.
So keep at it, hope you improve it and take my suggestion. Sincerely Thank you @ VNAdults
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Thank you for the extensive comment, it is really appreciated!
It's true, maybe more options are missing, my idea was to make a kinetic novel, it's my first game for adults and my first game with renpy, my intention is to make and especially to finish my first game, this is allowing me to learn many things, including giving choices to the players.
With the passing of the chapters I am expanding these choices, they do not affect the main story, but it makes the game more enjoyable, also some choices in the last chapters of how to manage a sex scene, as you say, Sammy is the dominant one and she decides XD
I really appreciate your suggestions, to keep learning and improving with the next chapters, I'm learning more and more about renpy, this allows me to expand little by little the options and game experience.
I have seen in this forum many games that are abandoned for being too ambitious, I did not want to be one of them, so I go step by step always trying to improve.
Regarding the dominant/submissive roles, well, maybe Sammy, the dominant, also likes to be dominated if someone knows how to do it, right? The main story is finished in my head, with the passing of the chapters I hope it will be clear how each character thinks
Greetings, and again, thanks for the comment, it's appreciated that someone invests his time in exposing what he likes and what he doesn't like.
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I'm working on translating chapters 31-34 this weekend, and I'll fix those those.
Thanks!
Edit: Attached the updated script for chapters 1-30 for those that want it. Extract the 'english' folder into the 'game\tl' folder and let it overwrite the files there.
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It is in English by default
juicy butts damn this is a great game so hot!
The tags were obviously added after I made this post. I wouldn't have made the post otherwise. I was not rude or derogatory in my message so I'm not really sure why you have to be snarky in response.Maybe said people should learn to read at least the OP and the tags and stop bothering others in threads for games they supposedly don't enjoy.
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Yeah, unexpectedly for me Lisa gradually became very annoying, unfortunately. I would like to put her on a Samy-free diet until about the end of the novel as a punishment, but nothing can be done. Still kinda like the story so I'll have to endure it and see how it all ends.
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I reported both, if you click the COMPRESSED MAC it's actually the PC, it looks like you want PC so you're in luck
Thanks for the warning, it's fixedI reported both, if you click the COMPRESSED MAC it's actually the PC, it looks like you want PC so you're in luck