- Jun 15, 2022
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DPC is a good writer, so far there has been little drama that annoys me.Yes, I wasn't saying that Tommy finding out about the MC and Josy is unnecessary drama, but it is drama that won't last as long as some people think. When I said “unnecessary drama” I was referring to the dramas that DPC will create simply for the sake of vanity.
Example, after the drama between Bella and Jill is resolved, DPC will create another drama no matter how pathetic it is just so the MC won't be out of trouble. This rule will apply to all main girls, when we resolve a specific drama, another one will arise out of nowhere. And it will probably be as silly a drama as any.
Drama Sage/Jade is pretty good, rep "play stupid games - win stupid prizes"
Bella's story is the most mysterious, no complaints.
Maya's debt is too long a drama, I'm tired, it's time to close this case and move on.
Quinn's story with the restaurant and drugs is an unexploded bomb, keeps you on your toes and is well written.
Jill and her blackmail by Tybalt is annoying, Jill constantly behaves outside of her character and changes her lines.
And in general, this is how most literary works, TV shows, games, etc... Having solved one problem, new challenges always appear until the plot reaches its final denouement.