Just played the v0.4 and so far i liked the characters, the renders are well made(as well as the characters). I think the story is too linear right now and there is not much room for role playing though. From what i played,the game rails-roads you into a threesome route, with Sarah being flirty and touchy with Jenny almost from the beginning, which is weird giving that this is a orphan girl who just lost her parents and needs Sarah's help(not even the MC is that fast at preying on the girl),and Jenny makes passes on MC(and even Sarah later at the sauna) too fast, even though she is a more innocent character who never had sex or even drink before. In my opinion the game would benefit from having three basic routes:
1) A Threesome route(already in the works it seems).
2) A pure husband/father figure route(MC/Sarah).
3) A cheating husband(MC/Jenny).¹
Also the pacing is too fast, Jenny needs more time to develop her feelings for the MC,with the player having more time to hang out with her and take advantage of that to push for route 1) or 2). Her "corruption levels" also need some time to develop(she seems to be open for a threesome from the start).
As for Sarah,it is weird,in my opinion, the she is both oblivious to what is going on between MC and Jenny at the same time that she seems to be pushing for a threesome from the get go:
- She wants Jenny to sleep with them and even admits to touch Jenny at night;
- She doesn't find weird that you tell Jenny to knock their door when they are fucking to ask to sleep with them;
- She notice that Jenny is sitting closer to you at the sofa and don't even question the reason of it.
To me this needs to be reworked a little bit, with more dialog options where Sarah would question MC about the nature of his relationship with Jenny as well as maybe phishing MC to see how does he feel about the idea of sharing Jenny. For example,Sarah could notice the Jenny is sitting close to MC and ask him if he doesn't find that weird which prompts a 2 or 3 dialog options.
As for the renders,like i said before it's overall really well made but i notice that in some particular shots, the flat enviroment lighting makes Jenny look too pale and with dead eyes(but this is really me nitpicking).
Anyway,this is a relatively new game so i'm gonna wait to see what kind of updates will come in the future.
¹- The cheating route could brench into two(maybe more?) endings. One where the MC continues with Sarah but having an affair with Jenny and other where Sarah and MC break up and he dates Jenny.
