Some time ago, I said that was going to do a revision of the translation.
I decided to start from zero, there isn't much yet.
I will add a small summary of what I've finished, which I'll try to update it every two days.
If someone else post a full translation before I finish this, that would be great, but for now I will continue doing this.
IMPORTANT NOTE:
Now, because of how the Auto Translator works, people that is going to use this revised version,
will need to use the same Character Name as me, which in this case is "Soul".
This is because the MC's Name is used in many dialog lines, so if you use a different name than mine,
the Auto Translator will think is a different line than the one that is already translated (and revised),
so it will auto tranlate it again, which means that it will not have any correction done on it.
In case you don't want to use that name,
you'll have to open the text files and replace the word "Soul" with the name that you want to use.
Also, English is not my first language so there is bound to be many errors.
Edited: Decided to start a new game to check things up, and realized that there were many typo errors an some inconsistencys,
so I added a "v1" or "v2" label to all Story Events below to mark wich ones have been revised again to look for mistakes.
Also, given that my native language is Spanish, I thought that it could be a good idea to make an Spanish Version too.
What I've so far [ Updated 17 Sept ]:
Note: You could get spoiled with some stuff below, if you care about spoilers, caution.
Interface & Menus:
- Title Screen [Completed]
- Settings Screen [Completed]
- New Game Screen [Completed]
- Top Bar Icons [Completed]
- Characters Names [Almost Completed]
- Ingredients, Dishes, Drinks [Completed]
- Notifications [Half-Completed]
- Girl's Interaction Menu [Almost Completed]
- Cooking Menu [Almost Completed]
- Serving Food Menu [Half-Completed]
- Buying Menu [Completed]
- Map Menu [Completed]
- Sex Status Mirror [Half-Completed]
- Lewd Services Menu [Half-Completed]
- Managing Business Menu [Completed]
- Upgrading Menu [Almost Completed]
- Unlocking New Recipes [Completed]
- Loading Screen Tips [Almost Completed]
- Memories Recollection Menu [Almost Completed - Only Interface stuff, not events]
- Noble's Gambling Game [Half-Completed]
- More been revised...
Story Events [Everything below is completed]:
Prologue:
- [ v2 ] Marcus death & The Debt
Tutorial:
- [ v2 ] Intro, Serving a Drink & Moving to Next Turn
- [ v2 ] After Work Break & Action Points
- [ v2 ] Next Day & Serving Food
- [ v2 ] Types of Turns & Another Break
- [ v2 ] Buying Ingredients & Drinks
- [ v2 ] Roy Introduction & Cooking
- [ v2 ] Weekly Debt & Girl's Status Mirror
- [ v2 ] Lewd Services
- [ v1 ] Managing Employees
- [ v1 ] Upgrading
- [ v1 ] Learning New Recipes
- [ v1 ] Talk with Tommy about Roy intentions
- [ v1 ] Tommy talks about Help Section
- [ v1 ] Leonard comes to get his money + Tutorial End
Free Gameplay:
- [ v2 ] Weekly Interest Paid
- [ v1 ] Fail to pay the Weekly Interest 1
- [ v1 ] Tommy's Lewd Service Guidance for the girls start
- [ v2 ] About the Nobles Luck-based Game
- More been revised...
Mizuki Events
- [ v2 ] Mizuki Helps Roy to Cook 1
- [ v2 ] Mizuki Helps Roy to Cook 2
- [ v2 ] Mizuki Helps Roy to Cook 3
- [ v2 ] Mizuki Helps Roy to Cook 4
- [ v2 ] Mizuki & Roy Date 1
- [ v2 ] Mizuki & Roy Date 2
- [ v2 ] Mizuki & Roy Date 3
- [ v2 ] Mizuki Lewd Service - Undressing 1
- [ v2 ] Mizuki Lewd Service - Masturbation 1
- [ v1 ] Sending Mizuki to prostitute herself
- [ v2 ] Mizuki Prostitution Date 1
- More been revised...
Aoi Events
- [ v2 ] Aoi Helps Roy to Cook 1
- [ v2 ] Aoi Helps Roy to Cook 2
- [ v2 ] Aoi Helps Roy to Cook 3
- [ v1 ] Aoi Helps Roy to Cook 4
- [ v1 ] Aoi Helps Roy to Cook 5
- [ v2 ] Aoi & Roy Date 1
- [ v2 ] Aoi & Roy Date 2
- [ v2 ] Tommy trains Aoi 1
- [ v2 ] Aoi Lewd Service - Undressing 1
- [ v1 ] Aoi gets Drunk and Fucked 1
- More been revised...
I attached a .rar file wich contain a bunch of text files with the Edited Translation. NOTE: This is not completed yet.
For those that don't know where to put them: "Welcome to the Sexy Bar\AutoTranslator\Translation\en\Text"
You unzip (all the text files in the rar) and replace files in that folder.
But first delete all the previous text files, if you don't, they could mess with the new ones.
The following is a summary of what does each text file contain:
"_AutoGeneratedTranslations.txt" : Here's all the Interface & Menus + All the Pending Revision Stuff.
"Story Events.txt" : Here's all the Story Events.
"Mizuki Events.txt" : Here's all Mizuki Events.
"Aoi Events.txt" : Here's all Aoi Events.
(Eventually I will separate the UI/Interface translation from the "_AutoGeneratedTranslations.txt"
and make a dedicated text file for them, but only when I can be sure that I have finished them completely.)
Thanks to Darksshades I was able to get rid of the "Repetitons" files using a way better alternative that he explained.
Next, there are a bunch of "Repetitions" files. Some text lines have many, many variations, specifically those that involve stuff like money.
So I had to create dedicated text files only for those. Because they have hundreds of lines where only one number changes.
"Repetitions - Action Power.txt"
"Repetitions - Required Favorability.txt"
"Repetitions - Required Libido.txt"
"Repetitions - Required Money - 150.txt"
"Repetitions - Required Money - 500.txt"
"Repetitions - Required Money - 1000.txt"
I tried to label them to make them easy to navigate and edit, in case you want to customize them or make any correction.
When I finish this I plan to do a recheck on everything.